A sandhir ff~ A mistake-i proved right part 17 updated[page 92] - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uditaudi

no problem sweetheart

study is the first priority
but fir bhi update soon haha😉😉😉
n the update was awesome 👏👏👏
eagerly waitinf for the nxt both
TOC n A Mistake 😃😃😃
love u loads dool😳😳😳
all the best for exams👍🏼

yeah😊
thank u soo much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

thats a wonderful update yar...and all the best for ur exams

thanx a lot yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RIDDSI

hey pari

update was awesome darling
loved it from the heart
i thought it was ron but it was karan
loved the bond between granny and ron
granny samne ron ki kuch bhi nahi chalti
dood pete waqt dekhna tha ron ko
hehe he he i loved it
sandhir meet that was so cute
ron enjoying company of sanyu
hmm waiting for next part
but you know na study comes first
do well
all the best for exams
keep writing
update soon
with lots of love
RIDDHIMA

thank u soo much dear
i m glad u loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Areesha566

awesome update pari

love it👏
thank you soo much dear for updating
good luck and all the best👍🏼
will miss you

thanx a lot yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TheKanwalKaur

Lovely update... I m waiting for rd to enter FITE... and their meeting in the college...
and all the best for ur exams...

thank u soo much dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha

amazing updt...

granny is such a cool and super cute...
love the way Rd adoring sanyu...
loved it...
updt soon and best of luck for ur exams...

thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anuja78

its ok dear...
update when time permits...
exams are most impt... so all the best...
we will wait...

thank u soo much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

hayeee it was awesome update dear
really rd's granny is so cute and sweet
all the best for ur exams
i know you will surely rock
thanks for pm

thank u soo much yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MeherS

Awesome...loved it

sooo sweet...

thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 5

After granny's shopping they came back and rd straight away went to his room

He was confused that why he was feeling happy without ant particular reason

His mind was always going to that particular face,rd closes his eyes

Rd[sighing]-SANYUKTA

But his trance was broken by granny's call for dinner and he looks at the clock

on the wall and was surprised that he Was thinking abt some stranger for nearly 2 hours

,he gets up from the bed goes to the washroom had a bath and joins granny for dinner

Along with his cute fluffy dadu

Dadu-kyu bhai Mr.RSS how was ur day out with ur darling

Rd-awesome dadu,how r u feeling now

Dadu-hey i am dude as always right

Rd-right

Granny-what right,this dude is not gonna have any sweet dishes from now onwards

Did u get that mr.dude[dadu nods as a kid with a pouting face]and u Mr,RSS

Get a girl for urself i m fed up of u messing around or get a smaller house

Rd-well i'd prefer the latter one

Dadu and rd hi5 and laugh and granny glares at them and they eat their dinner quitely

On the other hand sanyu reaches her apartment and knocks at the door and samar opens

The door after the first knock itself and sanyu enters hell tired with a small pack in

Her hand

Samar-itna late di

Sanyu-haan woh kuch lena tha na iss liye

Samar-kya?

Sanyu-khana khaya?

Samar-nope

Sanyu[mow back in hitler mode]-SAMAR AGGARWAL i've told u earlier not to

Skip ur food,thn how dare u miss it

Samar-offo meri hitler behena,i was waiting for u na

Sanyu-god samar don't u know that doc has told u not to skip food

Samar-i didn't skip i just delayed it

Sanyu-that also is not allowed

Samar-ok fine,now would u mind coming and having dinner with me

Sanyu- god,u r soo stubborn

Samar-so is my sister,now go and freshen up,i'll set the table

Sanyu-ok

She goes from there and samar sets up the table and she comes and they have

Their dinner and retire to bed

At 12:00 am

Sanyu gets up from her bed and she tip toes to samar's room along with a packet

She brought,she places the packet near his head and was abt to go but samar calls

Her

Samar-gotcha

Sanyu turns and looks at samar and both burst out laughing

Sanyu-not again samar

Samar-kyu har bar app hi surprise deti ho so here it is

He brings out the cake on which was written "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MOM AND DAD"

Sanyu-ohho arrangements haan

Samar-yep,now come lets cut the cake

Sanyu-ok

Samar-but before that

Samar goes and takes out a photo frame and places it in front of the cake

It was the pic of their mom and dad

They cut the cake and wish their mom and dad and feed each other

Sanyu-chal ab yeh box khol

Samar-whats in it di

Sanyu-open it

Samar takes the box and opens it and was really happy to see whats inside it

It was an oldest model of nokia phone

Samar-wow di,mobile phone awesome,thank u soo much di

[he hugs her]

Sanyu-u liked it na?

Samar-liked it,i just loved it

Sanyu-thoda purana hai but its in a working condition

Samar-oh c'mon di i just loved it aur ab mein apko baar baar phone karke

Disturb karoonga

They laugh and talk for sometime

Sanyu-ek baat bata yeh cake lene ke paise kaha se aaye

Samar-amm woh school mein ek science exhibition tha aur mein first aaya

To mujhe cash award mila,usse liya

Sanyu-awww,u won again my genius baby bro

Samar[irritated]-don't call me that

Sanyu[pulling his cheeks]-ok baby bro

Samar-di

Sanyu-ok,ok fine,ab soo ja

She takes everything and was abt to go when samar calls

Samar-di apni mujhe gift diya,ab meri bari

Sanyu looks at him confused,he steps out of the bed moves towards his school bag

And brings out an envelope and forwards it to sanyu,she takes it and reads it

After reading it she looks at samar who was smiling

Samar-now u don't have to do double work

Sanyu- u got the scholarship

Samar-i think thats what is written in that

Sanyu-i mean,when did u participated and moreover when did u prepared for it

Samar-well i did

Sanyu[hugs him]-i m proud of u

Samar-and i m proud of u

Sanyu-now my baby bro is growing up haan

Samar-di

Sanyu-accha chalo ab soo jao and yeah this is the bestest gift of all years

Samar-and mine too[showing the phone]

Sanyu smiles nad goes out and samar drifts off to sleep

Next day

At shekhawat's house

Granny was bangging on the door continuously since 15 mins

Granny-RSS if u'll not get up now,thn i'll fix ur marriage with mrs.pammi's grand daughter

As soon as granny's sentence finishes the door was opened and there was

standing Mr RSS In a dishelved

Rd-no pls darling pls

Granny[ruffling his hair]-it was a joke,now get ready,college jana hai to time pe jana hai na

Rd-hmm,wait apko kaise pata

Granny-karan ne bataya tu to bhool jata hai hamesha

Rd-oh right how can i forget,apka chamcha karan

Granny-maar khaega,ab jaa

Rd-ok

He gets ready had his breakfast and leaves

Here sanyu was again late and was running through the corridor of college and

Was relived on reaching the class as their new professor was not there yet

She goes and sits with vidu and kaustu

Vids-cake layi hai na

Kaustu-and parathas too

Parth-aur chutny bhi

Jiggy-aur dahi bhi

Sanyu-haan mere bhukkad doston

They were chatting when they hear a girl from a nearby seat squeals

Girl-omg,is he a professor

Hearing that they turn to look at the door from where was entering Mr.RSS

Clad in a sky blue shirt and black pant holding a black bag with a smile

adorning his face and the only Word for him could be PERFECT

All the girls were shamelessly gawking at their new professor whereas

All the boys were still shocked abt the thing that how could this person

Be a professor

Talking abt rd he was used to this kind of gawking and hence was not interested

In looking on each and every faces and hence was not able to find that particular

Face which was looking at him still surprised


howz it guys,i hope u liked it,pls do hit the like button and leave ur comments😊

Edited by pari1995 - 10 years ago

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