ARSHI FF : My First Love...~THREAD 3~Chapter 51~Pg138~17/12 - Page 68

Originally posted by: ZANADI

Arnav won the bet by dancing

arrrggg this two stupid girls

just imagine he hear them and tell them few mean words

maybe this is the beginning of his new avatar

and Khushi should make some girl fight😆

sorry sorry my immagination 🤪

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Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Hi dear...Came crosses your story and finds it very interesting...caught with 48 chapters...phew...Very beautifully written. It was a totally different concept dear. It is just beautiful...I am glad that I am able to read your story. It is a story of my favorite jodi...ARSHI...

There school days were one of my favorite scenes...I love the way you have written their school journey. All the characters are fabulous. You have shown love, passion (I will not call it lust) hatred, jealousy and off-course friendship. Friendship is one of the most wonderful thing happens in life. Your wife can be a good friend or a companion to you.

I don't know but I have a soft corner for Arnav...and I don't like when they both love each other why Khushi is behaving like this to him. Each and every person knows about their love...still she is behaving differently with Arnav. I know what Arnav is doing to her is also not correct but she can give him a chance try to change him. Everybody knows that she can do it. I really think Khushi and Arnav needs to talk heart to heart. Because whenever somebody tries to make Khushi understand about Arnav's situation she goes from there. She does not want to listen to them. She loves him but on her own way. Yeh kahan ka inesaf hai. I have already read your note. Love is love do give it a different name. Arnav is just feeling insecure...and insecurity brings lust and jealousy both.

Khushi loves him from their ninth standard and always think about him whether she is alone or with her friends...why she is not conveying this verbally to him. She is not helping Arnav with her this type of attitude.

But this is your baby...Your ARNAV is your ARNAV...so is KHUSHI...readers like me usually comment that we don't like the way your ARSHI is behaving but it does not mean that you can change the characters...it means that we are involved ourselves into your story so much that we are giving our opinions... Please write as you want to write your story. I just wrote it what I observed in this story. I am nobody to suggest you. Please don't get offended. I love this story and please update soon dear. I am sending you a buddy request please accept it.

Originally posted by: ragapriya4331

Hey..

I dont who you are.. I read ur story couple of days before ..

I completed all the chapter in a nyte.. May be I am crazy..

Still I feel to share something about my feeling ...

Ur thought about guys is 100% true..

In story it is very simple a girl accept a guys even he is monster..

But in real how could someone will marry a monster..

Love is mad it need to feel by both the soul.. Not control one soul by soul..

Just my view ur ARS used some girls to get out his frustration..what about her case.. She too undergoing various hurdles.. Sleeplessnyte without him.. If she decide to get out her frustration in same manner..wht this guy will do..

Dont worry dear..

Guys always frame something to make their statement as worth.. Even nature also favour for them.. But for girls it is really a difficult aspect to accept the fact...

Plz continue ur story.. thousand of thought a raise in my mind ..note able to pen down here..

U said it is real story..I can feel it.. Love should be feel by both soul.. Should not offend someone for that..

Pm if possible

Originally posted by: katj

So nice of Arnav to dance for khushi..
Why those two ladies talking rubbish about khushi. Hope Arnav should hear to their talk..
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: jeb1

Nice teaser

update soon

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Waiting dear