Once upon a time, a promise was made

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Posted: 10 years ago
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With resolve in his eyes
And commitment in his mind
He made a promise to his wife
The one he loved with all his heart
Ignoring the taunt in her voice
Unaware of the deceit hiding behind her veil
A promise he lived for, all these years
Putting his life behind, and the happiness it once held
For no matter what
Sahir Azeem Chaudary always keeps his promise!!!

But as they say:

Mudai-lakh bura chahey tou kia hota hai
Wohi hota hai jo manzoor-e-khuda hota hai

Destiny had other plans ... Someone can do all they can to take away our happiness ... but God always has better plans ... A promise that he made to make her happy turned out to be the promise that will eventually lead to making his life happy ... In return of his love and affection all Zeenat gave in return was mock and dhoka ... but unknowingly she gave him a gift ... The Promise ... The Promise that is eventually leading him back towards his happiness ... away from the deceit towards true love ... towards his fate ... towards his Arzoo ... the one who will complete him ... the one with whom he will in time find his happiness with

He has held that promise for all these years ... just so that he can look in Zeenat's eyes and ask her why? He kept his promise ... why did she cheat him? Why couldn't she wait? Didnt' she know he never broke his promise? That he was going to keep this one too?

And the symbolism in Arzoo finally bringing the deal ... its finally time to seal the promise and move on ... time to let go and heal ... let go of the pain the promise and the one he made the promise to brought in his life ... its' time for Sahir Azeem Chaudary to finally live his life again ... obviously it won't be easy, it wont be soon either ... but Zeenat's promise has certainly led the way for Sahir to reach the one he is destined to be with ... Zeenat was greedy but Sahir was pure that is why even if after years of suffering final victory had to be his ... sweet justice ... All Zeenat every wanted was money ... and all Sahir ever wanted was love ... Sahir despite the pain and suffering will get what his heart desired ... Zeenat will forever live in the guilt of not valuing his love, wanting it back but never getting it ... His goodness despite all the pain and suffering would win over her greed and deceit ... he has suffered enough and his chance to happiness isn't far!

P.S: This is a joint production of me and Pri ... and is based on what we have understood from the way zeenat sahir relation has been shown so far

P.S 2: I believe Sahir was once an extremely loving and caring guy, who took whatever destiny threw at him in stride and tried to make the most of it ... he got married to zeenat and showered her with all his love because he probably was always alone and hungry for love and care (yea am not ready to believe alvira could be his mom ... kar lo jo karna hai 😆 ) so he gave it all to Zeenat and she probably on her part played the love game with him too. so instead of ignoring all her greedy desires he kept trying to fulfil them so that she does not leave him, so that he does not loose the only love he had ... thats another thing he never had it!

P.S 3: i stole the title of the post from Gorky Sir 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Absolutely loved it Nads and Pri...👏👏👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome post really really awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice post Nadia ...very well explained the scenario of the past and duly connecting s it to the future

I completely agree on the fact tht Zeenat has left sahir heartbroken for any reason and tht has actually led sahir to be a Changed man now .

The contract being his bait to win the promise against Zeenat goes on to say a lot ...a man In love will never do anything of the sort of which sahir did ...simply cos a contract CANNOT be the sole reason to Keep the Relationship going ..which brings us to the FACT tht hair n Zeenat were never meant to be n their so called " love or marriage " was a total facade atleast in the eyes of sahir now ..

PS 1 ..since its ur n pri 's effort ..pri good going n great post 😛
PS 2 I agree with u
PS 3 you call him Gorky sir 😲..nahi nahi bahut achhi Baat hai lage raho 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahaha Ecri everyone calls him Gorky Sir so i decided i will too ... didn't want to be batameezbaaz 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeah Nads...kahin tho...kuch baaton me tho hum Bhi Sab ke soch me apni soch mila sakte hain
And be agree baaz instead of contrary baaz 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a wonderful and soulful piece of writing from both of u..
This is more like a saga, he is struggling with all his emotions and power since 7 long years to fulfill that one promise, the promise of love and may be now it has become the sole purpose of his living.. May be he never imagined this promise will have a new meaning, which will open the door of happiness, faith and love in his life once again.

He does not want to get healed from his painful and unfair past, but time will slowly show him that path.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved your write up 👏👏

I really wish to see more of this promise moment between Zeenat and Sahir to actually analyse the real Zeenat 😆 .. Its obvious that she challenged Sahir in a taunting way but in return he gave her the prommise with full honesty ..

But I m sure there is more to the story than just the promise especially before the accident .. On one hand he made a promise and on other hand he gifted her a car ... All this followed by an accident ,... Something is definitely missing in between these 2 incidents 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good post well written ur right zeeant story is half way it's not simple as shown kuch to gadbad hai sahir eyes says a different story .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Loved your write up 👏👏

I really wish to see more of this promise moment between Zeenat and Sahir to actually analyse the real Zeenat 😆 .. Its obvious that she challenged Sahir in a taunting way but in return he gave her the prommise with full honesty ..

But I m sure there is more to the story than just the promise especially before the accident .. On one hand he made a promise and on other hand he gifted her a car ... All this followed by an accident ,... Something is definitely missing in between these 2 incidents 🤔


For sure there is more to the story ... a lot more ... but whether its between the promise or accident or after the accident remains to be seen

I so wish they show sahir's past alongside his present ... you know a few flash backs of his life before ... may be as a kid ... even if they don't want to reveal all yet they can throw in the teasers

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