Kalpana's Love FF Last Chapter pg 92 - Page 52

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Posted: 10 years ago
Now zayne is regretting for his mistake & also realising how much he love babli😊...nice update dear
Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Good update.

As predicted by the doc,Babli had lost her memory and didn't remember Zayne.A nice punishment for husbands like him,for not trusting their wives and slapping and pushing them too.
Like a fueladded to the already burning fuel,Babli's kids as well Ragna are reminding her abt the incident and his unfaithfulness towards her.
Pls update soon to know the changing equation of Babli- Zayne's love and marriage???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update zayne deserve this for hurting bavku n t recognized the worth of her in his life
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
I feel kinda sad for Zayne but he deserve it
RagNa telling babli the trust was nice
I love Babli moments with her kids
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Zayne is getting what he deserves. I liked him but can't digest the fact that he actually pushed her , that too when she was pregnant with his child !
Liked that kids are reminding her of the incident. Hope Zayne learns his lessons now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 54
Babli watched Zayne,He kneeled down begging her not to forget him and to love him and that he was sorry,She watched him.
Babli-I'm Satisfied.
Zayne was confused,he looked up at her.
Babli-I am.
Zayne got up and watched her
Zayne-You're Satisfied?
Babli-Yep,I can't believe you Passed my little test,I thought you would've failed as you're a Stupid Man.
Zayne-What??? Test?? You were faking??
Babli watched him
Babli-No,I did lose my memory but,I regained it today after i saw my locket.
Zayne-You remember me.
Zayne hugged Babli tightly,while she pushed him away
Babli-Do you think I'm letting you off? You pushed me!
Zayne-I'm sorry,But Avi...
Babli-Why does Avinash always Have to come up in our Relationship?
Zayne-You're always with him,Talking and hugging.
Babli-He is my Bestfriend,But I choose you Zayne,I married you and loved only you!! Why is it a big deal if i spend time with My bestfriend!!
Zayne watched her sadly,Babli held his hands
Babli-I told you already,I won't break off my relationship with Avinash and if you ask me to choose I'll rather be lonely,But I love you Zayne,why don't you understand Babli choose Zayne and not Avinash.
Zayne-I promise i won't get in Avinash's way and I'm sorry,Can i hug you now,It's been a while
Zayne hugged Babli tightly,Everyone came In and saw this,Raghav pulled Zayne away from Babli.
Raghav-What are you doing,Hugging my Daughter.
Zayne-She's my wife.
Raghav-Get Out.
Zayne watched Babli
Babli-Papa,it's okay
Raghav and Kalpi watched Babli
Raghav-You said Papa??
Babli smiled while Raghav and Kalpi hugged her.
Paakhi-Babli someone wants to see you
Paakhi gently handed over babli's baby,Zayne and Babli both hugged and Kiss their baby.
Raghav and Kalpi pack their Bags
Babli-You're Leaving again?
Raghav-Yes,I'm sorry but Kalpi and I want to spend time with each other.
Zayne-We understand,Raghav Uncle.
Raghav watched Zayne.
Raghav-I'm not your uncle,It's Mr Singhaina.
Raghav and Kalpi left,Everyone watched on,while Aashi,Krish and Pari hugged their parents and kiss their Baby bother.

Babli's Voiceover-This is where it all ends,Zayne and I Live happily ever after
Zayne and Babli sat on the couch and watched their Children Play
While Avinash Finally forgot me And he Loved Simran
Avinash surpised Simran with a Date and confessed his love
Priya is Expecting again
At the Hospital,Arjun touched Priya stomach and kissed it
I think she'll have a girl
Adi Bhai and Bhabhi Finally have a Vacation Alone
Adi and Chaahat sat on the beach and enjoyed their time together
Aai and Papa are living in London
Raghav and Kalpi sat and had a english breakfast and fed each other
And I miss them,Papa never got to Like Zayne he made him Sign a paper stating if he hurt me again,I'll Divorce him
Raghav forced Zayne into signing,while he smiled
.While Zayne and I Named our Baby Siddarth,I'll call him Sidi for short and soon I'll hear "Mom don't call me that"


The End 😃

I Intended to Make this Longer but I decided not to drag on and end it today itself I made it the shortest I could,I wanted to end it off really quickly as i have my New FF comming out soon,I know its really short but I want to thank everyone who read this FF from first chapter till the end,It gives me the happiness that their's people who enjoy your work,This is my First FF and I learned alot from people and i want to say thanks and I also want to apologize for (1) I never made this story about RagNa (2) for Taking so long to uodate,Many know my Reasons,But I want to thank you from my heart,it's a sad good bye from Me in this FF.
Thank you.
-Aria


Edited by ariarai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its lovely update I appreciated the update fully those my ragna is little in it but lovely update
Really sad it ends but ur finishing is as it should have been the best
Now concentrate on ur next story
Awesome love babli zayne n her babies n not t forget ragna my craze
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it's lovely
waiting for ur's new ragna ff😃
Edited by ....neha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow superb ending and Babli VoiceOver it's nice.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful ending!!! Congrats on finishing your first story on RAGNA 👏 Waiting for the next one.

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