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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: TheFaerieQueen
Wish 🤗
This is beautiful.
Thankyou so much, this day was becoming unbearable otherwise😆😆

You are welcome Sarika🤗

It was the boring day that inspired me too.. am just happy you enjoyed it😳

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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AnomanderRake
Loved the reference to the show and the interplay. Like Doc said its clever but not in a removed of the whole MaNan context way. Sometimes when stories are too clever , they are stripped of the very essential that made you love this pairing.
However here, It still shines of the MaNan relationship even if the context is different.
And I love it.
Missed u 13th.
Glad to see you back

CC!

Am so pleased that you liked it😳😳 Am sure you don't remember, but you were the first person I spoke to on this forum (am quite an introvert, so this a big deal for me).. anyway, you insisted I keep coming back and after that I did.. so when you say it, it always means that much more..

I love the essence of the MaNan relationship.. their unspoken connect is everything to me and I wouldn't ever change that.. this was intended more as a tribute to the show and it's brilliant writers than any original attempt on my part because this couple is flawlessly written.. there is no question of improving upon them.. at best, we can only tweak our perspective.. which is what I tried to go for😆

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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Noorie30
Hey 13th Wish!

Usually i don't like reading OS that is too different from the main story line but yours is the exception to the rule!!!I am really in awe of how cleverly you integrated touches of MaNan in yours.👏 Wow!it is sheer brilliance the way you merged their convo from KY2 in your OS. Too Good👍🏼

I totally love it! ❤️

Noorieee.. 🤗

Thank you😳 I'm so happy you liked it.. Honestly, it's just a testament to the number of times I rewatch every episode that I can quote almost every dialogue now.. Lol MaNan is just so engraved in my brain like that😆😆

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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: VKlovesFK
Awww that was so cute..<3
Can you please continue this?

Thanks Vaishu..

TBH, this is supposed to be an OS only but will consider it maybe😉

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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: charminggenie
13th🤗, My wish- You be happy, blessed and never stop writing!!
"Do you think the universe fights for souls to be together?
Some things are too strange and strong to be coincidences."

^^Your lovely piece reminded me of this, it was the unmasked intention of fates behind this serendipity when these two strangers connected on phone , very much reminiscent of Manik-Nandu first meeting.

Is this not what life is all about, Hope- somehow the whole existence is confined to this word- yet it is symbolized by so many varied thoughts. The thing loathed by one is adored by another- but in the end they both believed in Hope. Even with all the darkness , every much like these two strangers, Manik-Nandu even with all darkness around them never part with their faith in hope , hence fated.

Stars and Fireflies.

This was such a nice mirage which reflected the Manik-Nandu relationship and our struggles with hope so beautifully. 13th, you know I adore your words but it's the depth of your understanding behind these emotions that makes it so engaging. Keep writing!!

Oh god, Genie.. you overwhelm me with these words.. this is why you be my fencing partner.. HAMESHA😳😳

But yes, that was the intention.. MaNan in any universe, time or space are Fated.. meant to be.. soulmates.. so it is inevitable that they will find each other.. come together.. become one.. the road taken may differ but the destination is forever fixed..

I like the idea of hope.. I don't often believe in it.. but the idea is so comforting..

MaNan makes me envious sometimes.. their destiny is so reassuring.. the certainty of finding home in each other.. they are after all two sides of the same coin..

These are the times when I wish that real life would mirror art too sometimes😆

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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: punya25
Firstly, Thank you so much! 😃
I was waiting whole day waiting to read an OS to save me from this boring Sunday.
Thanku so much for making my day.

Coming to the OS...it's just adorable!!
Amazing work 👏

You are welcome.. I completely understand your boredom.. that was what inspired this piece too..

Am happy you were entertained atleast for a while.. sundays without KY2 are hard😆

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13thwish

@13thwish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Arshirox97
Beautiful!! The stars and fireflies always rock together! Are u going to continue it anyways??

Thank you😳 I can't promise.. perhaps if inspiration strikes me..

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PooraiPaagol

@PooraiPaagol

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Its beautiful :') i was smiling the entire time i was reading this.thank you.

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daisy_luvs_ ff

@daisy_luvs_ ff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

thats a beautiful piece of writing, how u interleaved real dialogues in a different context was indeed very enjoyable to read...as others mentioned, very clever :D

do keep writing

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