Dhrulians kahan gaye?!here's an OS 4 u

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Hello there all my fellow MaNanians amd DhruLiyans. I'm Lia... back again with yet another OS. this one is a bit different from my earlier OSs. i hope you like it. Pls do comment ..all ur joothis are welcome.šŸ˜†

😊Happy reading Folks😊


DhrLiya OS: Make a Wish!

Dhruv was lost deep in his thoughts recalling every incident that had happened. To say he was confused would be an understatement. So many nameless emotions were surrounding him. He was always weak when it came to matters of the heart. If it wasn't for Alya he would've never realized his feelings for Nandini...

Alya..

Alya was there for him always. She gave him unconditional support in every decision he took. When he was with her he never felt the need to be reserved. She was the only one with whom he could be himself..just himself. She never judged him. Never denied him comfort. It was in her arms that he felt peace ..he felt complete...but what were these emotions? He didn't know.

He knew she was hurt. He was hurt himself ..but why? Again he had no answer. He didn't know why he kissed her..more than that he didn't know why she kissed him back. But it was not the time to think about that. Today she had put her own brother in jail. Yet she smiled for her friends. She was breaking from the inside and he knew it. May be that was why he felt the sudden urge to see her. She needed him and he would be there for her. All the confusions can go to hell for now.

He took his bike and left for her house barely noticing that it was middle of the night.

Alya sat alone in her empty home. She regretted sending Mukthi away giving her false assurances that she was fine. She was breaking and she knew it. Putting one's own brother in jail is never a pleasant experience. So she curled up in her bed shedding silent tears and longing for shoulder to cry on...Dhruv...she thought and brushed it off the next instant. She'd had enough for a day. It hurt in her heart... it did...why was the fate so cruel to her? Why is it that the guys she loved never loved her back...Am I so bad? She asked herself endless tears flowing down her cheeks...

Her phone began to ring startled by it she stared at the screen which said "Dhruv calling" She took a few moments to compose herself and took the call.

"Hello Dhruv"

"Alya mein tumhare gate ke bahar hoon. Pls open the door"

"Kya?! Dhruv tum iss wakth...yahan? Is everything alright?"

"Pehle tum darwaza toh kholo"

"Haan..yeah. I'm coming"

Still trying to clear her head Aliya rushed down and opened the door. Dhruv stood there in his usual attire looking at her in a way she was trying hard to not to understand. A sense of peace washed over her and she gave a genuine smile after many long hours.

"Can I come in?" Dhruv asked with a slight smile. Her red and puffy eyes gave him the confirmation he needed.

"of course."

"toh...tum soyi nahin ab tak"

"Nahin..woh ..mein.. I was..."

"Alya...you know you don't have to pretend in front of me" Dhruv said sofly lifting up her chin.

That was all it took to break her tough wall of control that she had built around her. Tears began to flow down her cheeks..she no longer felt the need to hold them back. She just wanted to let go for once.

Without another word Dhruv took her in his arms gently caressing her hair. Alya held on to him as if her life depended on it buried her face in his chest and wept her heart out. They stood like for how long they didn't know...nor did they feel any need to move away.

After the last of her tears had dried Alya broke the embrace. This time awkwardness surrounded them.

"Come. You need some fresh air" Dhruv said and pulled her towards the balcony.

He watched her tresses fly wayward with the cold wind. He wondered how she managed to look so beautiful even with a messy hair and puffy eyes. She looked like an angel in her white night dress beneath the stars.

"Look Dhruv a shooting star. Make a wish" She said smiling down at him.

He looked at the sky and saw a flash of light. He felt a shiver down his spine. His vision began to blur and his head felt like it was about to explode. He felt his body shaking uncontrollably. He tried desperately to hold on to something. He could hear Alya's voice calling for him in a distance. He tried to call back but couldn't. Flashes of white light began to blind his vision...

Alya didn't know what was happening. One second Dhruv was perfectly fine standing next to her watching the sky and in the next he fell on the floor his whole body shaking badly. His hands clutching his head in desperation.

" Dhruv...Dhruv..kya hua? Dhruv ..pls..kuch toh bol...Dhruv" She tried desperately to calm him down and each time he pushed her off. Her vision began to blur. It was then she realized that she was crying...blinking off her tears she tried to do something... anything to stop his pain.

"Manik. I have to call Manik" she thought to herself and called him still trying to calm him down.

"Hello..Manik. I need help...it's Dhruv something happened to him. He is at my house. Pls come fast. He is in pain." Her voice broke by the time she finished.

"Shit! Alya..I'm at Mukthi's right now. I try to reach as soon as I can..tab tak tum uska khyal rakhna. Music calms him down. Try to sing something to him. I'll send cabir he's closer ..."

"haan..okay. come fast" she cut the call and ran to Dhruv with all her strength she held him close to her and sang sofly straight from her heart...

Na kuch poocha... na kuch maanga...

Tune dil se diya jo liya...

Na kuch bola...na kuch tola...

Muskurake diya jo diya...

Dhruv's shaking began to reduce gradually. He was now holding on to her. Eyes still unfocussed. Alya was struggling to keep her voice even. Pulling him more closer to her she continued..

Tu hi dhoop tu hi chau..

Tu hi apna paraya...

Aur kuch na janu...

Bas itna hi janu...

Dhruv stopped shaking he was now lying on the floor with his head resting on her lap. Alya was slowly stroking his hair...tears streaming down her face.

Tujh mein rab dikhta hain..yaara mein kya karun

Tujh mein rab dikhta hain ...yaara mein kya karun

Sajde sar jhuktha hain..yaara mein kya karun..

Tujh mein rab dikhta hain yaara mein kya karun...

This was how Cabir found them when he reached there...his own eyes moist he watched the scene in front of him. No words were needed... no more explanations required...This was pure unadultered...LOVE!

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hasnaa678 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i love this os..looking forward for more dhrliya OS
love ur writting
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This is maybe a small part of this beautiful OS and a little irrelvent in respect to what the OS was about but he asked her if he could come in. How gentleman-ly of him. :') I feel in love with this OS at that point. Also, with the way she calmed him down. So beautiful. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hasnaa678

i love this os..looking forward for more dhrliya OS

love ur writting

Thank u dear...I'm glad u liked it! I'll try writing more DhruLiya OSs
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Originally posted by: -silhouette-

This is maybe a small part of this beautiful OS and a little irrelvent in respect to what the OS was about but he asked her if he could come in. How gentleman-ly of him. :') I feel in love with this OS at that point. Also, with the way she calmed him down. So beautiful. <3

thank u dear!!! I'm glad u liked it! Dhruv's a gentleman always..it's our baba who keeps barging in and out ...I love both of them anyway
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Liakutty...this was one hell of an os dear...hmmm...from now on I m going to ask you to write is for me!!!hope u will do:-*
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Originally posted by: navi04vet

Liakutty...this was one hell of an os dear...hmmm...from now on I m going to ask you to write is for me!!!hope u will do:-*

Ofcourse!!! Navyamol...I'm really gald you liked it...My next OS will be dedicated to u dear...
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Originally posted by: crystalfairy95

Ofcourse!!! Navyamol...I'm really gald you liked it...My next OS will be dedicated to u dear...

Really...thank u...I want an angsty and fluffy ( flangsty??) Os of manan ...
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Originally posted by: navi04vet

Really...thank u...I want an angsty and fluffy ( flangsty??) Os of manan ...

I'll try dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OOoyeee where have all the dhruliyans gone? Koi toh comment kar yaar!!

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