Ashlok Pic FF -'D for Desire '- Chp 6 Uptd 16/1/15 - Page 5

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Omg Deepa very romantic n hot beggining of A Romantic Day 😉 waiting to see what happen next 😃! Thanks for PM 😊.

will update by eod or tom.. Jhum..

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 4:

Deeps what a romantic update dear...

Its so beautifully written...

Ashlok are truly made for each other...

lovely couple...

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Thank u Sathya.. Indeed the hottest couple after Sanaya an Barun.. or Madhu and rishu..

DEEPA. ...loved each and every ...Romatic scenes...bed ..bathroom...Ashlok as Whole...anywhere anyhow...And ur ..pictures were A Perfect Pic...and BG...beautiful. ...was busy...so couldn't come soon...UR...post ...I need lots of time to savour completely. ...and then reply...love them ...Tfs.

I am sorry...again late response

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="4">I want you near me all the time.. I want you to apply soap and play with me like a kid in the water.. I want to splash water on ur face and see you jumping like a small kid .. jumping for the fear of the chill which spreads from the cold water.. </font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="4">I want to pull you for a kiss and press my lips against yours for a aggressive kiss so you shut ur mouth when you squeal like a kid ...</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="4">You will not come to the bath room ..I know.. but I will somehow lie to you .. asking give me bathrobe or soap or towel.. and will try to pacify you.. if you don't give in ..then .. I will be the villain .. </font></div>
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loved chap3 you are portraying shloks thoughts really well... loving his his inner desire for his cute lil more like a kid wifey... please continue... i could not comment before as my pc is out of order... now have to use mob and um hating this mob... 😡 ...

Nice work Deepa dear.❤️☺️.And the pics are awesome👍🏼

I cant take the piece of fabric u wear every
day .. I cant take the jewellery you adorn
urself on ur body every day.. I want you by
my side full time.. in the way when you
stepped into this world.. when u were just
born.


deepa... 👏 you are amazing writer ... and mi d reader too.. 😳

Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi

I cant take the piece of fabric u wear every
day .. I cant take the jewellery you adorn
urself on ur body every day.. I want you by
my side full time.. in the way when you
stepped into this world.. when u were just
born.


deepa... 👏 you are amazing writer ... and mi d reader too.. 😳

tHANK You dear for ur kind words..and this FF entire credit goes to you and ur enthu ..for making me think more deeper with new ideas.

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Nice work Deepa dear.❤️☺️.And the pics are awesome👍🏼

Thank you Naina.