SUPER MODEL (AR ff) part 30(LAST) dated 11/10/2015 - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago
Its really entertaining update..
Specially arman condition..
Dheere 2he become good cooker...poor lover.
Love ridhima's outburst on arman..
Nikki n arman part was funny enjoyable..
Thanks alot dear for pm.
Keep rocking
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
bechare armaan khana banana pada
post next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsumm part..!!
Finally ..armaan ko pta chala toh ki usne kya kar diya..!!
Loved nikki and armaan's convo..!!
And finally riddhima confessed her love..!!
And the task she gave to armaan..was o funny..!!
bechara armaan...model nhi pr cook jarur bann gaya..!!
Loved the update.>! !
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
update na its been long time plz plz
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#AAYUU hope u like it.. kafi parts mere apko dedicated hote hai.. coz ap mujhe remind krvate ho bar bar.. in bar toh emotional blackmaling n dhamki hogyi.. n meghs n palak ap dono bhi isa sath de rahe ho..( n as usual maine edit nahi kia.. 😛)

Recap ridhima's karva chaut vrt.. Ridhima's confesion n armaan makes diner for ridhima..

Part 23 A

AR were siting on a couch watching tv.. Nt exactly watching they were just fliping channels..!!

R : armaan
A : hmm
R : tumhe kaise pta chala aj maine fst rakha hai.. Tum toh ld kr chale gye the..!!
A : niki ka cal aya tha mom ne rumhare lie koi parsal dia hai..
Wait a min.. Niki nahi mom ko kaise pta chala about ur fast..??
R : long story
A : im listening..
R : 3-4 days pehle i was thinking ki kaise ill tel u my fekings.. I heard muski talking ti her her mom.. Aunty use bol rahe to keep fast flr rahul as they are now engaged...
A : mom or niki kahan se aye... Im waiting..
R : ofo.. U are too impatent bta rahi hn..
A : sorry..
R : mujhe kuch khas pta nahi tha us fast ke bare main mom tb rakha krte the jb main bahut choti thu.. Toh main google kr rahi thi iske bafe main n niki ne dekha mujhe..

**flashback
2days before..
Ridhima's place

Ridhima was sitimg in her room.. Comoletely confused n sad..!!
Niki enters her house n is welcomed be merry ..
Niki : aunty ridhima kahan hai.. She was suposed to meet me an hour before..
Merry : she is in her rum.. Vo kisi ksm se thoda upset hai breakfast bhi nahi kia..
Niki : main dekhti hn..

Ridhima was stiting in her room n talking to her self..
Kya krun main itni mushkil se ek idea mila tha armaan ko apni felings btane ka pr vo bhi kuch help nahi kr raha.. Sab kehte hai agar kuch pta krna ho gogle pr ye net speed... Muski ya anji se puch nahi sakti.. Ab krun toh krin kya..??

Niki : main kuch help krun...
R : oh hey niki.. Tu kb ayi..
Niki : jb ap gogle ko pareshan kr rahi thi..
R : are vo vo toh main ek dres material dhund rahi thi..??
Niki : dres material bhai se kya kahe ga..??(n winks at ridhima..)
R : kehna.. Dres ne kya lehna hai tu bhi na.. Chal tu a hi gyi hai toh help me out konsa material btr hai..??
Niki : ridhima ap mujhse share kr sakte ho.. I promise kisi se nahi kahungi bhai se bhi nahi... N muski di jaise tease bhi nahi.. Pkaa...
Ridhima looks at niki..
Niki : aise dekh kya rahe ho.. Bhai mujhse kuch nahi chutape.. Mujhe pta hai ap meri help le sakte ho..

Niki : ap aise nahi btaoge..
Niki takes ridhima's laptop..

Niki : ohh.. Toh ap bhai le lie fast rakhna chate ho..

Ridhima blushes hearing this...

Niki : im waiting..
Ridhima nodes her head..
Niki : toh ismain problem kya hai..??
R : mujhe iske bare main jda nahi pta..
Niki : bs itni si baat apki problem abhi solve krdeti hn..
Niki cals her mom..
Niki : heyy momii..
Niki : main bilkul thik hn apki thodi help chahie.. Meri ek frnd ka 1st krva chaut hai.. Uski family main koi aisa nahi hai jo use bta ske.. Toh ap btadpge unhe...

** flash back ends..

R : toh aise hue aunty se meri baat. Pr parcel ke bafe main mujhe bhi nahi pta..
A (to himself) zarur us niki ki bachi ne kuch kia hoga..!!

AR sat in same place watching tv n talking to each other n fal asleep there only..!!

Next morning...!!!

R : armaan...
A : hmmm..
R : armaaannn get up we afe geting late...

Armaan open his eyes n saw ridhima standing in front of him n cofe kept on the table..!!
A :( to himself..)i wish mera ye spna jldi sach ho kaye..

R : armaann.. Eyes khol kr bhi so rahe ho.. Jldi cofe pio n get ready hmne ofice jna hai..!!

Armaan comes out of his dreamland n sees his soundings n comes to reality..

Armaan puls ridhima in his lap..
R : armaan kya kr rahe ho we are geting late..
Armaan peks ridhima's chek..
A : gud morning jaann.. Ise beautiful morning ho hi nahi sakti..
Ridhima hugs armaan n places her head on armaan's chest..
R : gud morning. !!

After 5 min..
Ridhima comes out of the hug..
R : armaan go n get ready now..
A : yes maam..

Ab hr later..

ARRM fasion house..
Anji : muskan stage set up kahan tk pahuncha..
M : its almost done... Design pura ready hai.. Bs last min prep hai..
Niki : thats grt.. Invites promotion sab set hai bs parson ka wait hai..
Atul : relax guys sab acha hoga 2nd show will be more hit than 1st..
Rahul : hope so.. Pr humara model or designer kahan hai..

A : here we are..
Rahul : kitna wait krvate ho dono..
R : kl late tk i was bsy making designs..
Niki : no problem bh.. Ridhima..

R : leta get started..

Later afternoon..
Muskan : ufff main toh thak gyi.. Kitna kam hota hai yaar... Meri toh vnd baj jti hai sabko bta bta kr..
Rahul : toh tujhe kya lga rha beth ke orders dena easy hai..
Muskan : lga toh tha.. Pr ab smj agya.. Mera kam toh hogya.. Baki sab se puchte hai..

Rahul : chal..

Rahul : hum dono ka kam toh khatam.. Baki..??
Atul : same bro..
Niki : hi 5 mera or anji bhabhi ka bhi..
Muskan : agar sabka kam hogya hai toh kahin lhumne chale.. Thoda stres km hoga..
Niki : u are rite kahi chalte hai for outing..
Anji : cool idea.. Pr jna kahan hai..
Rahul : wat about pub..
Atul : super..
Armaan : soory guys main or ridhima nahi chal payenge.. Humne matket jna hai kuch sman colect krne n show stoper dres ki fiti.g rehti hai..
Muskan : thats nt done yaar
Rahul : tum log apna kam krlo.. We go late..
Armaan : tum log apna plan kyu cancle kr rahe ho.. Hume pta nahi kitna time lg jaye...
Kyu ridhima..
R : haan he is rite.. Ap sab log jao..
Niki : yup guys bhai is rite.. Inhe kam krne do hm sab chalte hai..

Atul : ok then we will meet at pub.. At 7..
Rahul : cool..
Armaan : niki.. Take care..
Niki : dont woory bhai im a big girl now.. N all the best..
N winks at armaan..

All other left leaving ar alone..
Ridhima looks at armaan with questioning eyes..
R : armaan..??
A : wat..?? Jldi chalo n finish or work.. Mujhe or bhi kam hai..
Saying this armaan starts to move towards the workstation..

Ridhima comes in front of armaan n stops him..
R : armaan..
A : oh ho jaann.. Tum bhi na.. Smjhti nahi ho.. Ek toh maine tumhare sath time spend krne kie unhe bhagaya.. Or tum ho ki..

R : armaan tum bhi na..
A : main bhi wat..
N comw close to ridhima..
R : kuch nahi..
A : are btao toh..
R : hto side mujhe show stoper wali dres ki alteration krvani hai..

Ridhima picks up a dress n gives to armaan

R : go n change..
A : wat yaar..
Ridhima pushes armaan towards the changing rum..

R : armaan now..
A (making a baby face..) : ja raha hn..

Armaan came out wearing the dress.. Ridhima moves towards armaan n starts taking measurement..
R : armaan dhang se khade ho..
A : khada toh hn.. N makes a pout..
R : armaan agar tumne aise hi tume waste krna tha toh ise btr hm pub chalte..(fake anger..)
A : acha baba sooryy. Jldi se measurement lo then we will go..

After an hr..
A : ab agar apka kam hogya ho toh hm chalen..
R : jna kahan hai..??
A : jahan ap kaho..
R : pkaa..??
A : yes my love..
R : jldi ghar chalo..
A : ghar..
R : haan kyu
A : pr hm toh ghumne nahi jne wale the..
R : stupid we need to change.. Jahan hm ja rahe hai vahan v need to wear some thing diferent..

A : kyu..??
R : ek kam krte hai hm na bs yahan ruk kr q/a khelte hai...

A : sorry jaann ab chalen..
R : chalo..

Ridhima wore a simple too with jeans n a scaf around her neck.. Armaan wore a shirt n jeans..
Their dreses were simple nt branded as ridhima wanted to go out with armaan being ridhima gupta nt the supermodel ridhima..

Their car stoped infrint of a temple..
A (surprised..) mandir.. Ridhima hm ghumne ja rahe tge..
R : haann toh mandir nahi a sakte kya.. Jldi chalo fir hmne gurudware church n then peer pr bhi jna hai..
A : hm date pr ja rahe the.. Tum toh hme tirth pr le ayi..
R : shut up armaan.. Bhagwan ko aise nahi bolte..
Nahi ana mere sath mt aoo.. Main jarahi hn..

Ridhima left from there..
Armaan ran behind ridhima..
A : ridhima suno toh.. Acha baba im soorry tum jaosa kahogi hm vahi krenge.. Bt aise mujhe akela mt.chodna..
R : islie toh hm yahan aye hai..
A : mtlb..
R : main chati hn hm apne relation main age bhadne se pehle bhagwan ji ka ashirwad le..

Armaan huged ridhima..
A : im soorryy jaann.. I love u ridhima...
R : i love u too armaan...
A : chalo ab amder chalen..
R : dont wory main sirf tirth nahi krvaungi..
A : apke sath toh main kahin bhi chal sakta hn...

AR went inside the temple n took belsings
Then they went to gurudwara.. Then church n later peer..!!

In car..
A : ab btayi madam kahan jna hai..
R : tum acr chalao ill give the directions..

AR reached a beach..

this was part A
part B most probs tom.. nahi toh day after toh pka..!!!
ek din main ise jda nahi aya idea.. !!

n vo hoga AR part..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally after a looonnnggg wait. nd diks i know maine ayu ka saath diya but she is ri8. nd is issue mein i m always with her to support her 😉
now coming to the part it is superb nd the wait is worth it. 😃
loved the part. specially ar scenes..
nd diks u better update partB tomorrow varna ayu, me nd megha h na apna emotional attyachar karne ko 😛 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
I never knew its post on IF also
I so love this ff
i read it on blog...
& trust me i like it instantly
well yeh to gayi pehli wali part k bate...
Jo ki boht hi ache the...
No comes on today's part...
Love their cute moment
& nikki's helping way was good
Specially when she said na

Niki : dres material bhai se kya kahe ga..??
It ws just superb...👏
Then wo mandir wali part also cute
Eagerly waiting for more...
Continue soon
Do pm plz...
&
Tc


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PART 23-B

Ar reached beach..

AR came out of car n moved towards the sea..
It was time of sun set..

The sun was slowly going down the horizon.

AR moved towards the sea shore holding hands...

As sun went down, the burning light of the sun got dull and it looked like a huge disc of orange and yellow. The sun's orange was mingling with the light blue colour of the sky and it produced a vast contrast of different colours.
It gave an efect of enlarged rainbow..
It was like watching a screen slowly changing color.
Even the waves of the sea also seemed to have changed their colour to a dull mixture of yellow and orange.

The sun gradually went down leaving behind patterns of different colours, from light purple to a dull blue.

AR stood at the same place adimirimg the beauty of nature till the sun finaly went away..

Cool breeze was blowing making atmosephere coler nading extra efects to the beautiful sum set...
Armaan moved closer to ridhima puting his one arm around her waist n puling her more closer to himself.. Both stood their in selince with ridhima's back touching armaan's chest.. Armaan wraped his both armaan around ridhima n ridhima crosed her arms around her chest n holding armaan's hands..

R : armaann..
A : hm..
R : kitna perfect timing tga na humara yahan ane ka kitna beautiful hai..
A : u are rite.. Agar hm is time yahan na ate toh mujhe ye beautiful sunset tumhari itni beautiful smile ke sath dekhne ko kaise milta...
N gave a small peck on ridhima's temple..

R : armaan .. Kya kr rahe ho..
A : maine kya kia.. Main toh sunset enjoy kr raha hn..

Ridhima turn around to see armaan's face wich had a cute baby pout..

Ridhima started laughing seeing armaan's face..
R : omg armaan.. U look too funny in this pout..!!
A : has lo has lo...

Armaan turned his back towarfs ridhima m floded his arms on his chest showing fake anger..

Ridhoma moves towards armaam holding her ears
R : sorry...

Armaan gave no response to her sorry..
R : armaan itna gisa kyu krte ho.. Sorry baba.. U were too cute.. (n puled his cheks..) or thode funy bhi..
A : cute ldkian hoti hai..
R : babies jaise pout bnaoge toh cute hi lgoge handsome thodi..
Acha ye chodo chalo kuch khate hai..

Ridhima pulls armaan towards the food stall..

Firstly they went to bhel puri stall..

A : yar kitni mirchi hai is main tum kaise kha sakti ho..
R : i love bhel puri.. Mirchi toh bilkul nahi hai..

Rodhima forward a spoon ful to armaan.. Instead of having it armaan ran towards next stall to get a botle of water for himself..

A : tum khao apni mirchi ki plate..
Ridhima loked at arman with open mouth..

Bt that time bhel puri was tempting to ridhima than fighting with armaan..

Unknowingly ridhima ate 2 pieces of green chili in one bite..

R : aahh...
A : kya hua..??
R : pani.. Pani do jldi.. Uuff mirchi..
A : ab aya mza.. Mujhe toh keh rahi thi mirchi hai hi nahi.. Ab dekho apni shakal

R : armaan mera mzak bad main udana pani do pegle.. Aaii.. Mera muh..
Armaan gave the botle to ridhima.. N ridhima drank half the botle in a go..!!

Ridhima was stil feling her mouth buring.. Armaan got 2 cones of ice cream in order make ridhima fel beter..

Ridhima grabed the cone of ice cream n started licking the ice cream like a small kid.. Ridhim waa totaly lost in eating her ice cream forgeting about her suroundings...

Armaan was continoisly looking at ridhima n adimiring her...

Lagdi mainu jivein ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen

Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen

Patla ja lakk tera, lakk nu sambhal ni
One in the million lagdi kamaal ni

Lagdi kamaal ni lagdi kamaal ni
Hoya bura haal ni, hoya bura haal ni


Armaan moves behind ridhima picking her from her waist n twils her around...

Tu aaja mere close
Milta na mauka roz
I want you my baby
Mujhe de de love dose (x2)

Yeah!
Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen
Lagdi mainu jiven ambraan di queen
Meethiyan gallan kare, kudi namkeen


AR spent the whole evening with each other n doing all sort of crazy stuff..

They ate candy floos.. Made several paterns on sand with their feet n hand... Played in sand making mud houses..
Armaan bought gas ballons for ridhima n they released them n ran after them til the balon was far away from thier reach..

After lot of runing laughing n playing.. AR sat on a big rock near the shore.. Their feets were diped in water...

Armaan was making bubles with the soapy water n ridhima was siting infront of armaan inbetween his legs holding bhuta/chali (corns..) n trying to catch bubles armaan made..

Ridjima turned a bit to give armaan a bite of bhuta.. Bt instaed of eating armaan made bubles n one of which landed on ridhima's nose..
Armaan laughed seeing ridhima's face n emagning her as a joker...
A : ridhima u look like a joker.. Ba is buble ki jagah red bal hoti..

Ridhima had enough of armaan's teasing she bent a litle n splashed water on armaan's face..
Armaan was schocked for a moment n back into reality by hearing ridhima's laughter..
R : omg armaan.. Priceles expresion.. Hahaha...
Saying so ridhima ran from their as she now armaan wont spare her...

Armaan ran towards ridhima splaahing water on her.. Both of them were completly drenched in water...


-- uff.. Thats it for part 23B
Ps :- this waa my first atempt to write such stuf.. Jaisa bhi hai jhelna pdega.. Agar mza nahi aya toh bta dena n give sugestions.. Usse ap sab ka hi fyada.. Next time ill try to write something more n ap sab ko or mza ayega..!! :-P
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aayyuu ji hn unres vi krdo..!!!

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Originally posted by: palakajenian

finally after a looonnnggg wait. nd diks i know maine ayu ka saath diya but she is ri8. nd is issue mein i m always with her to support her 😉
now coming to the part it is superb nd the wait is worth it. 😃
loved the part. specially ar scenes..
nd diks u better update partB tomorrow varna ayu, me nd megha h na apna emotional attyachar karne ko 😛 😉



yooo finaly i updated.. 😛
pehle i had genuine reason n they the cold weather made me lazy...!!!

😊 😊
Thabk uu palak..!!

Maine is bar time pr update krdia...!!! Pout...

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