Hospital bed ... A Sandhir os from the writer of Let's give it a chanc - Page 2

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome OS
Beautiful
Nice concept

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-Mrdodokk-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written...
Amazing piece of work...

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Sanyukta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Woow...

it was really amazing...

At the beginning, i was like- Oh my god...plz dont let sanyu die!!!

And then when it was somewhere down the line i ws like- Huh...thnk god she's fine...

And then whn i ws reading the last para i ws like- Haww...they r shoo shweeet!!!!!

And then whn i ws reading the LAST line i ws like- No! Not fair! The os is over...aw..she finished it there!

In short, u captured me with ur every line

U write reallly welll...way 2 go!!!

Keep it up

Love

Noopur

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shivangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome work..
Luvd every bit of it...

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RIDDSI

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Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful os

you are fab writer yaar

write more

they are so adorable

loved it

with love

RIDDHIMA

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Mohini

@Mahi2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow!!! Dear. 👏👏
So beautiful os. 😊
Lovely, emotional n touchy.

Sanyu's accident!!! 😲😕
Bt thnk god she ws saved!!! 😊

Rd ws so guilty n scared 4 her. 😕
Bt he iz so caring. 😊

Loely lovely lovely...
Really beautiful.

Love,
Mahi ❤️

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Prishi

@ArshaParsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

That was honestly super good..
It was so emotional ans the writing was so fab, I could feel their pain..
Keep Writing..
Too Good..
Luv
Prishi

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Manal

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow yaar super awesome 😊

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SimmyScribbles

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you so much everyone

I m so happy with your response

Being a newbie I can't reply all but thank you so so so much agn

Love u all...

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