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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: anjs

this is a nice story, but ur english is very different and difficult to understand...

try to make it more contemporary, as per how we normally speak


sorry anjs but I know only this English, try to understand, I think I write with a literary way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 14


the things are not moving in favor of Asim. Charita's father did not refuse the marriage but he did not give his reply it does not help him to make a decision. he keeps the secret of his relationship with Devika and leaves the things move at their own pace. while in his room he gets a call from Charita he looks at his phone he let it ring for a while he takes a brief reflection wonders what he will say and answered

-: Hi Asim how are you?

-: I'm fine thank you (he replied)

-: My father did not say anything but that does not mean he refuses

-: I understand it is not serious we should not rush things forgive me Charita I'm tired I want to go to sleep (he says Bey and he hangs up)

Asim avoids talking to her because he can't say it's better for him and he does not want to marry. after a few seconds he receives another call and this time is Devika to who also does not know what to say he responds

-: Hi !! I wanted to know how are you since then just now (Devika said) I could not sleep before taking with you and hear your voice

-: I'm fine don't worry about me (he responds with a discrete voice)

-: heu .. you have not forgotten anything Asim?

- :No I don't see what I forgot

-: Something you had to tell me Asim (she said in a tight voice)

Asim understood and replied but told her that half the truth

-: Don't worry Devika (he said with a soft voice) nothing will happen (he replied to reassure her ) I promise that everything will be fine I will ensure that our love will not break I will protect it

-: I know and I trust you (said Devika with a pretty smile ) I'll see you tomorrow bey

she hangs up still smile in the lips and think hard to Asim. her mother enters sees her happy and ask

-: Hammm you're happy today my daughter good news?

-: I was talking to Asim on the phone you know the boy who came to see me when I was sick with Nita

-: Yes I know to who you're talking about and it was he who made my daughter happy?

-: Yes mom we're together he and me I am pleased

-: He is a good boy my daughter and he loves you very much if he wants he can come and ask you to marry

Devika stops her smile and think a moment she sees Asim telling her that his mother went to requesting a girl in marriage and realizes that this story is going to be complicated takes a different smile and told her mother

-: You the moms you think only of marriage we are not here at the moment we must get to know better

she tells nothing about the problem of Asim and hope things will be good she trusted him and expected that their relationship discovered the day

the days pass Devika and Asim get to know they exhaust a lot of time together on stage and off he lives his great love with her through the dream in dancing and through the reality in confessing her all days. he does not left one moment disappear without telling her. but love remains secret they did not disclose nor friends to the theater or to the family of Asim preferring to wait for the right time Devika life in the clouds where there are only Asim she only sees him breathe through her love for him forget all the problems that can slow this relationship and give him time to be issued his hostage how can she think about all these worries while Asim did not give her time to do so allowing her to live unforgettable memories too happy with that love wants to think about anything that the long hours of the day he spends with her he does not want their intimate encounters are conducted in the workplace, and to consummate this relationship, he invites her in different place and he prepares different surprise

one day sunshine not too hot Asim prepares a picnic and invite Devika up on the cliff his favorite place where he can be alone with her both sat on a big blanket Spread on the floor on what disposed the food and dessert favorite to Devika a chocolate cake having finished eating he takes a piece of cake which he introduced into her mouth gently follows the crumbs which escape from her lips. he moves his head to hers keeping his fingers to her lips and tries to steal a kiss. she refused turning her head with a wishful breath he moves in lengthening with her and managed to catch her lips to cuddle with a delicious kiss accompanied by a desire to travel to her world and visit her whole body. Devika stops him saying

-: No Asim we are outside

he stopped his run looks and responds (his slow voice)

-: we are alone there is no one

he resumed his journey which took him up to her neck kisses her, his hand through the other side of her body and begins to introduce the caress and wakes her breath that she can not catch. she jumps suddenly exited her place

-: We should not do it Asim

-: Forgive me if I pushed you (he said getting up too) but my love for you has no limit

He approaches her caress her arms covering her against him and continuous

-: When you're next to me I can't resist to keep you long against me when I see you everything disappears before my eyes and I see only your face who asks me to love him

- :But we're not married and there's things you can't do (said resting her head on his chest)

-: Devika you know I don't considers you as a girlfriend for me you are my wife who will stay by my side and to me forever

-: I'm already for you and for a long time

this recognition gives hope to Asim that everything will be fine but a memory wane pass before him to remind him that he has not put an end to his history with Charita and did not face his parents tell them that he don't wants to marry her. this history is not easy for him to end a liaison that lasted for years and confront the persons that he respect too and he never go against their will. he sheltered Devika as long as he can in the warmth of his arms forgetting that he may lose her because of this

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing updates...
asim why he is behaving like a fool?
he should have courage to accept the truth...
in this way its gonna ruin two girls life...
now asim and devika more intimately comfortable...
did they consummate ?
on last i didn't understand...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Akorshi

amazing updates...

asim why he is behaving like a fool?
he should have courage to accept the truth...
in this way its gonna ruin two girls life...
now asim and devika more intimately comfortable...
did they consummate ?
on last i didn't understand...


all will end well, you will understand, the story has 55 part Asim will find the courage to face everyone but for now living a stress
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
part 15



the days pass and the secrets of Asim are still not revealed his secret of his relationship with Devika which remained hidden from his family and the secret of Charita. Devika believes that is resolved with time not daring to ask and think that she is a part of his past.

that day a great news waiting him at home he returned to his rehearsal and after spending time with Devika his mother welcomed him at the door with the ritual after scoring his forehead with a point red he asked her what was going on

-: it's good (his mother told him) the father of Charita accepted the marriage

it thought see the heart of Asim come to off its place leaving a serious noise

-: How he has accepted (Asim responds tormented) he wanted to see me!! I'm not even go to meet him!!

his mother sees his anxiety and asked

-: What is it there Asim? why are you shaking like that? there is a hard problem ?

-: No mom (he says) but you rushed I'm not ready I have my rehearsal I told you to wait

his father does not understand what's happen gets angry and tells him

-: Your mom wanted for you a wife and it you who insisted on this one what is happening now why you have done this to us

-: I've done nothing (responds severely for the first time) I just asked you to wait a bit

Kashi his brother know the worry to Asim try to avoid a big problem asks him to calm down and takes him to his room

-: Why they did this to me (said Asim) I thought the things are arranged for me and the days are going to forget this history. we have started something Devika and me

his father was behind the door after followed him refusing the attitude of his son opened the door and asked

-: What do you mean Asim why you want to forget this history that you started yourself and who is this Devika

-: I'm not ready dad (Asim deny) my career takes me a long time and I have to leave soon for a touring I can't begin a marriage that I would leave in the middle way

-: I have asked you a question Asim (request his father raising his voice)

his mother and the rest of the family was terrified by that voice and runs to see what happens

Asim does not want to answer to his father he does not dare tell him I love her

-: Asim answer me (his father continued with his furious voice) who is this Devika?

-: she is a girl that he loves dad (kashi answers ) she is a dancer with him to the theater it's with her that he wants to get married

-: A dancer ... (made his father shocked ) what's this tale and it's not Charita the girl he loves?

-: This is what I thought before meeting Devika (Asim said head against the tiles)

-: You believed? you think life is easy?

-: No question my son (his mother said) not after we've made the request what we will say to her parents. you will forget this Devika I do not want a dancer at my house and what we will tell the neighbors and family forget this girl you will marry Charita

Furious Asim does not support this situation leaves the house leaving behind him his father's anger and grief of his mother takes his car and goes. think of all these conditions the years with Charita that never was warm as much as may from time with Devika he did not can cope. stuck by his family hopes to gain time he returns home after calm returns to his mother and father and told them

-: I don't want to take any step now I have a show to do I leave in one month it will last for some months we will speak after my return

Asim's parents accepts the proposal which for him is an opportunity to think about this concern and find a solution believing that something will drift has its favor but the things will not go ahead as he wants

the day of the anniversary of Asim Devika with the help of Nita and Adil prepares him a surprise a birthday party at the theater she enters his lodge. she tries to occupy for that the others begin to preparations he sees her dressed in a traditional view that she puts for the repeat. his heart beats like every time he sees her he grabs her by the waist pulls to him and said

-: I've missed you (he tries to kiss her she does not allow him and says)?

-: Someone can come Asim let me

he pulls her even more against him and said

-: Not until you kiss me you make me crazy when I see you dressed like that (he moves his head she turns hers and marks her cheek with a delicious kiss)

-: Did not you afraid that someone comes and discovers our secret (she asks)

-: No I'm not afraid and already I decide to unveil our love I want them to know how much I love you

after this time filled with love she takes him with his friends where he finds a surprise that waiting for him happy he begins to celebrate his birthday tasting cakes and drinks pose pictures with everyone and Asim take this opportunity and decided to tell them about his relationship with Devika he whispers in her ear

-: I can tell them now? there's no better opportunity than that

she beckoned him yes by the head so happy

but this happiness does not live long which is not expected happens a girl come to the theater with a box of cake in hand looking Asim she walks towards everyone Asim sees her looks at Devika and expects disaster the girl advance to Asim throws herself into his arms

silent eyes of Devika fixed on what happens shocked she does not understand Asim looks at her into the eyes a very big fear that can see what will happen then said

-: Charita? What are you doing here

-: I came to surprise you (she said) celebrate your birthday with your friends

(she is Charita !!! said Devika but why she is here and for Asim? I understand nothing) and the world revolves around her

all their friends wondered who is this girl she said

-: Excuse me I forgot to introduce myself I am the fiance of Asim Charita

( His fiance!! but he told me that nothing is going on between them I thought he had leaves her) thinks Devika still frozen in her place to say nothing

Asim glued in place too can not find words he does not deny. look at Devika her eyes shining teardrop leaves another busy getting to know Charita she takes her things watched by Asim, Nita and Adil who's alone understand what is happening Devika leaves the theater running with on her this traditional dress

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
part 16



upset Devika goes out of the theater Asim looks her go away helpless leaves a painful look at Nita who includes his grief and seized his message she follows Devika who has already disappeared

Nita returns to the interior and does a unfortunate sign to Asim that she already gone she approaches him quietly holds him by the arm and leads him away from the hearing of the other and said

-: What is this history Asim who is this girl?

-: My past who will follow me forever and prevent me from continuing my dream

Adil also arrives trying to understand this situation and help his friend asks

-: What are you gonna do now Asim how you gonna solve this problem Devika will never forgive you

-: I don't think this incident could happen I thought everything was fine (looks Adil and ask) tell me what I should do

-: You should have thought about that before (said Nita) Devika told me that you were not with her

-: It's true that I'm not with her my heart is with Devika and she knows it I told her she's my only love

-: And you forgot to tell her that Charita is your fiance?

-: She is not my fiance and Devika knows (then he tells how his parents are gone the to proposed her marriage and how he has faced he added that his parents refused Devika and they insisted on Charita) but I could not tell her this I could not tell her that my mother does not want her because she is a dancer I have say to Devika that I will not marry with Charita and I told my parents that I don't want to do anything before my touring, I wanted to save time

-: and you thought to solve the problem that way (adds Adil) you're wrong you did not think this time that you want to win will betray you one day ...? as now

-: I can't Adil I can't go beyond the will of my parents and I can't erase eight years of this relationship that way by telling her that it's over (he looks to Charita and continuous ) look how happy she is it will be a shock for her

-: As it was a shock to Devika today (said Nita) listens Asim if you're not ready to make your decision left alone Devika don't make her suffer more than that

a worried look that made him remember Devika as if he had forgotten her in a split second

-: Devika !!!! I must call her I have to explain to her (he takes his phone and Adil stops him and tells him

-: What are you going to tell her? before calling find a resolution

-: I don't know what I'll tell her I just want to see her and not to lose

nobody understands Asim. in his head is clear he loves Devika and want to spend the rest of his life with her he will not marry Charita and he does not want to tell her he thinks that with the time she noted that he is not interested to her and that will be she who will leave him. he believes the time will erase all his past without the help to do

Charita who was with the other to prepare the birthday party approaches and says to Asim

-: What are you doing here just have fun it's your birthday I know you've already celebrated but I want to enjoy with you (she holds his hand and took him with her Asim sheds a disturbing look at Nita and Adil meaning his impotence)

Devika comes home upset she goes to her room and cry to tear her eyes crying her love for Asim that she sees it break she sees it move away from her in the arms of another girl. it's terrifying in her head the thing are blend she sees herself with him on the cliff he announced that for him she is his wife with all her tears which does not hide her mother enters and finds her in impressive condition

-: Devika !!! what is it there's my daughter (her mother seriously concerned request) someone has done you wrong

she threw herself on her but said nothing her sobs perturbs her mother insists but receives no response she thinks for a moment and asked

-: Asim a right he hurt you I knew that this relationship is full of disturbance tell me what he's done

still nothing from her Devika silent and did not even look at her mother who leaves in her grief

Charita's coming to the theater to see Asim it does not mean that they are together but Asim has done nothing for this incident does not happen. if Asim had to end this relationship Devika will not be gone he must repair his mistake he must win back his heart but what is the way that hi should take

Asim wants to go see Devika at home to explain that Charita is not his fianc it's a misunderstanding he believes solve in giving this explanation arrived he rings the doorbell

-: Hello my aunt Devika is here

-: Yes she is here (said severely) but she does not feel well she came home in a bad state I think you're aware of?

-: I can see her? (Asim said not answering the question of his aunt)

-: Before going to see her. Tell me what have you makes her ?

-: Just a misunderstanding my aunt but everything will be fine do not worry

-: I can't let you her father will be home soon and it will go wrong for you

-: I don't stay long my aunt please let me see her

Devika's mother remark on Asim a broken heart accepts he sees her daughter hoping he helps her find the smile

Asim opens the door to the room of Devika she lies on the bed eyes in tears she sees dry her tears and said determined

-: What are you doing here

-: I have come to see you to clear the misunderstanding (he said sitting next to her) this is a misheard Devika (repeats putting his hand on her cheek)

she looks at him with her red eyes who have exhausted all her tears withdrew his hand and said

-: This is not a misunderstanding, it is a reality that you should see in front. she is your fiance she said

he approaches more he puts his hands gently on her arms and said quietly

-: You know it is not true I have already told you my parents asked her hand I have nothing with her I don't consider her my fianc I'm not going to married her

-: If it was true what you say (she told him) why you did not say anything when she came why did you let me go without explanation the truth is that you are interested for her and you don't want hurt her

Asim puts his hands on the cheek of Devika affected glues his forehead to hers kisses and tells her

I'm sorry I was wrong but at that moment I could not respond and I had fear your reaction

-: You can go now (she said pushing him away and got up from her seat) you have nothing to do here

-: please Devika (he said taking her up in his hands) does not do this to me you know that I love you

-: Can be (she said with love) but I can not stand that you have another woman in your life

Asim envelope his beloved against him and said

-: You are the only woman in my life listening Devika you remember when I told you to support me in hard time? I was talking about this situation (he looks and continuous) I don't have the courage to confess to her or to my parents and I want you to support me I want you to rest at my side

-: Terminate this relationship and I will support you

-:I don't have the courage to say that it's over. I'll never do it but with the days she will understand and accept the reality time will erase it all

Devika made step back and said

-: You have nothing to do here please go

she did not want to talk with Asim at the subject she realized that he will never tell Charita everything is over between them she asks him to go home Asim goes out desperate thinking of trying it later with her

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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amazing updates...
charita's father accepted the proposal...
arnav don't want to hurt his parents...
his parents don't accept devika...
here charita comes to surprise arnav...
devika so much hurt...
asim tried to clear the cloud...
but he have to choose one...
khushi is right in her position...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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asim is so stupid...what if Charita never realizes that he doesnt love her...afterall, he himself proposed marriage, charita wasnt even ready then...
and now he is not ready to tell charita that he doesnt love her...and he was even ready to consumate his love to with devika...such a stupid man he is...Adil, Devika and her friend, are right...he shud first tell charita that its over...only then dream bt a forever with Devika...

Devika shud ignore him n try to move on...let him prove that he loves her by being honest n proud of her n his love...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 17



Devika spends a very restless night thinking about this whole situation she loved so Asim but refuses that this relationship lives a lie

the next day she went to the theater the night was an advisor for her arrive there Asim waited her bearded face and weakened he thought all night to her he wants to regain his love. happy to see her come he feared her absence he follows her in her lodge

-: Hello Devika (said with love) how are you

-: Well (she responds coldly looking in her things) sorry I must change

he holds her arm bring her back to him and told her unhappy

-: Devika !! why are you angry? understands my situation

-: Understand what? (She said) that you're engaged and I have to accepted it without saying anything ?

-: I am not engaged I have repeated it several times that she is not my fianc why you don't want to understand?

she removes his hands from her arms and said

-: Until yesterday I was happy with you I saw only you and our love I thought of nothing else

-: And what it has changed today? you don't love me ?

she looks and finds herself involved. two small tear escaped from her eyes her heart told her to drop everything and go into the arms of her love but her wisdom said does not involve in a story without exit

Asim approaches to Devika sadly holds her by her waist kisses her tenderly on the cheek and said

-: I love you and I love anyone else forgive me if I have any weaknesses

- :As long as this girl is between us we have nothing to do together out of my lodge please

Devika has made her decision she does not stay with Asim for hurting someone else she does not agree with what he do

Asim will not believe that it's over between him and Devika he continues to love her and believe that she is for him and that her love for him will not fade away so easily and he remains hopeful awaits her comes and throws herself into his arms he continued to live his dream through his dances

this dance begins with a very romantic music a gentle kiss on the hand leaving the trace of breathing of Asim (ab na jaa) beautiful and sentimental song on his favor to help him express his wants the deeper to say that he wants to believe in that impossible dream ask her to stay with him and never leave him he asks no more than that everything that he could not tell her in the dressing room he expresses now a very deep look he seeks to bring out the inner love to Devika he keeps her in his arms a hypnotized look on her which he repeats that this moment is up to them that they are together and she does not let him. Devika looks away by her desire she forgot all what is past and wants to live a last moment with him leaving her last wishes of her soul she feels him behind her stroking her arm and repeating her: this dream is ours enjoying incredible time

affected Devika withdraws and leaves the stage she goes to a place where Asim can not follow her except for the eyes of her friend Nita who saw her shadow escape to go into hiding she goes behind her and finds her in tears

-: This is still a very beautiful dance (said to brighten the atmosphere)

-: Unfortunately not in my favor (she always responds in tears)

-: I did not dare tell you about the incident of yesterdays but I feel that everything went wrong

-: I have decided to leave him Nita (replied wiping her tears) but my heart is torn when I am close to him I want to stay in his arms but I can not see him with another

-: I don't understand what is going on in his head (Nita wondered) how he can be engaged then that he promised you love?

Devika explains to her friend that Asim is not engaged she tells her about the circumstances of the relationship and she adds he does not have the courage to erase the previous years with a simple farewell and that the solution for him is that the time will clear all that.

-: I don't want to wake up every day wondering if he's going to see her today or not, if she falls into his arms like last time or not, or maybe his parents oblige him and he will marry her I can't live all that I took my resolution I left him and told him (she puts her hand on the shoulder of her friend and asked) Nita you want to do a favor for me.

-: Yes of course (she replied trying to support her) what you want

-: I don't want to be his partner it's hard for me to do all the dances with him would you take my place I'll ask the teacher

-: Are you sure this is what you want

-: Yes I'm sure it will help me to forget

Nita agreed but she know it's temporary Devika wipes her tears hug her friend to thank her and will talk with her dance teacher in front of Asim's eyes who devours her but hearing nothing Devika explains to her teacher

-: Excuse me sir I am announcing that I don't want be the partner of Asim I withdraw from this show

-: What are you telling me there Devika some days near the big show where I can find a partner now

-: there's Nita she accept to replace me

-: there's a problem with him (the teacher request concerned) he has made you something

-: No (she says) I'm tired of all this and I want to retire

the teacher has always seen the relationship between the couple evolve even if they never reveal and he feels that there's a problem between them he suggested

-: I accept that you retired as the lead role but you are forcing to stay with us you have a contract

Devika agrees to stay in the show rehearsals resume but with a different trend and Asim does not know what it's expects him continued his day by following his love heart with eyes and everywhere


Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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devika is right...she doesnt deserve this insecurity just cause asim doesnt want to hurt charita...if he cares so much for charita, then he is lying that he loves devika...cause he is ready to hurt devika but not charita...that means in reality he loves charita more then devika...

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