FIRST KISS STORY SEASON 2 part 8,part9,epilogue posted@66 on 19.1.15 - Page 21

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nice part ... Liked it ...
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gr8 part,,
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awesome👏👏



maan ask sorry😉



maaneet r friends😊



geet is ready to help maan in studies😊



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Mind blowing update dear.
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Liking this version even more...
lovely parts sweta...
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I so so loved it ... lovely story !
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heyyyaaa

how r u all...

FIRST OF ALL MERRY CHRISTMAS TO U ALL..
SORRY FOR WISHING U LATE..

I HAD SOME ISSUES WITH NET 😡

ANYWAY I M BACK WITH THE UPDATES ILL BE UPDATING THIS STORY AND ISHQIYA

LOVE
SWETA
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PART 5

It was next day afternoon when Mk arrived at Geetika's room.

She was already ready with the notes...yesterday night before sleeping she went through his books..and got well acquainted with his syllabus..

Geetika explained Mk some basics notations used in chemistry

Mk tried hard to understand but couldn't.. geetika was now annoyed ..with his antics

" Mk if u don't wana study just blurt it out...dont pretend atleast.." geetika implied banging her hand on the desk..

Mk lurched away in fear and then made a cute face..

" i m trying geetu i..m seriously..its just that nothing goes in my brain.." he sighed heavily

Geetika rolled her eyes...and elucidated the entire thing once again..

This time luckily he inferred..some points..

They continued this for another hour...and then Mk spoke

" u knw...u r simply brilliant geetu...i mean inspite of being younger to me..u can very well explain me these things..which seem inexpiable to me.."

Geetika just smiled faintly..writing down the next question..and then perked her brows

" what do u mean...I can't do this??"

Mk chuckled.." noppe..i dint mean that..chill..I m complementing ur knowledge geetu nothing else..." he said giving up his hands in air..

"hmm.." she hummed shrugging her shoulders

Mk gazed her softly...Its been so many days he is trying hard to deject those feelings he feel around her..a bliss a pure bliss...being with her..listening to her complaints..her anger everything is just so serene..

His motto was just to be friends with her...because she needed one..and he just couldn't see her struggling..But day by day he was falling for her more..She dint even realize than when he is not around her...he is still her thoughts..they just don't fade away...

She was scribbling something..in her notebook when a wave of wind scattered her hair on her forehead..

As in trance he leaned closer and brushed those curls..back and tucked them..

Her body shuddered when his fingers brushed her forehead..and then her skin around her ear..

She blinked her eyes spinning his head to glimpse him

Her eyes..o lord...the pictures of her honey brown eyes were intact in his brain and heart...

Her one look ...and he found himself sinking in them

They both started each other..for a moment and the sound of her pencil tumbling down jolted them back to reality..

Both looked away...and Mk cursed his heart

She picked up the pencil..blinking her eyes trying to loose up ..

MK bit his lip..contemplating of something to bring all back to customary

" U knw...If my parents would have got some one like u..wow...the would be so pleased and contented..." He cribbed cutely...

Geetika laughed ..her laughter swelled his heart in pleasure..

A smile automatically appeared on his face...

She looked at him...and hit his shoulder

" study Mk.." She said in a firm strict tone..

"Oh.,.yaa" he rubbed his shoulder and both got back to their work..


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Mk has patience..ha... Rohan concluded

But u knw..i still wonder how he is able to control his feelings provided that he got some hots for her..then

Hmm...Obviously he did...it was much more than HOTS rohan...or else he wouldn't compliment her now and then..

In relationship...be it any one frinship or marriage its very essential to respect the other person..sometimes...that lays the foundation of trust...If u don't understand each other's aspects of life...then relationship isn't worth it..

Rohan nodded understanding where he was hinting


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It was almost a month and a half to their friendship..

Things were slow..but good enough for both of them..

One day it was geetika walking down the staircase...She casually looked at the notice board...and paused..

She smiled weakly...raising her hand to touch the glass...

She shook her head ans smiled sadly adjusting her glasses..strolled ahead..

This wasn't unnoticed by Mk..it was time of his next class...and thats when he spotted her gazing something longingly..

He paced towards...the notice board...

At night..

Mk was pacing in the corridor below her room..pondering his next step..

He couldn't see his geetu sadly staring at the ANNUAL BALL INVITATION

HE made up his mind to ask her out...he wished to be her date..though he wasn't sure...she would that she would allow him..

By this time..Mk was convinced about his feelings and emotions he had for geetika..But he dint wanted to go ahead with this..Without her acceptance..

cmon Mk braise ur self..u r gona ask the great geetika handa to be our date..uff.."

He patted his heart..smiling " nice choice ..yaa but woh toh sherni hai..kahi..mujhe kuch kar na de.."

" gussa toh uske naak pe rehta hai..umm..gussa bhi jhel lunga...woh kya khete hai..jab pyar kiya toh darna kya,..." he said widening his arms in typical flimly hero style..

He climbed up the pipe which was adjacent to her balcony..

He reached her balcony and hopped inside...

He frowned ..hearing a faint noise of indain music rumbling from her room..He peeped from the glass window...

His eye widen..and he rolled in laughter...

" choli k peeche kya hai..choli k peeche...dil hai mera..hayye" she chirped..

She was dancing crazily swaying her hips..to the lyrics..She mimicked madhuri's dance steps...

She had draped her dupatta around her waist..shaking her body to the tune..

Her chest heaving down replicating madhuri's step...and then moving showing her back...

Mk sniggered watching her expressions..which she threw while dancing...

Mk smiled widely...folding his hands to his chest...

" wow mk u were gona invite miss.dhinchak to the ball ha..yaha toh inka desi naach chalu hai.." he giggled..

" waise dance number to kafi peepy hai...dance toh banta hai.."

He smirked..unbolting the lock..and diving inside...

"whoohhh.." he cheered ..and joined..her dancing..imitating the male lyrics

Geetika grasped finding him in her room..she stared him stunned..

Mk continued his dance whilst geetika dipped her head in nervousness..

Mk turn to see her and found her lurking in a corner...sulking

He clasped her hand..and pulled her to him..

She raised her head gazing him..cutely

Mk giggled n raised her hand in the air doing a classic bhangra step..singing the male part

Geetika was still motionless..Mk winked at her..whistling.

She smiled..and chuckled wildly..Copying his steps..

Nearly 30 mins later..both crashed ,laying flat on bed..panting...and laughing

" i dint knw kit u gabbar k sath sath basanti bhi hai..geeetu.." Mk said in between his laughs..cutely pinching her cheek..

Geet knotted her brows pouting ...

" mai Indian hu..not like u ...and i too love madhuri she is my fav u knw..."

Mk chuckled...breathing normally...and..after a moment..

" waise i wana ask u something.." he muttered crossing his fingers..praying she says yes.

Geetika turned to glance him...he was still staring in front

" will go to the BALL with me...?" he finally blurted out sucking in his breath...and squeezing his eyes tight..

Almost 2 mins later...he heard her soft " yes"

His ears pricked her words...snapping his eyes open..he turned towards her..in disbelief

Her face was expressionless...but a tiny miny smile on her face..

Mk smiled widely silighly blushing...he wasn't aware of her feelings but his were crystal clear to him...

" waise m glad i u said yes...warna i thought i had ask permission from ur IF gang.." he said snorting

As their friendship developed he realized...she did have frnds..not in real world but in virtual one..

A big gang..of girls...which were more than frnds to her..She called them her soul sisters...

Geetika made a o shape face throwing the pillow on his face..

Mk dodged it and laughed..sticking his tongue out teasing her...The gabbar sherni got angry more...and then began their cute wrestling session..!!


PRECAP- BALL


guys i really hope u r liking this version coz this is gona be a bit long..m not planning this to end so sonn...

may be it will have 9-10 parts!!


love

sweta


Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome sweta...
just loved it...
geet explained maan chemistry
and aree wah maan babu sab samajh gaye chemistry mai😆
they both became close firends nice😃
wow rohan talking abt mk's patience..
geet want to go to ball
and maan came to know abt it...
till now he was ignoring his feelings but now some wht he is opening up...
wow geet dancing to madhuri's song..😳
maan watching her from window and
he joined her in dance and both dancing like crazy...
maan rehearsing to ask geet for ball dance..😆
wow geet agreed to go with maan for ball dance...
great update sweta...👏👏
eagerly waiting for th eball dance...
continue soon...

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