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Posted: 10 years ago
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Turn Around!

Part-4:

Arjun cut the call and saw our smiling faces.

"It's done."

"Yeh, we are going!"

"Not before we finish this case!"

He said as we were more than ready to work now.

We discussed the traveling plan at lunches.

That day the talk came to packing.

"Just for two days. Three T-shirts are enough, right Shree?" Chottu turned to me.

"What about the pants?" I asked.

"Why, I have a jean in black!" he replied coolly.

"Chottu, you can't wear jeans there. Forgot it?"I reminded him then.

"Oh, yes! Yes!"

"We don't have any problem!" Sakshi started.

"We need to take only one set!" Ayesha continued.

"Ayesha! Do you have a salvar in white?"

Sakshi turned to Ayesha.

"No, I'm going to buy something this evening!"

"I'm coming along!"

"Hey, What? A white salvar in devil?"

I asked in confusion, confusingly.

"No, it was A devil in white salvar!'"

Chottu interpreted.

"We didn't hear of it! Always a devil should be in sari or in a gown!"

"We are modern ones then!" Sakshi lifted her collar proudly.

"What about the hairdo?"

"Why, just like this!" she touched her free hair.

"It's for traditional ones!"

"Then why do we change the modern Chottu s perfect ponytail into a cultural father's hair cut using a wig?" she returned.

"And he will be I a sherwani, traditionally'!"

I emphasized.

"We don't come under the category of humans?"

"Then?"I asked cheerfully.

"Under devils!"

"So?"

"You can't control us!" she finished the topic by saying so.

Then it had changed into a fashion that mentioning them by the name Devil'.

"We are hugry!" I said.

"We too!"

"Really? We are going to eat!"

Sakshi got where the convo was leading to and replied.

"We are going to eat you two!"

"You can get a stock for future if you try Chottu!"

"And we will put him in stock and now try you first!"

She stood and approached me.

"Try that!" I suggested him.

"This looks better, right!" Chottu turned to show me his pepper-salt gray wig.

"No doubt, it is! But I doubt it for you!"

He turned angrily toward me.

"Oh, not now actually!"I escaped.

Sakshi and Ayesha entered into the shop and saw Chottu.

"See, he is looking like a father now, right?"

I volunteered.

"Your father!" Sakshi corrected me.

"Something is lacking!" Ayesha suggested.

"See, Ayesha! The hairdo aptly goes with him," she pointed out me here," Of course there is no mirror-like glasses on the nose! But except that we can call him his father'!"

Even one or two shop members turned to me with a new eye now.

I saw Ayesha for help. She smiled at me reassuringly and said,

"But still', something is missing!" she smiled.

She too had joined with Sakshi to pull my legs badly, I got then .

"How about a mustache?"

"That's it, Sakshi. We can try one, say... this one?"

She chose oone.

"Not a hitler one!"

"Then a thick and wide one?"

"It's ok, but it won't suit him." She denied right away.

"To Chottu or what?" Ayesha squinted at her.

"Whatever, he is his son too, right?"

"Oh! Oh!!" we cried aloud at her.

After a long discussion (?!) we decided one that was somewhat thick, but not wide much.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Turn Around!

Part-5:

We started walking through the road-side shops.

"Got your salvar?" I asked Ayesha.

"Got on but not a salvar!"

She replied.

"Meaning?"

"I bought a gown instead!"

"Why did you change into traditional suddenly?"

I asked simply.

"To show you none can control devils!"

The girls shouted in unison and I closed my ears in shock.

We were watching the items as we moved through the street.

"I thought if I bought a gown I can use it in future."

Ayesha said quietly a moment later.

"Girls!" Chottu and I muttered.

"You've to say' simplicity' here!" Sakshi insisted.

We rolled our eyes.

"Chottu!" Sakshi called him to warn him.

"Yes, Ma'am!"

"Are you too going to tease us?"

"Why, no! How can I?" he started back- firing.

"Oh, how can he, Miss? Then it'll be Eve-teasing! And you d call the police!" I tried to save my side myself.

"A good one!" Sakshi retorted back.

"Well, like the one in our office?'

"No!"

"What? Isn't he too that much good?"

I saw the other shocking faces as we reached the main road.

"No! She shattered his image at once and said,"He is not in the office. Here he comes!" she motioned Arjun, who was getting out of the car.

"How could you find him in the crowd?"

"See, Ayesha, she can even forget our presence, if he shows up! But not him even when we cry like a...a donkey!" I complained.

"You are not a donkey, Shree! You are a monkey and monkeys chatter!" She murmured as we approached Arjun.

He was leaning against the car."What guys," he sighed," Did you finish the shopping?"

He asked as though he was waiting for us and for hours as well.

"Almost sir! Did the meeting go well?"

I reminded him the situation.

But he asked, as though I did not ask him that question.

"What does this' almost mean?"

"Except a pair of ear studs, we've finished everything!"

"Can't you find them here?" he asked uncertainly.

"She asks a white one, sir!" I explained.

"And who is this' she'?"

"Sak- shi'!" I told him rhythmically.

"I thought so and what about you Ayesha? "

"I have a pair, sir!"

"I too have one, but it has a black bead at the centre!"

"And bangles?"

He asked, mockingly.

"Oh, I forgot it!"

"We can't!" I murmured.

"You, Ayesha?" he turned to Ayesha.

"I don't want them for my free full sleeve gown sir!"

"Good! And why don't you wear a full sleeve Sakshi?"

"Full sleeve or not I need them for my salvar!"

She insisted hotly.

"Come with me, I'll buy you something!"

"In white!"

He entered into a shop and asked the girl to show them some pieces in white.

The girl showed some studs.

Sakshi was eagerly extending a hand to pick one, but before that she could do, he selected one, "Yes, it is!", picked it up in hand and turned to us.

"Guys! How is this?"

"Nice sir!" we chorused.

He turned to Sakshi then.

"Sakshi, we like this! Do you like this?"

She nodded dejectedly.

We smirked at his trick.

He turned to the girl," This one! Can you show us some bangles for this girl in white?"

The girl put the box before him his time, cleverly.

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Awesome update sweet..
I really loved them..
This story of urs is going too good..
I am loving this too much.
Pllishh update as soon as u can and pliishh PM me.
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really nyce. .
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Hey vlcmback..nyc to see u again here. 😊
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My, my, Thanks drsss, glad u lkd it, 'll surely pm u, the next updates.. big , big hugggs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back dear

Awesome story

ETF ki conference room yaad aagayi Chotu, Shree, Sakshi ki nonstop bakbak, Arjun ka hard glare, Ayesha ka sab ko chup karaana

Aww clever Arjun. He selected ear studs & bangles for Sakshi. How sweet
Edited by Nethravathi - 10 years ago
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Turn Around!

The last scene-

"Sakshi, we like this! Do you?" Arjun asked.

She nodded dejectedly.

We smirked at his trick.

He turned to the girl, "This one! Can you show us some bangles for this girl in white?"

The girl put the box before him this time, cleverly.

Now-

Part-6:

We came out of the accessories shop as Sakshi glared at us.

We deliberately took fast steps and joined Arjun.

"Sir, have you purchased everything for our trip?"

"I have enough suits already!"

"And accessories?" Sakshi had reached us. We got then.

"I need only one accessory and I have it!" he lifted his left hand and showed his watch.

We smirked at Sakshi, who turned her face away hastily.

.~.

"Sakshi the studs and the bangles were really nice, but if you don't like them we can shop something different this evening."

Ayesha suggested.

"I don't need anything now! I'm contented with them!" Sakshi announced and added, "After all they were his selection!", with a smile.

Ayesha widened her eyes and shut her mouth tightly.

Two days before the trip:

I went to the house in question to plant some instruments.

I entered through the back door with my master key and started setting cameras and transmitters on every room except bath room!


I was setting the last piece and called Chottu to verify the connection.

"Chottu On' the monitor and check whether the thing is working!"

"Right!"

"Chottu!"

He was not answering me.

"Chottu, are you there?"

Still I got no response.

''What happened to him?'

I cut the call and tried Ayesha's number.

She attended it all right, but I could not hear anything- No, I could hear everything then!

I heard a thunderous noise continuously.

After a minute the noise started getting down, but slowly and at some point it reached an audible level. It was my favorite song playing in the background as Ayesha was shouting in the foreground.

"Shree! What have you done to your system? Once he switched it on it started exploding like this!"

"Oh, My God! I forgot to warn him not to touch the pink button! Where is Arjun Sir?" I asked my first question then as I got the situation in.

"He is out now!"

"Uhh!-" I sighed.

"But he'll be here now at any moment!"

"OMG! Where is Chottu?"

"In the computer room!"

"And you?"

"In the terrace! Why , can't you hear me clearly still?"

"No, Now I can hear the song clearly. My project won! I was trying to get this effect for months, you know! I didn't get a chance to test it!"

"Not anymore! If we can't shut the thing now, then you won't see it ever and we won't see your face in the office again!"

"Ayesha, the pink button! The one in the box attached to the system along with a special amplifier in black. Just the pink one! Please, touch it only once! Now!"

I started pleading.

Then again I heard the thunderous sound increasing and it became unbearable as moments passed.

'What an effect!' I wondered.

Ayesha talked again, "Shree! After you finish there, you better come over here in running and remove this special thing at once or it may be used again you in the future!"

She clearly threatened me.

"Now if you please give the mobile to Chottu I'll finish the first task, quickly!"

I gave in at once.

Chottu came on the line, "Shree, I can see the house now. Fantastic work! I can see every room. Nice house, right?"

"Chottu! See I'm fixing the last piece here. Tell me you can see me now!"

Then his tone changed.

"Shree, Shree! You are exposed! Someone is in the house!"

"What? I checked the entrance before I enter. Chottu, what are you saying?"

"Shree, believe me! Someone else is there. I can see him in one of the rooms!"

I got tense and moved on the stool, I was standing on. I was thinking a safe way out.

"Shree! He got that you are there! He is coming to you! God, Escape man!"

He shouted.

I had reached the end of the stool unknowingly and was seeing the possibilities still.

I moved further and lost the grip under me. That brought me down fast and was trying to get up.

It was when Chottu said," Oh, God! Shree! You know, he just fell down from a stool!-"

He stopped his running commentary as he heard me laughing aloud letting aside the pain from the fall.

"Shree! Why are you laughing now and why?-Yeh...Stupid!"

He called me then sweetly.

"Why didn't you tell me that you were in disguise? You fool! See the bump on your head!"

I was still laughing as I rubbed my head.

"Look, Shree! I warn you! It's your worst day, I think. If you get caught in my hands..."

He stopped short and said,

"Shree! Arjun sir is coming!"

He said it in a lower voice and it worked well.

The laughter stopped short and I was again on the stool working seriously with the transmitter.

I asked him, "Can you hear me? I -"

"Yes, I can!"

"Chottu!"

"Yes!"

"Cut the call and tell me-no, wait! Hear me out!"

"Yeah, tell me!"

"First switch on the green button in the connecting box and then cut the call and tell me when I call you back!"

"Right!"

/.

/.

"It's working!"

"Say so to Arjun sir!"

"Sure, when he arrives!"

He grinned at the phone and I could see every single detail of his tooth.

[Thanks dr Vasu, for the help you've done to finish this part more comically!]

Edited by greensakthi - 10 years ago
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Turn Around!

Part-7:

Next Morning:

We watched that Mr. Wargade had arrived there. He had secured the things of the house along with the supposed loan' and now he arranged for the cleaning of the house.


I saw at the centre of the hall a man with a gear was working as he was standing on the same stool I was using the day before.

I smiled at Chottu and he signaled me to check myself and not to get exposed.

That afternoon the maids finished their work and left, I gathered.

Then I informed our team that it was time to start our work.

The camera planted in a bedroom showed that Mr. Wargade was sleeping peacefully.

As we planned, we had to start talking into the transmitter planted in that room.

The problem was the matter which should be talked over it, had not been prepared, among the riot we were facing every day.

"Prepare something fast!" Arjun turned to me.

"If he woke up without our introduction then it'd be difficult for us to proceed tomorrow!"

I turned to Ayesha.

Sakshi and Chottu were actually preparing that something'!-fast.

"Ayesha, start talking something and once he wakes up Sakshi will come and join you with the notes!"

I urged her.

She blinked a moment then cleared her throat once.

Right!'

"In whose voice I've to talk now?" she asked nervously.

"Why don't you use yours?" I suggested sullenly.

"Right!"

She braced herself at once.

"Talk in the mike once I signaled you, right?"

I gave her the head phone as I switched on the corresponding transmitter.

I signaled her slowly.

'Now!'

She once again cleared her throat and started,

"Hello!"

Chottu and Sakshi looked up from their seats.

Arjun was watching the drama silently to my surprise. His eyes never turned away from the monitor.

I snapped off the mike and turned to Arjun before to Ayesha. I could not understand from his face that what was going inside him. Sakshi might tell, suppose, I thought.

"Ayesha!" I called her calmly.

"Mm!" she replied in a shaky voice.

"You are not in a public meeting or booth!"

"Yes, I'm not. Why?"

I denounced her then sternly.

"You are really a devil, now!"

She glared at me and I added, "And talk like one!"

She nodded nervously.

I gave in immediately.

"Right! Let me give you some idea here!"

She smiled at me at once.

"You are waiting for a friend, a devil one! And you miss her badly, for you've to say something to her. Remind the truth that you don't have the facility of a mobile connection and nothing to contact her!" I added for her to understand it better.

"Ok!"

"Talk to me first!"

She nodded and swiveled her chair toward the wall.

I quietly switched on the mike without informing her.

She started," Oh, Where did she go? I couldn't find her for hours..."

Arjun whispered to me, "He doesn't stir still!"

I increased the volume then and it worked well.

Wargade stirred in his bed.

I increased the volume further.


"...I've to say this to her, now! It's easy when he is still in sleep!"


She was improving fantastically.

He opened his eyes and slowly came to a sitting position.

"Where can I search her? Did she again go into one of her favorite holes? Hah!" she sighed dramatically.

Sakshi and Chottu stopped writing and were watching the scene from their chairs.

"Right! Let's see her in the kitchen or in the kitchen sink to be exact."

I chuckled and decreased the volume, for the devil was now going away from the bed room to the kitchen or to the kitchen sink!

He too got out of the bedroom and went to the hall on the thought that the television was on.

He wondered at seeing the quiet T.V.

He stood there for some time, trying to reason with the matter.

I played some sound which said that the wind was whirling fiercely as Ayesha was preparing her next lines.

She started again and I cut the wind flow sound.

"I couldn't find her there! There was nothing except these two cockroaches under the sink. I've even tried the plugs there!"

The man was blinking.

"What can I do now? Even the devil man has arrived, but the woman devil hasn't!"

I looked Sakshi. To my surprise she was smiling at Ayesha.

The man came back to the bed room again confusingly.

He took his mobile from the dressing table to check.

"Oh, Ho! I've checked everywhere that seemed to be her hiding place, even under this man's pants..."

Mr. Wargade wondered and looked down his pajama pants unintentionally.


"...Which is hanging on the wall!"

She continued with a sigh.


Even Arjun could not control his laughter he was pressing his lips with teeth.

I cut the connection at once and laughed aloud uncontrollably.

Ayesha turned to me with a grin.


"What do you say, Shree? Is it all right?"

"It is!" I said motioned towards the monitor.

The man was standing near his hanging pants like a frightened fox!

"It's over and was awesome!"

"Oh!" Ayesha got the truth and grinned.

"I wonder if he gets a sleep tonight!"

It went intractable and the room filled with Chottu and me's room shaking laughter, Arjun 's muffled laughter, Sakshi s bashful chuckle as Ayesha grinned and said, "Sorry!", beautifully.

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Turn Around!

Part-8:

After that first episode, it was much easier for us to stage our drama.

That night, he was sitting before the T.V.

He seemed as though he had overcome the initial trouble which was made by Ayesha.

I again played the wind flow and switched on the transmitter planted in the hall.

It caught his attention at once.

He turned his head left then right, but could not find the source of the sound.

He stood up and closed the door and windows then resumed watching T.V.

Ayesha started laughing aloud," Yeh, See this fool!"

"Who, the one sitting on the sofa?"

Sakshi asked.

"The one, who thinks a wooden door and a mere window can shut us out and closed them just now"

She started laughing again.

The man was on his feet now.

"Is this the fellow you mentioned?"

"Exactly! See once mentioned him, he got to his feet at once and is standing in attention as though to say, Present Miss!'"

"Hey! How did he know that you were a 'Miss?' "

They both laughed aloud.

He switched off the T.V. and ran toward the bed room.

But before he could reach the room and latched inside, he heard the voices inside.

"Hey! We first!"

They both High- fived, cheerfully.

Slowly he got his heart in his throat.

He stood against the wall in terror.

"Come on. Sit here by me in the cot. I don't think he'll come near the cot any time now!"

Sakshi said.

"Yes, my legs are paining badly, now! It's just because of you! How many times should I tell you not to go away far without informing?"

"Oh, come on! You've already scolded me for that! And it seems you've forgotten that we don't have legs now!" She laughed at Ayesha.

"While searching you my ghost legs too are paining! It's boring here and I just don't like this fellow that much. I'm going. Are you coming or not?"

"Behind you!"

I cut the mike and lifted my thumb towards the girls.

Mr. Wargade was still standing against the wall, looking bewilderingly at the bed.

Next Morning:

"Chottu, are you coming or not?" I shouted at him.

"Just this towel, my favorite one!" he stuffed the towel into his bag and went once again inside for the fourth time in the past two minutes.

I got out of the car and followed him as the girls sitting inside the car giggled.

I dragged him out of the house and snarled.

"Sir has called twice already!"

"Coming!" he glared and shook my hold effortlessly.

I stopped the car in front of Arjun s house and turned back to the girls just to say, "Girls! Don't get down, we are late already!" , but were already standing outside the car.

'Very Well!'

I got down and jingled the bell.

A man in full suit opened the door.

Sakshi shouted," Wow, Arjun! It's awesome!" Once seeing the charming, full sleeve, smart man.

Arjun did not even smile.

He turned to me, "Can we go!"

"Sir!"

He produced a suitcase and went inside without asking us to come in.

Sakshi put a step inside and started looking hither and thither, eagerly.

"Yeh, there is a picture on the cupboard! Mm... books! Hitler? Oh, God!" She turned to the other side of the room and said excitedly, "There is a picture of the team on the fridge!"

I was tempted to sneak in and see the picture once, but I saw Arjun was coming out of a room.

I cleared my throat once and Sakshi lifted her siege at once.

"Shree, stuff the things in the other car and-" he looked the girls and seemed thinking.

"And the girls, sir?" I asked humbly and the girls glared at me.

"No, I've other plans for them. Get a taxi and-"

"Stuff them in?"

This time Sakshi started talking," Shree! Let him speak!"

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