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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey all,

It's me again. Thank you for your kind words for my previous post... 😊

Needless to say, this is inspired by the first scene from today's episode... I am not very sure about these lines, because I wasnt sure if I should wait for the scene tomorrow and write one long poem. But I couldn't stop myself😳

Humne dekha hai logon ko gunaah karte hue

mandir maseedon mein maafi maangte hue

Humne dekha hai takdeeron ko ulajhte hue

Duaaon ko dekha hai ranjhish suljhaate hue

Humne dekha hai adaalaton mein gunahgaaron ko

Qazee bhi jahaan sazaa ke saath maafi i'laam karte hain

Hum woh be-bas hain jo khudki neki par bhi afsos karte hain

Hum woh bad-naseeb hain jo aaine mein bhi aandhi dekhte hain

Hum woh be-rahm hain jo apni mohabbat ko khud sazaa sunaate hain

all feedback welcome😊

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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again very good lines lucky ...😳

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eternalasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Very Nice and apt for the seen today

Nice to see you on the Humsafars forum - look forward to your posts

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Junoonian

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Especially liked the last three lines. Very apt.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hum woh be-bas hain jo khudki neki par bhi afsos karte hain

Hum woh bad-naseeb hain jo aaine mein bhi aandhi dekhte hain

Hum woh be-rahm hain jo apni mohabbat ko khud sazaa sunaate hain

the last three lines are awesome 👏

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Ecrivain

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Posted: 11 years ago

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AGN it's Awesome

Btw pls make sure u have an index of ur posts ..that way we can all read ur poems / verses when we want 😛

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishiSam
Nice!!! Keep posting :)

Thank You 😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Sia--
again very good lines lucky ...😳

Thanks Sia 😃

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nafisaz
Lovely 😊

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: eternalasha
Very Nice and apt for the seen today

Nice to see you on the Humsafars forum - look forward to your posts

Hey... nice to see you too 😃

thank you for your comments 😊

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