ArHi SS: One Winter#1. Link for Th 2 on Pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the way story progressing. Noticing her each nuances, trying to fulfill her Wishes is not getting her attention. But acting indifferent towards her is getting her reaction. Interesting waiting for the face off. Thx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story
Just came across
Loved both the chapters

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Posted: 10 years ago
The story is sooo interesting..!!! Loving it...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

The note in the signature kinda stays true even now.


Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
First res itni de baad,

barun ki kasam karungi unres😃
Edited by MsDroolKanthan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mine 😛

***'dermi cool powder'***


So Khushi is aware of Manorama Mami's special dislike for her... well, aise baat pata chal jaata hai... its good to see despite the anxious situation, the two families are in touch... and Anjali is in contacts with everyone of her Mayka... And someday Mami bhi mann jayegi...
loved how khushi explained mami's stance to Arnav... assured him of her love... exactly opposite of that Shit-all... which again makes me wonder why the hell is Arnav hanging that girl aroung his arm... just to show Khushi... mujhe nahi lagta... does he want to keep the lime-light away from what-going-on-between-he-&-Khushi... gosh, how silly that sounds... i should stop wondering...
just see, maine seedha jump karke first se last pe chali gayi... my comment likhne ki tareeka ajeeb hai... jab jo mann mei aate hai likh leti hoon... plz dont mind...
now coming to Aakash Singh Raizada... OMG... am i the only one find him charming... may be Crush-worthy too... but of crs i'm not having crush on him... ab jab Arnav hai picture mein toh kaise kissi aur ko dekhun...
loved his convo with Khushi... he's quite observant right... he's so much similar to Payal... samajhdaar... suljhe-huye... Upar se dono ki language bhi same hai... loved them speaking the same words in same tone (yes, i heard the tone too)
the bond Khushi shares with Aakash is really beautiful... how amazingly she shared all her thoughts with him... those she couldnt even tell her sister... loved his concern for his Choti... and my my, Aakash Singh Raizada already dreaming about having her as his Sister-in-law... well well, its still too early, Aakash Bitwa, if u really want her as your SIL, there's another way too... kya unnhone iss baare mein kabhi kuch socha... ya phir behind everyone's back chup chap bohot kuch chal raha hai...
but one thing for sure, Khushi doesnt hate her 'Kadwe-Karele'... warna itnaaa saara kissies (both shutthi & dilli, right) yuhi silently accept thodi naa karti woh... loved Loved LOVED their 'almost' make out session...
and the twist of tip-gift dialogue... i sooo loved it, with a dammit... he possesses a very shaatir dimaag hain naa... kaise bechari Khushi ko dress pehenne keliye manwa liya... upar se he made her kiss him too... and silly girl, jab you kissed him on his stubble, toh fully usska feel bhi lena tha naa... buddhu kahike...
by the way, loved the rooms of both brothers... they reflect their attribute much... good selection Saiyu... also loved Khushi's dress... pata nahi yeh One Winter ki aasar, ya phir her sweater, but i'm feeling cold, itnaa ki mujhe aaj garam kapde nikalni padi... and that's the reason behind late un-resing... so baby, the fault is all yours... toh aapni galti mann ke take this 'dermi cool powder' and enjoy...
Have fun... lots of love and dilli tissies for Azra, and shutti wala for you... take care...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Akash and Khushi have an amazing bro-sis bond, it might have started when Akash saved her.
People around arnav, khushi know (sensing) that something is going on between these two 😆

What is going on in that head of arnav?. What had happened when they were 8 years old? What did Arnav do which was unforgivable to Khushi? Why Arnav isn't breaking up with Shital? Why is he being so mysterious (they are kinda attractive, may be cause of the mysterious aura around them 😆). Why Akash is worried of Arnav's odd behaviour?. If Arnav really likes khushi, why isn't he disclosing it to anyone? So many why's *sigh*. Rasgulla we need a long update on every fifth or sixth day.

P.s : My guesses- May be a bet for arnav or something. I know it's too stupid 😆. One more guess, you haven't shown Shyam's character yet. We don't what relationship he shares with khushi or arnav. So if I go by that Arnav might haven't liked shyam/ anjali with shyam. So he is going to take revenge on shyam like this 😆
Edited by .Shakti. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

First Of all Awesome chapter and I would not mind any kind of updates you give us. Whatever suits you best. But i would like Fast Updates😉

Akash and Khushi share a wonderful relationship. They seem to understand each other well. Akash is very much mature and a good guy. Now even he is confused about Arnav just like me.😕

They Whole Arshi scene was so beautifully written that it felt like I was there in their room.👏

I am so bad at guessing things so I am not going to guess What the hell is cooking in Arnav's mind. As long as he doesn't hurt khushi cos no matter what Khushi says she starting to like Him. Just hoping that is not some kind of Pay Back thing.

If Arnav is serious about Khushi then why is he with Sheethal? 😒

Why does he do everything in secrets? For others he is dating Sheethal and in side the room he is romancing Khushi...hmmm

Edited by opsyellow - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav seems to be falling in love with Khushi.
And is maybe keeping Sheetal as his GF to keep people from knowing his secret.
Maybe he is not yet ready to accept his feelings for Khushi vefore his family.
Aakash and wpayal have noticed.
Maybe the others will too!
What worried me is Manorama's reaction to this.
Love Aakash.
He is the sweet protective elder brother to Khushi.
He and Payal are the quiet and responsible ones in their families.
What an ideal couple!
Khushi is confused by her reaction to Arnav.
And she still doesn't know or want to accept what she feels for him.
Waiting now for the prom night.

I love reading the long updates.
I wouldn't mind the shorter frequent updates too.
But I do prefer the long ones! 😃

I loved the pictures you posted of the bedrooms.
The rooms are such a reflection of the different personalities.
Very well researched, I must say.
I really liked them.
Edited by 1chilly - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ok that was awesome superb
aww arnav's strategy to make khushi accept the gift😳

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