A new Swaron FF (Unnamed) (Updated on Pg 10) - Page 9

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow mind blowing love it ohh d majnu swayam n his siren gosh love there convo it is totally swaron style love to read more song selection was awesome abt d title yup that's a nice title n suits u r story update soon

Originally posted by: srinidhi94

nice update...

i love the song and imagining swaron on this song with your words is a wonderful feeling...

loved the update... thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...

Awesome Work !!

Well done...it was such a cute update...

Originally posted by: HSFA

IMP: Do read the note at the end of the update its very imp for future updates thanks.

Chapter 1: The Rain Dance

Sharon had been waiting for him since the past 15 minutes. Its been a long wait for her. She hated to wait and this might have been the 1^st time that she had waited for anybody that too for so long. But he was not a no body. He was her boyfriend...no he was something more than that. He was special. But whatever he had no right to make her wait so long for him, instead he should have been waiting but no...did he care? No. He did not know what had she been going through while waiting for him. She was waiting for him today and if he didn't turn up then she had to wait for him her whole life. She had gone nuts, she thought and kept looking at the time in her cell. Enough. She decided to call but then didn't. Of course,why should she? She would not. It was true that she had been changing due to him and too for the better but she couldn't leave her anger...not at all!! After all even he loved it and she loved it when he apologizes to her. He was really so cute...she stared at his picture on her wallpaper.

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"You are dead today for sure!" Swayam expressed his fear on not getting to meet Sharon on time. What would he say to her? Who will guarantee that she will believe him? Oh God! He was nervous. Surely,he was. Getting Sharon Rai Prakash to forgive the person who had been late in meeting her was next to impossible. Although he does hold a strong position in her life but doesn't mean that she is going to forget and forgive. Rules are equal for all. He chuckled on remembering as to how Sharon told him with full authority that he should not take her lightly and all he could was just smile and nodded to the every single thing that she said. He was on obedient student after all.

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As he was approaching Sharon his heart beats have raised as to how will he control Sharon. He knew in anger she is demanding. He stood behind her and just tapped on her shoulder lightly making her look at him.

"Yes?" Sharon asked with full authority. Swayam made a cute sorry face'and started with the reasons. "Actually...Sharon...I was stuck in an important work...really. Believe me. I didn't did this intentionally I was just...just..." Sharon looked at him with her fierce eyes. "What?" Swayam looked at her and tried again to clarify. "Just late.I was busy setting up the choreography with Rey so I didn't realized that you must be waiting for me. So please let it be this time I promise to never do it again." Swayam proposed his dilemma in front of her like a school student and she listened to it calmly. "Yeah right. After all I am not important to you,right? You committed to meet me and just didn't turn up at the right moment may I know why?" Sharon asserted command over the situation.

She had been enjoying all this for long. The truth of the matter was that she was busy staring at his picture and kept on talking to it on how he was late and had all the right to be angry and all. She also went on to see a few clips of his dance and time flew easily for her. She wasn't angry. She was having fun with her boyfriend.

Meanwhile,Swayam was feeling low for making her wait for so long .Actually he was sacred. Scared of losing her. The fear of she breaking up with him crept inside him. It wasn't that he didn't trust her he did. But was just afraid. Afraid of losing her again. The dream of having her by his side has been fulfilled after so long and he wanted it to continue. After a long wait for 5 years,she was finally his and so the fear was losing has also intensified with time. Maybe,he has become more protective of her but he doesn't want to lose her at any cost. No way.

"So don't you have to say anything in your justification?" Sharon spoke breaking the silence between then and her voice brought Swayam back to reality. "I am sorry." He didn't meet gaze with her and that put Sharon off. "Hey...relax I was just kidding Swayam. It's completely fine." Swayam's face lit up and he heard those comforting words from her. He wasted no time and jumped to hug her. She hugged him back. He had tears of joy and Sharon noticed this.

"What now?" She inquired. "I am glad you didn't break up with him. Thanks." This stunned Sharon. Beaking up? Where did that came from? And why the hell would you break up with him? "What? How could you..." He cut her midway. "I am madly, deeply and crazily in love with you Sharon. I can't afford to lose you. I don't possess the strength to lose you now because you are finally mine." All Sharon was do was to stare at him. He was truly her lover boy. She cupped his face and made him look at her.

"I know that I am a little...ok very impulsive but that doesn't mean that I will break up with you just like that. I can't Swayam. You are my life. You made me realize that love conquers all. So how can I...? I can't even think of it now. Just coz you were late I will never break up with you on a reason like that in fact not on any reason. Nothing is sweeter than this love. Your love changed me and made me feel the love and I did. Mr.Shekhawat if you love me deeply, crazily and madly and I am also not behind to love you passionately, sincerely and wholly."

She had tears in her eyes and Swayam went ahead to wipe them off. He kissed on her forehead making her close her eyes to soak all the love that he pours on her. Feeling his lips on her skin was love. He assured that he has just become a little more sensitive after what they had been through and promised her to never let her go even if she wanted to.

They decided to walk back to Sharon's house. Sharon leaned on his shoulder while he had his hands on her waist...lovingly holding her together. They look perfect as they walked past the "chai stall" and on Sharon's demand on having another "Chai Date" with him made them come back to him and order for two cups of "special tea." A warm smile was playing on their lips.

As tea was served they took its first sip relishing its taste. "Its really yummy!!" Sharon told her boyfriend who looked amazed at him. "Really? You found it nice?" Swayam wasn't convinced. "Of course Swayam haven't you seen me relishing "chai" on our date?" She quips. "I have...but having tea that too from a road stall is so not like you Sharon." She smiled at his logic. "Hmm...but you see I am changing and I never knew that the tea that they sell here is so mouthwatering. I always felt it to be unhygienic." She completed her stance. "So why now?" Swayam was eager to know her answer as if she would say something special. "Because I am with you and when we are together I know that nothing can go wrong ever." He stared at her innocence and adored her more. "I feel as if I am getting to know you again." He told her while sipping the hot tea. "Of course you are. You are getting to know Swayam's Sharon." They both shared a laugh.

As they were having tea Sharon felt water droplets on her skin and to her delight it was rain. She had never been fond of rains but she knew that Swayam loved it. She had seen the spark on his face on seeing the water droplets pouring heavily from the sky. He was enjoying like a kid while she was admiring him. While he was out of the shed in the rain he insisted her to come along side as well but she stayed inside the shed as an idea came to her mind. She went to him and covered his eyes with her hands and twirled him around. He was astonished to see there...she was really changing. She went to him and asked for a dance to which he readily agreed and so she played the song.

Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do Zara

Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do Zara

Dheemi si dhadkan ko badne do zara

Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh pass a jaaye...

He twirled her and she rsted her body sweetly in his arms. They stare deep into each other's eyes...

Hum...Hum Tum...

Tum..Hum..Tum...

He slowly made her stand and they kept staring he looked at her and made her moun his name as he kissed her nape...

aankhon mein humko utarne do zara

baahon mein humko pighalne do zara

lamhon ki guzarish hai ye paas aa jaayen

There was passion...intensity and love. It was bound to happen...they were finally together. He had his hands on her waist as she had on his shoulders and they swirl slowly to the beats of their hearts...

hum.. hum tum..

tum.. hum tum..

Chanting each other's name...

salvatein kahin karwatein* kahin

phail jaaye kaajal bhi tera

nazron mein ho guzarta hua

khwabon ka koi kafila

He came near her made her look at him and leaned forward as she tries to escape he held her hands...and makes her bump into him...she closes her eyes in anticipation...

jismon ko ruhon ko jalne do zara

sharmohaya* ko machalne do zara

lamhon ki guzarish hai Yeh paas aa jaayen

He creases her arms lightly making her go crazy and they keep swirling in that direction while the rain keeps its mercy on them. She looks at him and he lifts her up making her close her eyes again as she enjoys the rain making her fully drenched...

hum.. hum tum..

tum.. hum tum..

He makes her stand next to him and sensuously touches her eyes...nose tip...and then lips. She stares at him and looks down to hide her crimson coloured cheeks...

chhoo lo badan magar is tarah

jaise sureela saaz ho

This was for him...only him...they did some steps with Swayam lifting Sharon and she just got drenched in him...his love... He completes her.

andhere chhupe tere zulf mein

kholo ke raat azaad ho

They did some steps moving lyrically to the music and dancing with full zest and passion not leaving the eye contact for a moment. There was no rehearsal to what they were dancing on it was mere love and comfort that they find in each other.

aanchal* ko seene se dhalne do zara

shabnam ki boondein phisalne do zara

lamho ki guzarish hai Yeh paas aa jaayen

He cupped her face and placed a lovingly peck on her head and as they stare the rain also dries out slowly making them smile to each other...

hum.. hum tum..

tum.. hum tum..

He picks her up much to her surprise and nuzzles in her neck. She just blushed seeing him so close.

"I love you...please always love me the way you do now..." Sharon got a bit emotional getting so much love from the person that she used to hate at one point in time.

"I will always you more than the previous day...my love for you will increase only. And please no crying because ever tear of yours hurts him deeply."

"Of course no more crying after all your wish is my command." He was surprised by these words.

"Copying my lines?"

"No not lines your style as well. From now on your all wishes would be fulfilled I promise." She was determined.

"Hmm are you sure." Swayam winked and Sharon could clearly see a naughtiness in his eyes and she pulled his ears. "Ouch Siren!!" Swayam was dead now. Sharon urged him to put her down and after that the cat and mouse chase began.

Sharon made a keen promise not only to him but to herself as well. She wanted to fulfill all wishes of him and love him all the more like he does. She just wants to get crazy in love. Their love was passionate and intense yet had that sweetness and craziness. Swayam and Sharon are truly made for each other...

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So here's the update finally. Really sry for making u guys wait so much.I was really stuck in studies. I honestly don't know how it turned out to be. Will be waiting for your feedback.

Guys,I really do need your suggestions on this. Do you want me to continue the dates as Swayam's wishlist or can I add things to it like you guys wanted. For example: their first kiss..or a walk on the beach. Plz help me on this.

Also for the title I have thought on keeping it as ,"You Wish is my Command." So do help me decide.

Love

Fatima. 😳

Originally posted by: apy_swaron

Well done...it was such a cute update...

The way sharon is so madly in love with swayam... And swayam's fear about losing her again felt so genuine...

The rain dance couldn't have been better... And what should i say about the song it is one of my personal favourite... And it suited swaron so well...

Truly awesome...

"your wish is my command"... The title cannot be any better

heyya

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

update soon

For the chapter you keep the dates as well as the new wishes. I really wanna see all the dates.
And if you add new wishes it would be like a cherry on the cake.
The chapter was so so beautiful. I always wanted a romantic rain dance.
You are an amazing writer di. Well done.
Thanks a lot for the PM.

Apologies for the late feedback I have been really really busy with my studies and exams.
Keep writing.
awaiting for the next update.