Please writers logic is to link Rekhu and Kalindi family drama

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ria drama needs more dimensions to the story, Ria should meet her fiances and he should realize that Ria is a very high maintenance girl , that will never stop with her endless materials needs. Ria fiance tries to explain , to her that she does not need all these materials, things but Ria does not listen and dismisses him. Ria should meet Ankur and start liking and flirting with him. Ria fiance finds out , that Ria is going after Ankur while engaged. Her fiance should call off the wedding. Ria vows to all that she marry rich,( she later fakes a pregnancy to marry Ankur.) Everybody discovers that Ankur is Kalindi son from previous marriage, and Rekhu accuses Kalindi of leaving her son, to marry Advoot.
Soon Ria friend pooja ( shlok sister should entry) Ankur and Pooja ( Shlok sister the girl that ran away from home should enter)
Jyothi should already know that Ria liked Ankur, and Rekhu should learn that Anajailee left her husband. Rekhu should reveal this to the media in angry. Sid should find this out, Sid should say to Rekhu that without Jyothi family fiancial help, they could'nt of paid for the wedding. Jyothi says she could visible see, that Sid could not manage all the costs of the wedding, so she asked her brother for money to pay for the wedding, Rekhu blames Jyothi for causing all the problems.
Rekhu tells Sid when he least suspects, jyothi will leave him, like Anajilee left her own husband.
Jyothi should start helping abused women, Rekua should accuse Jyothi of interfering and ending peoples marriages.
The new businessman should be linked to Aghihotri family, he wants revenge from them. He wants Astha, and does everything to separate ashlok. The new entry should convince Shlok, that Astha cheated on him. Astha needs to do more than run a food truck, she should become a professional caterer. Otherwise Astha should start working as a professional business woman.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The show really needs to move ahead , at the most there is no logic or consistency. Writers are jumping ahead with tracks like a ping pong ball. Scenes are not explored from all characters perceptive.
Writers need to show more bolder and edgy tracks. Its 2014 not 2001 come on writers shock and surprise us.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am not interested in Ria or Ankush or JoReSid domestic issues.

From the time the cvs started exploring the side characters and showed their stories, the serial has gone downhill.
Concentrate on the leads and the serial will bounce back.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am not interested in Ria or Ankush or JoReSid domestic issues.

From the time the cvs started exploring the side characters and showed their stories, the serial has gone downhill.
Concentrate on the leads and the serial will bounce back.
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Show cannot just focus on leads the problem is all the drama happening in supporting cast tracks are not linked with each others and the content is very weak and dragging. The separate tracks of Rekhu Ria Jyothi and Kalindi and Ankur need to joined together to make the story interesting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lav57

you are right, when the side characters story has any link with lead characters, then only it makes sense.

Thats why I am not interested in Ria wedding expenses or her tantrums, Ankush getting his inheritence by bringing a pretend wife and now pretending to be reformed to get his inheritence. Its got nothing to do with the leads and hence just fillers.
If Ankush was brought in to help with NA expose' or Ankush gets reformed and owned an institute where Ashlok starts their wajood track, it would have made sense. Currently MalKalKush track is not adding any value to the main story and I am not interested.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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If u look at any long running or successful soap all the characters are entangled and story line is lined together. What is deeply annoying is most of the cast are good actors the lack of direction and consistency , is destroying there work.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dont want more ria-renuka drama plsss _/\_ I wish uski shaadi jaldi hojaaye n waapas kabhi naa aaye 🤣😃

and yes they could show niranjan anjali, kirloskers (excluding mala :/ ) varad-sojal n sid jyo's scenes..bas not needed ria's wedding/sasural drama now, pleashhh

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