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Soaps1

@Soaps1

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Dekhney bethey thei hum humsafars

kahani thi jo dou logoun ki

imperfect thei ... magar aik sath hoon gey perfect

aisa hi kuch kaha tha

Excitement ki inteha thi

Love story ka chaska bhi

September me hua shuru

Tou we rubbed our hands in glee

Tab sey ab tak

Roaz dekhtey hien ye show

magar na love story hai

na koi love ...

kala jado hai, 2 rs ki mohabbat hai

kurti ka natak hai

anam ke chotey chotey kaprey hien

cockroach bhi hien,

Pregnant larki, uss ke baap ki dhamki bhi

maa ke naam pe dhabba nausheen bhi

Farah ki bakwas bhi ... sarfraz ki sickness bhi

hero ko villain bananey ki har koshish hai

heroine bichari ke character ki waat hai

Nahi hai tou bas love story nahi hai ...

Jo wada kiya tha

Two imperfect souls who are perfect together

Wohi nahi hai

Bohat si nautanki hai

Bas wo healing nahi ... jis ke liye hum thei excited

Yes i have no idea what i wrote ... i just feel 🥱 How difficult is it to show a story simply, beautifully and a little sensibly? Specially when you have the concept as well 🤔

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Ecrivain

@Ecrivain

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Ur title 🤣

The poem os awesomeness personified 👏

N for ur last line nadz ..common sense is not common ..and since story KE Liye dimaag Lagta hai ..toh woh market main nahi milta neither dr Khurana can manufacture it .,so unfortunately we are stuck with BUll shit 😆

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Pooja

@Ilin

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Wah that was a perfect shayari for this situation🤣 You are talented girl😃

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Sagi97

@Sagi97

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome Nadia Di.

Bilkul sach main yahi chahte hain hum. Ab samajh main aaya ki Sahir saab apne baal kyoun nahi kaatate.

He feels like pulling them out himself. Why waste on a barber?

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prettypri

@prettypri

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Wah wah nads...

I won't say the inspiration for this was dil ka dard because I know it is dimaag ka gussa😉.

They have lost the plot completely...we keep waiting for some sign that the two people who the story was supposed to be about will finally be in focus...but every time it gets worse!

The rehman Samaira track is like a jinx from which the story has never recovered..call it a curse even.

It keeps going round and round...are they not able to fond a solution themselves??

And now black magic...zeenat conscious and a mysterious killer have all made an appearance as well!🥱

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Soaps1

@Soaps1

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Yea lol and precap mey bhi roaz KA 🤡

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purva

@AnuPurva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

superb Nads...😆 keep writing girl..🤣 Tumhara ghussa, frustation pura dikhayi de raha hai..😆

suchhi me pathetic episode..👎🏼

before episode started we expected so much.. 😉 and episode me to pura tye tye phiss...😈 CV ne pura kabada kar diya..

how did Aarzo manage to change her cloaths.. she was sitting like she has almost recovered.. and started walking too..😆

then yeh black magic vala track..😲 so annoying

CV hum logo ne kuchh achhe SaAz moments mange the.. aapne woh to nahi diye ulata kuchh bakwas track chalu kiya..😒

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Soaps1

@Soaps1

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

As for arzoo recoveey kaise recover ma karti SAC ke hathoun la jadoo ... Remember joe? Uss ne kaha tha sahir sir ke hathoun mey jado hai he is a magician 🤣