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Posted: 9 years ago
Too good..update soon..Edited by Rubz1234 - 9 years ago
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DEAR,HEARTY CONGRATS FOR THE SUCCESSFUL COMPLETION OF FIFTY CHAPTERS IN A PLEASURABLE MANNER!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

After getting slapped by Zayne,Babli didn't react in the usual helpless naari way and had decided to fight back and teach her husband a lesson too.That part was awesome.
 
And this Zayne,has o taste his own medicine very soon.
 
Good,her friend Avinash is helping her in this MISSION.Let this not create more rifts In their already
damaged relationship.
 
I HAD REALLY LIKED THAT CUTE FIGHT OF RAGNA.Let's see ,what force is being appled on Kalpi by Raghav in the next update.
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 51

Avinash and Babli Sat on the sand And Discussed their Plan,Zayne Watched On Suspicious and wondered what both were Planning.
Babli-Great,I'll make that wannabe Idiot pay for trying to steal my husband and calling me Ugly!!
Avi smiled,Raghav watched Kalpi.
Raghav-So,You're Calm now??
Kalpi-why??
Raghav-Lets go on this Trip.
Kalpi watched Raghav
Kalpi-Why,why should we??
Raghav-Kalpi,Please I'm begging you.
Kalpi-I'll think about it
Raghav-Great,Now I don't have to tie you up and...
Kalpi watched Raghav shocked with her eyes widely open
Kalpi-What!
Raghav smiled and quickly left,Babli headed over by Arpita
Babli-Can i get you anything??
Arpita-Aww Billy,yes,Can you get A Soda for me??
Babli-Sure and It's Babli
Babli left and Arpita rolled her eyes.

By the changing room,Zayne watched a Closed door
Zayne-Whats in there??
Adi-I heard the Birds go in there.
Zayne-Why?? Thats stupid.
Adi-How's Babli??
Zayne watched him
Zayne-She's good,Hey I'm going.
Zayne left,Adi watched him 'Something Is up with these too"

Babli headed Over by Arpita with a soda,which she Intentionally throw on Arpita.
Babli-I'm so sorry Arpita
Arpita-It's a Brand swimsuit.
Babli-Come let Me carry you to the Changing Rooms
Babli carried Arpita to the changing room and led her to the birds in the room,Avinash locked the door and Arpita began screaming,Avi and Babli stood and laughed,then their saw Zayne comming both Hid,Everyone came with Zayne and Comforted Arpita,Babli and Avi came and Snickered,Zayne and Arpita noticed.
Arpita-Babli,Where were you??
Babli watched everyone and stuttered.
Babli-I left and went to the washroom.
Zayne watched Avinash and Babli angerily.
Zayne-You change  We'll be waiting by the car.
Everyone went by the car,Simran met Up with Babli and Avi
Babli-I'm going by the car I'll see you,And thanks for helping me,That Idiot's face was Priceless
Babli left
Simran-So you too made up??
Avi-Yeah I'm Moving on and I apologized to her
Arpita came out from changing and listened to their conversation
Simran-That you both Kissed.
Avi-I'm the kisser,she just didn't liked it,she's married,I passed my limits
Simran-It's good that you both Made up and Your kiss will always be a secret,And from Zayne if he found out,He would'nt spare you or Babli
Avi-I'm not afraid of him.
Simran-Lets go.
Avi and simran left,Arpita stood shocked and happy"Its seems these too were something and Now I'll tell Zayne there dirty little secret"Arpita smiled Evily

Everyone stood by the Cars.
Raghav-Babli you and the children will go with us.
Babli-Why can't I go with Zayne??
Zayne-I have A meeting,then I'm dropping Arpita home.
Babli was irritated
Babli-Fine,Go enjoy,Papa Lets go.
Zayne watched her.

On the Road,Babli and Raghav laughed at The Prank she did on Arpita,Kalpi watched them both and Thought"These too are so werid,Whats so funny in Torturing a Poor girl"
Babli-Aai,Why aren't you laughing??
Kalpi-It isn't funny Babli
Babli-It is,Papa did you see her face.
Raghav- I did it was ugly.
Raghav and babli laughed whole road back home.

In Zayne's Car
Zayne-I'm sorry about Babli she's Sometimes,diffcult
Arpita smiled
Arpita-It's okay,She's Pregnant and Moody
Zayne-But it doesn't give her the  right.
Arpita-Zayne I don't want to be out of place,But I heard something.
Zayne-What?
Arpita smirked
Arpita-I heard,Babli and Her Friend Avinash Kissed
Zayne stoped the car and watched Arpita
Zayne-What!!!You're lying.
Arpita-No,I heard Avinash talikng about it,I'm sorry.
Zayne started driving and remembered all babli and Avinash moments,Arpita smiled seeing Zayne's Anger.

At Singhaina Mansion,Everyone was were in their rooms.

In Kalpi and Raghav's Room,Kalpi watched Raghav.
Kalpi-Ya,What were you saying about tying me up??
Raghav watched her and smiled
Raghav- if you weren't comming with me,I was going to tie you up and dress you with the most beautiful dresses.
Kalpi-Crazy.
Raghav-So were going??
Kalpi-If I say yes you will stop Nagging me??
Raghav smiled and hugged Kalpi

In Babli and Zayne's Room,Babli watched Zayne who was quiet on his Cell.
Babli-Zayne,I'm sorry about Messing with Arpita.
Zayne watched her Angry,He walked up to her.
Zayne-Tell me No lies
Babli watched him
Babli-About what Zayne,I won't lie.
Zayne-Good let me tell you something.
Babli-What??
Zayne-I really Hate you Babli
Babli was Zayne sadly,He held her arm tightly
Zayne-You Kissed Avinash.
Babli shooked her head saying no
Babli-No I...
Zayne-Shut...Up
Babli watched Zayne Teary Eyed
Zayne-You kissed him,You let him Kiss you,and you didn't tell me.
Babli-Zayne I'm sorry,Please...
Zayne-I'm not staying here with you,I'm sleeping out,Tell your Parents that,I don't want to see your face.
Zayne Pushed babli back and left,Babli sat on the Bed and Cried.

4 Months Later
4 months Passed,Zayne and My Marriage were on Rocks,He would only,spend a few nights home,but he won't stay with me,or even look at me,He never asked about My check ups,Noting,He would only spend time with Arpita,But this Day was the day All our Lives changed because of Zayne's Mistake,The days where Zayne Tried to Win my heart all over again.

Everyone Rushed for work and school.
Babli-Aai,When will this baby Pop out?
Kalpi-Babli Relax,I'm going to Pack Your dad and I are going to Hawaii
Babli smiled happily
Babli-Hawaii?? wow I wish i could go
Kalpi watched her
Kalpi-Ya babli,you can't go,Your papa and I need to be with each other.
Babli watched her mother grossed out
Babli-These lines of love,Okay Aai go and Pack,I have to make a quick soup for Aashi,she's got the cold again.
Kalpi-Be careful in the kitchen.
Kalpi left,Babli was going to the Kitchen when she saw Zayne leaving,She quickly went by him.
Babli-Zayne.
Zayne stoped and watched her
Babli-Shall i make you breakfast?? I'm making soup for Aashi.
Zayne-I don't want anything.
Babli-Zayne Please listen to Me,It's been 4 months I'm sorry I didn't tell you.
Zayne-I don't want to hear you,I'm going.
Zayne was leaving.
Babli-You're going to Arpita.
Zayne walked up to babli,she looked up at him
Zayne-Yes!! Do you have A problem!!!
Zayne was leaving,babli clinged on to him holding his hands
Babli-Zayne,Please don't go,Please ,I love you,Our Annivsary is in 6 days please forgive me.
Aashi came out her room and watched her Parents,Babli kept pulling Zayne,Until he pushed her,then Left not looking back at babli,,Babli fell on the ground and hit both her head and Stomach,Babli began to bleed,Aashi Ran to her mother.
Aashi-Momma,Wake up,Why are you sleeping now! Momma
Aashi watched the Blood and Ran to her Grandparents.

In Kalpi's and Babli's Room
Raghav-Aashi whats wrong??
Aashi-Dada,Momma is on the floor.
Raghav and Kalpi watched her shocked.
Kalpi-What do you mean??
Aashi-Papa,Pushed Momma and Made her bleed.
Raghav and Kalpi Ran to Babli.

An Unconscious Babli Lied in a Pool of her blood,Raghav and Kalpi watched her shocked,Their rushed her to city Hospital,The whole Family were Present Waiting for the Doctors Response.
Raghav-Aashi,Beta tell me,what Happen??
Aashi-Can i Get a Ice Cream
Raghav-Aren't you sick??
Aashi-No,I'm fine
Raghav-Ok yes.
Aashi-Papa and Momma were Talking and Papa pushed momma back and she Fell.
Raghav-Okay.
Aashi-Dada is Momma okay??I really miss her.
Kalpi smiled and caress Aashi's Face
Kalpi-Chaahat,Carry Aashi for some Ice Cream
Chaahat left with Aashi,Raghav got up angry
Raghav-I'm going to kill him!!I'm going to shoot him.
Sammy held Raghav back.
Kalpi watched Raghav sadly.


Finished,Please tell me your thoughts,This is my last track and It's ending off in a few chapters this time๐Ÿ˜† hope you like and don't forget to hit like and comment๐Ÿ˜ƒ and my mistakes forgive me



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Posted: 9 years ago
me first .
 wonderful update dear.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
i just hate Zayne , he is a heartless jerk.
poor Babli, i feel bad for her.๐Ÿ˜”
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update dear...hope babli get well soon
Arpit create misunderstanding between them & zayne also not believed in babli
Update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
I hope Babli regain conscious soon
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Wonderful update dear hope babli and zayne misunderstandings will get sout out soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. Loved the prank played by Babli and Avi on Arpita she deserves it. Hope Babli is fine. Zayne needs lesson to be taught he gets angry by seeing Babli and Avi , won't he think what he is doing is not also not right how can he spend time with Arpita.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update.
i really hate zayne.
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Very emotional update.
 
That heartless monster was in so much anger and jealousy ,didn't even thinkabt her condition
and pushed her with such a force that made Babli to fall on the ground with a thud.
 
Thanks to her cute and sweet daughter Aashi,who smartly went to her grandparents and told them everything.
 
As per doc's advise,she shouldn't make her head to be hit with something.Since that had happened,will she slip into coma and what will happen to her child>>>>>>>>>>
 
SO MUCH TENSION IN THE HOSPITAL.PLS TRY TO GIVE ONE MORE UPDATE TODAY.