A new Swaron FF (Unnamed) (Updated on Pg 10) - Page 8

this is soo good yar... swayam was too afraid of loosing sharon... ya sharon n waiting for someone is damn dangerous for the person... awww she was kidding n poor swayam was feeling really bad... nd what to say about the rain dance... awesome yar.. the song is apt dear... loved it... update next part soon... thanks 4 d pm

Its beautiful

Di u updated so late thats not fair..I want next update soon..
Coming to the update
It was just amazing.The way u potrayed both their emotions was mindblowing.i enjoyed reading it.Swayam's fear of loosing sharon n sharon comforting him was very well penned down.Rain part was damm romantic.i cant wait for the next part now😃.
N about ur note i want to read extra things between their dates.its ur wish whatever u want to add di..i just love ur writting skills n i know u will do full justice to this ff..So update next part ASAP..

Awesome ..really enjoyed every bit of it.. Even d prologue was amazing ..i read it now..also deir all convos werr written in a total swaronish way..swayams fear of losing sharon.n she making him relax...!! Awesome n d rain dance wrll d song is perfect ..well written n plzzz updatr soon ..
Ps- i wld love to read d d involvement of other wishes in ur stylr too..soo plzz go ahead..n tiltle is perfect bt as a matter of choice i wld say howabt 'unfulfiilled wishes'.. 😊

wow mind blowing love it ohh d majnu swayam n his siren gosh love there convo it is totally swaron style love to read more song selection was awesome abt d title yup that's a nice title n suits u r story update soon

nice update...

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

this is soo good yar... swayam was too afraid of loosing sharon... ya sharon n waiting for someone is damn dangerous for the person... awww she was kidding n poor swayam was feeling really bad... nd what to say about the rain dance... awesome yar.. the song is apt dear... loved it... update next part soon... thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Its beautiful

Swayam's Sharon 😃 'no not your lines but your style too'

Haha loved it

Update soon

Thanks for PM 😊

Originally posted by: HPHolic-3

Di u updated so late thats not fair..I want next update soon..
Coming to the update
It was just amazing.The way u potrayed both their emotions was mindblowing.i enjoyed reading it.Swayam's fear of loosing sharon n sharon comforting him was very well penned down.Rain part was damm romantic.i cant wait for the next part now😃.
N about ur note i want to read extra things between their dates.its ur wish whatever u want to add di..i just love ur writting skills n i know u will do full justice to this ff..So update next part ASAP..

Originally posted by: cutelove

Awesome ..really enjoyed every bit of it.. Even d prologue was amazing ..i read it now..also deir all convos werr written in a total swaronish way..swayams fear of losing sharon.n she making him relax...!! Awesome n d rain dance wrll d song is perfect ..well written n plzzz updatr soon ..
Ps- i wld love to read d d involvement of other wishes in ur stylr too..soo plzz go ahead..n tiltle is perfect bt as a matter of choice i wld say howabt 'unfulfiilled wishes'.. 😊