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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aarti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

nice update..Loved it..Waiting for next chapter.. 😊

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thank U Dhivii 🤗
Karn is proving himself to be her best buddy 😆 😳
& Dushy will be Dushy... what to tell 😆 but dushy baby is going to have a hard time now 😆

okay!!! then waiting for it dear!!!..BUT I miss u dear!!!! the time is the big villain for us..when I come u cannot..when u come..I would be in fast asleep😭

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Aartii26
nice update..Loved it..Waiting for next chapter.. 😊

Thanks Aarti 😳.
I will post the next chappy soon

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

okay!!! then waiting for it dear!!!..BUT I miss u dear!!!! the time is the big villain for us..when I come u cannot..when u come..I would be in fast asleep😭

Yes Dhivii but what to do. Sometimes I hardly get time even to do peekaboo during daytime. So I check IF mostly at night. And I have the wierest sleeping routines. I sleep around 2-2.30 in the morning & wake up @ around 7 to get ready for the day 🤢

I will post the next chappy soon 😳

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Read both the parts together Hema.Loved it.The friendship bond is growing firm.Loved the possesive buddy Karna😆.And Duryodhan is behaving mature.Loved him.Swarnali is impressing me more and more with each update.Loved how she did Dushy dhulai⭐️.And no matter whatever happens Dushy will be Dushy.Woh nahi sudhrega😆Also loved the caring Radha maa.Waiting for the next.Why did they argue?😒

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Hemu dear!!!1 really unique and different..I never expected this twist in the story..some of the parts I really loved so much..the way u explained swarnaliand her makeup for the party..the description of her attires were sooo niceee!!! karna glancing her was so moving..he let his hand to her remind me British style..but it was so natural..poor duhy..he is proving himself a fool again abd again..dury is picturized as a good and neat man till now.i love the intimacy btw swarnali and karna.really nice. the idea of modern swarnali with our dwapar yugh karna is something novel..and it is going well..continue dear..

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: vaikartana
Read both the parts together Hema.Loved it.The friendship bond is growing firm.Loved the possesive buddy Karna😆.And Duryodhan is behaving mature.Loved him.Swarnali is impressing me more and more with each update.Loved how she did Dushy dhulai⭐️.And no matter whatever happens Dushy will be Dushy.Woh nahi sudhrega😆Also loved the caring Radha maa.Waiting for the next.Why did they argue?😒

Aww Thank u Vani 🤗

Possessive Buddy Karna ... yeah... wouldn't he look cute 😳 😆
Yeah I made Dury mature... to bring in some KaDu magic 😉 😆
@Bold: Well his acts certainly needed a 'jam ke Dhulai' 😆 😆
Radha ma yes... she's so adorable 😳
@Red: U will get to know in the next chappy 😉

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
Hemu dear!!!1 really unique and different..I never expected this twist in the story..some of the parts I really loved so much..the way u explained swarnaliand her makeup for the party..the description of her attires were sooo niceee!!! karna glancing her was so moving..he let his hand to her remind me British style..but it was so natural..poor duhy..he is proving himself a fool again abd again..dury is picturized as a good and neat man till now.i love the intimacy btw swarnali and karna.really nice. the idea of modern swarnali with our dwapar yugh karna is something novel..and it is going well..continue dear..

Dhivii 🤗
Well I never thought of this twist until I got some wild ideas from Sansii & Madhu & I just added some twist in it with my initial plot of the story😉 😆
Swarnali was looking like no less than a princess & Karn was mesmerized & kept glancing at her 😳 ☺️
@Bold: ☺️
@Black: Yes... poor Dushy baby. How could Swarnali do that to him. 😆
@Green: Me too 😳 ☺️
@Blue: Thank u Dhivii...I hope this amalgamation works further. & Karn has lots of surprises in store from Swarnali 😉 😆
Thanks for the lovely comments 😃

Edited by ...Hemangi - 11 years ago