IshRa OS: Yours...Humesha and Forever

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just a little something I penned down today. Likes/comments always appreciated.

❤️ Nivi

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They arrive at a secluded lakeside beach just in time to watch the sunset. They both sit down next to each other on the wooden dock, their feet dangling over the edge. She is mesmerized by the beauty of the bright orange ball of lava sinking into the water. As the sun sets, it leaves vivacious streaks of red, purple, and blue painted across the sky, reflected even more beautifully in the flowing water. It's as if a painter has haphazardly just thrown a few splashes of color into the clouds, letting the colors bleed into each other to create the majestic hues of the evening sky. In a matter of moments, the burning orange circle completely disappears into the horizon, leaving the two of them sitting on the wooden dock in a blissful darkness, a harmonious silence flowing between them.

The soft chirping of the crickets and deep croaking of the frogs soon fill the silence. She is taking in the beauty of the moment, when her hand brushes against his. They both look towards each other, their faces just a few inches away from one another. She can feel his warm breath, on her cheek. She can feel her pulse rising, her heart beating faster and faster. She is sure her heart is beating loud enough for him to hear.

He is mesmerized by her innocent almond brown eyes. He is enchanted by the way the contours of her face are softly illuminated by the dim light of the lantern on the dock. He traces the lines of her face, running his fingers across her soft cheeks, down her long neck. He traces the outline of her plump, rosy lips gently with his fingers, leaving her breathless.

She can feel herself drifting towards him, inch by inch, until her lips are just barely touching his lips. He fills the distance between their lips as he puts his arms around her waist. She melts under his tender touch. She puts her arms around his neck rubbing his ear gently, enticing him; teasing him to go further. He responds by kissing her harder, even more passionately. Her lips part open giving him full access to her mouth. His tongue finds its way inside and seductively teases her. He runs his hands through her long, luscious hair. She responds by running her fingers down his spine, giving him goosebumps. She tugs softly at his hair, as he runs his tongue across her teeth. She runs the back of her hand softly across his cheek, feeling the roughness of the stubble that she found so sexy on him this very morning. It pricks and tickles the smooth skin of her cheek, as he slowly brings the kiss to a close. They both part from each other to catch their breaths.

She can feel his minty breath on her lips, while he can still taste her sweet strawberry lip gloss. She inches closer to him again, desperately wanting more. She touches her lips to his stubbly chin, letting the prickly beard tickle her bottom lip for a few moments. She closes her eyes as she puts her arms around his shoulders again and slowly moves her lips up to his. She takes the lead this time, letting the soft kiss develop slowly, letting her tongue linger on his lips for a few moments. He strokes the back of her neck gently, sending chills down her spine. She becomes more intense, kissing him harder, with a certain thirst. His lips fiercely respond back to hers with the same passion. She breaks the kiss with her moans as he begins rubbing her lower back with small circular motions. He leaves a trail of soft kisses from her mouth all the way down her neck, stopping at her collar bone. She makes him groan with pleasure as she playfully nuzzles her nose into his neck, tickling him with her warm breath.

She tenderly glides her soft cheek across his cheek, letting his lips gently graze her cheekbones. Her pulse rises even higher, making her feel dizzy with passion. She inhales deeply to calm herself down, but instead she becomes more ravenous for him, as she gets a strong whiff of the delicious smelling cologne that he has on. She tilts her face down just as he is bringing himself towards her. His lips collide warmly with her forehead. Her hair falls over her shoulders, partially blocking his view of her face. He gently brushes her hair back with his fingers as he touches his lips gently to the corner of her mouth. She puts her hands around his waist, tightly clinging on to his sculpted body. She can feel him shiver with pleasure under his thin cotton t-shirt.

He delicately caresses her lower lip with his lips as he traces little spiral patterns all across her back with his index finger, sending chills down her spine. She shudders with pleasure as she tilts her head slightly to the right and pulls her hair off to one side, revealing her bare neck to him. He traces his way down her gently sloping neck with soft pecks, ending just above her collar bone, where he passionately gives her a love mark.

Suddenly, the sound of a cell phone ringing makes them both conscious. They break away from each other, feeling very shy.

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Eyes-Wide-Shut thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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DAMN! Nivi that was so sensual, I have never evre read such sensual description of a kiss. Thank you for showing a sexually liberated woman in Ishita, I loved how she craved him and didn't hesitate to take the lead!
What I loved the most was your description of the sun setting in the body of water and the kaleidoscope of colors it paints while setting in the sky! Absolutely brilliant and poetic.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was a hot passionate os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was so passionate and intense...
the scene of sunset made it even more sensual...:)

thanks for sharing via pm!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HOT. HOT HOT
too good
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW! 👏 Great.. sensual but still sweet and innocent- a hard line to balance but you did it quite easily. well done. 👏

I hope we can expect more such FFs from you!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

DAMN! Nivi that was so sensual, I have never evre read such sensual description of a kiss. Thank you for showing a sexually liberated woman in Ishita, I loved how she craved him and didn't hesitate to take the lead!

What I loved the most was your description of the sun setting in the body of water and the kaleidoscope of colors it paints while setting in the sky! Absolutely brilliant and poetic.


Thanks doc! You have me blushing...I didn't think it was that good. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

it was a hot passionate os


Thank you Prachi! Romantic yes, hot and passionate? Maybe if you thought so...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

that was so passionate and intense...

the scene of sunset made it even more sensual...:)

thanks for sharing via pm!!!!!!!!!


Thanks Sahiba! Glad you liked it, although I didn't think it was that intense...maybe I should go reread my own writing based on these comments that I'm getting 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathin

HOT. HOT HOT
too good


Thanks so much! 😳

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