||~Just a mere Dare~|| SanDhir SS *Part 5**30/12**COMPLETED* :x - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update...
Sherni is back..
un kamino k saath aisa hi kuch hona chahiye tha.. m happy now..
But please don't kill Randhir.. 😕
N yeah.. u needn't end dis so soon.. It has turned out 2 be interesting..
I'm not saying that it was boring earlier but it's just that the ri8 twist is here..
n Plz 4giv me 4 not commenting on d prev. part.. I read that only 2day... It was really painful.. Sanyu's condition was so pitiful.. but girl u Nailed it even there... that part was equally well written..
So dis comment of mine was 4 d last 2 updates..
girl.. U WERE BANG ON!
Though I don't wan't it 2 end so soon..
But still..
I jus hope this SS has a fair and justified ending...
Kudos 4 gr8 writing..
Update ASAP..
M waiting..
Regards #Purvi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85

Superb update...

Sherni is back..
un kamino k saath aisa hi kuch hona chahiye tha.. m happy now..
But please don't kill Randhir.. 😕
N yeah.. u needn't end dis so soon.. It has turned out 2 be interesting..
I'm not saying that it was boring earlier but it's just that the ri8 twist is here..
n Plz 4giv me 4 not commenting on d prev. part.. I read that only 2day... It was really painful.. Sanyu's condition was so pitiful.. but girl u Nailed it even there... that part was equally well written..
So dis comment of mine was 4 d last 2 updates..
girl.. U WERE BANG ON!
Though I don't wan't it 2 end so soon..
But still..
I jus hope this SS has a fair and justified ending...
Kudos 4 gr8 writing..
Update ASAP..
M waiting..
Regards #Purvi


aww...
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: daringdarlo

I read part 3 n 4 2geder.

For pt3
girl!!!! U described it so well.
Felt like crying 😭
Wat had she done to deserve all that.??????
Got Goosebumps after every lyn.
It was horrifying!!!!
How can any one be so cruel???

For pt4
dead rat!!!!! Eewww!!!
This was the worst after wat she did to rajveer.
But I found sahil's death the most painful...
Gud that she returned!!!!
No rapist shud b left to enjoy life..
Everyone shud meet the same fate..
Serves them ryt!!!

Waiting to see wat will happen to Randhir.

Update soon.

Thanks for the pm. 😊


Thanks ...

Glad u liked it
sure will be updating today :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyshfan

omg ...dis was sooo awesome ...so well written..👏 i luved all d previous parts .. ...d plot ..story is so fab n more over d way u hve written dear...frm when u hve started dis ss lyk everydae seriously i wait for yr updates i so much loved it ...i hve my boards cumin bt still i remove tym for dis...bt wat why r u ending such a fabulous story.?...😭 plz dnt...n forget abt d lyks...i knoe , u knoe dat ur work is fab dan why worried abt d lyks ...plz keep writin ...im here waitin eagerly...lookin forward for d nxt update...😊


Thanks..
Glad u liked it :)
Sure I'll be updating very soon...:))
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
ress
unress..
Kal more party ka din h yaad rkhna..

Finally Sandhir 2gether..
Jb Sanyu ne use bat se maara toh mere dimaag mein shock sa lg gya
Aih ki ho gya ldki ko khopri hiling jo RD ko maaring??
Pr baad mein toh I ws super happy..

Haaye RD ws flirting wid Ritika..
Flirting ka license mil gya h Mr Hot ko..😳
Aww..
kya re kitna jldi khatm ho gya???
Koi ni..
Waise bhi pehla kuch aisa h jismein tune kamchori nhi ki..
Kaamchor mata ki Jai _/\_

Waise mujhe bachche ka naam bohot achcha lga...Ayush...😉
Mera close frnd h ek Ayush class mein pdhta h mere..😉

Love ya loads..😆
Dixu..

Main bhi shock de rhi hun inni jldi unress kr k..🤣
Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending
So the bane finally bcme boon for our sandhir
Write nxt soon
N plz also give a look at my work
LOVING AN ANGEL
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res

Unresss ...

Hey this ss was amazing ...
i so loved wat sanyukta did wid those creeps ...
But i didn't get one thing that how did sanyukta survived ...

And thank u for updating so fast

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly out of all the things i wanna ask u
ARE YOU LEAVING IF ??
I mean forever or just for some days
Listen if ur leaving forever dont forget that
I too live in delhi and i will
Catch hold of u somehow or the other 😆
Btw awsm end :))
I wanted this to happen
Haww he got electric shocks 😭
This rajveer &/
I guess i should stop since i have abbused rajveer so much
From the past few days
So just wanna say this was a lovely ss
I enjoyed it thoroughly
But some parts rose my anger to an extreme level too
But its fine thats all bcz of the beautiful way u wrote
So umm ya keep writing
And dare u leave IF 😡🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the parts in one go and gal u are truly an amazing writer👏
Thank god she killed those b******.
Oh god seriously have no words to comment on this piece of writing...
And a perfect ending with a perfect family😊
Wish u luck...
love❤️
Harshita

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