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CHARACTER SKETCH

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

He is only son of business tycoon MR>RAJENDER KHURANA. He is 27 yrs old and lives in New York. He handles Kc overseas business loves his dad but likes to live alone. He prefers private life so that he could live with no restrictions. He is sexy charming AND in relationship with SAMIRA KAPOOR.

RAJENDER KHURANA

Maan's father.He is a self made man and loves maan. He is trying hard to fix maan with his favourite employee GEET HANDA. He feels she is the only one who can love him and bear him.

GEET HANDA

She works in KC and is 24 yrs old. Cute bubbly and little nerdy girl. She considers Mr.Khurana as her father and respects him a lot and thus agrees to fulfil his wish.

SAMIRA KAPOOR

Cunning Bitch who is interested in KHUARANA's property. She made maan fall for her charms and now is his official GF.

The rest characters will be added as the story progresses...

ADI KHANNA-

Trustowrthy employee of Kc.

PINKY SHARMA

Friend of geet and works in Kc too.



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Thank you priya..for making such a beautiful banner!!

~INDEX~

THREAD 1

PART 11 -SCROLL DOWN

TEASERS

PART 12

PART 13

TEASERS

PART 14

TEASERS

PART 15

PART 16

TEASERS

PART 17

PART 18

PART 19

PART 20

THREAD 3

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Thank you priya..for making such a beautiful banner!!

Thank u all for ur responses..guys love u !!

SPECAIL THANKS TO ENVI DI , IDDUNO, COOKIEMONSTER...FOR FINISHING THE THREAD!!

Hope u like the update...

"It isn't possible to love and part. You will wish that it was. You can transmute love, ignore it, muddle it, but you can never pull it out of you. I know by experience that the poets are right: love is eternal."

Recap-

After maan tied the thread he held geet's hand in his firmly...and moved out. She simply followed him quietly.

PART 11

Maan dragged her outside and at a point felt her resisting she was stuck at a point. Maan groaned in anger..and held her hand tighly

What the hell now chasmish what do u want..??we will talk at Km not here he said trying best not to loose his patience, turning back facing her

Wohh..my..My bag is kept..behind that pillar the entrance one...she said looking down

Oh...um,...u sit in the car..i'll get it.. he said

Geet nodded

Maan opened the front door for her and geet climbed inside. He shut the door and retreated back to get her bag.

Geet swallowed thickly as she revived all the incidents happened since morning. She couldn't hold back anymore, tears flooded through her hazels she bit her lips squeezing her eyes tight.

Flashback-

She left pinky's house early morning and came at her place. She felt despised by her destiny her fate. Everything she loved was taken away from her. She lost her parents at a young age hence lived with her uncle. He could hardly afford his livelihood so she had no choice but give up on her studies. Gladly she dint have to he did pay for her studies and she managed to get scholarships.

When she turned 18 he died due to some illness leaving her alone once again. She wasn't that close to him but she felt secured with him. After his death she moved to delhi where her parents belonged.

She luckily got a job in Kc and met Rk. He was not only her boss but a great friend too, always a gentle men. He was like a father to her. He never considered her as a mere secretary. She knew he was grateful for saving his reputation and his life too many times.

Rk's behaviour with nurtured her a thus making her little expressive. Slowly she adjusted herself within her small world where she was happy. But she would have done that anyway.She had thrived really hard to be at his place a happy state with people who were there for her.Then maan came in her life, she tried not to fall of his charm but ..she did. She dint even know when she staring liking ...actually loving him.

When Rk came to know about this fact he was on cloud nine. He encouraged her feelings and promised her to make her his bahu. She was prepared to take everything but there was a limit to that. Maan's harshness broke something in her..As if some one had sucked out all blood from her body. His words were still fresh in her mind. He clearly stated that he hated her...his hatred was something she could not bear. His ignorance , his dominance she could take it all but not this.

She came in her room feeling withdrawn and dejected. She thumped on the ground closing her eyes in pain.

Life was not easy for her..but somewhere she always had a hope a tiny spark which gave her confidence to move on.

How can u not be broken when ur own love despises u??

Babaji she said in a hoarse voice. Her eyes wer red due to crying.

Babaji...kyu who mujh se itni nafrat karte hai...babaji maine aisa..kya kiya joh mujhe itni saza mil rai hai..kyu babaji

I never expected maan sir to love me back..mai toh bas unki charno ki dhul hu..and us mai hi khush ti...But babaji..unke pass hote hue yeh..dil. yeh ehsaas...khatam hi nahi hote..

Itne baar samjhane par bhi..nahi mante..unki berukhi dil pe bohot chot deti hai...

Rk sir...i..i never wanted to deceive him..but mai unke liye kuch nahi kar sakti...kuch bhi nahi...

I..I...she sobbed her eyes out

I kw he can never love me babaji...hum shayad sath reh nahi sakte..humarar sath hona na mumkin hai...

Mujhe itna kamzoor kyu banaya babaji..Kyu..

Mai apne papaji jaise strong kyu nahi hu... this pain..it hurts so much...I cant take this..babaji..

maan sir and me..we r not meant for each other...we r not And i should free him from this she clenched her eyes tight

She flee in the washroom turning the knob letting the water soak her.

Nearly 3 hrs later she came out.

i..i wont stay here anymore..i cant face RK sir..neither can I hurt maan sir..I knw he loathes my presence..mai aur kuch buran ahi karna chahti apne wajah se unke liye..

mera yaha se chale jana hi acha hoga..Unhe is bematlab k rishte mai rakhna thik nahi hai..i will set him free

After and hr she was ready to leave . She stepped out of her bungalow and walked on the road lifeless and numb .

She dint see the person walking from the other side and hence bumped to him.

i...I..m..sorry she said adjusting her glasses are u okay..she asked the old man whom she bumped into

Ha..dear m fine..he smiled at her..

Geet smiled weakly and nodded placing her bag on her shoulder...and stepped ahead but stopped as she heard him say

Why are u running from the situation. Beta tum toh us upar wale ki kamzoor nahi bahadur beti ho na...

She looked in him shock...

How do u knw..that

The man smiled Mai toh us ka banda hu uske eshare pe kaaam karne wala...

Beta everything that happens in this world is all his choice...everything...and no body can go against the almighty...

Geet nodded dipping her head lower...

Ur marriage took place because he wanted he said pointing his finger towards the sky..and u can run away from it

Geet had tears listening his words..

But...mY..marriage is not like othes..My..My husband..he..he..she paused letting the tears flow as she felt her throat choked

Beta is it necessary to expect someone u love should retreat it back?? Love is selfless...with no expectations no agains attached to it...dats y it s the most beautiful feeling..If u love someone truly...it will definitely come back to u...pure and sacred love creates magic..

But..it hurts ...and I I don't knw..whther this will even happen..magic..she smiled painfully I have no guts to face all this alone..i..I feel may be its not our destiny to be together..everything is against our relation...why do stay in such a relation she said sadly

Beta ...destiny and fate is all his games..we humans are just puppets...

Give ur fate a chance ..let it show u the right path...believe in the almighty my child..DOnt lose hope in ur relation and in ur love...

Geet sighed painfully...she dint had the heart to give this relation once again..

The man patted her head...

Go to the nizamuddin daragah now...as it is u r leaving the city...pay a visit once...

AAp..ko kaise pata...how did u knw that m leaving the city.. She aksed him in bewildered

I just knw that..take care...god bless u..!remember dont ever lose hope

And the man continued walking ahead...on the road.

Geet started him leaving...letting his words sink in her mind. Again those words stirred something in her and she decided to visit the daragh..

She came in the ancient place with no confidence in their relation and herself...

She took the maanat ka daga and wnet to tie the thread..closing her eyes

Babaji...aap..hi batao mujhe kya karna chayie...mai unki berukhi she kar bhi tut na jau...yhe mai kaise...Kya who kabhi mujh se pyar karenge..humara rista kya..kabhi...

Excuse me...he called..

She went stiff...realizing the owner of the voice..

PRESENT

CHAMISH ARE U DERRR...HELLLOOO maan said shakingg her ..

She blinked her eyes and glanced him..

He was gazing her eyes trying to find out what's wrong with her...

She bit her lips...slightly to suppress the moan due to his tight

Maan took back his hands from her shoulder and stared in front .

Woh Is this ur bag..m asking this for the last time... he said looking away..

She saw the blue coloured air bag in his hand..and nodded..ji..ji..

Maan threw the bag in back seat and wore his seat belt. He ignited the engine ready to go..but paused..

Wear ur seat belt.. he said still not looking at her..

Geet pulled the belt and tried to wear it..but couldn't do that..

Maan shook his head yeh ladki bhi na...

He leaned to her and held her hand over the belt..Geet froze..And looked at him..

He looked back at her...and pulled away her hands..and clutched the belt...

Geet dipped her head...and he moved back changing the gear he zoomed off.

Through their journey geet was silent and was looking outside immersed in her thoughts.

Maan contemplated on disclosing RK's condition to geet.

He observed her one again...

How should I tell her about dad..i think I should wait till we reach Km . anyway she is behaving quite weird..

Hmm..yehi thik hai...and once she meets dad uske baat I can talk to her about that..

He sighed and drove fast..

PRECAP- SAME

Okay guys thank u thank u thnk u for ur comments..m sooo overwhelmed with ur responses!!

Waise I m sure yeh update padh k thoda relief miila hoga..coz teasers were teased u a lot..heehehh!!

Plz keep motivation me with ur comments and love !!

Also guys plz support nikita and her idea of WRITER"S SLAM BOOK

MY OS FIRST KISS STORY & SACRED LOVE has been updated too..

Love

sweta

Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo on new thread
this maan
what to say
does it always have to be her who has to obey
no way man
time for them to work on their marriage
ahhh she was gonna leave
and would have too
had that man not asked her to go to dargha
and she went there
asking what about her marriage
well him being there was an indication
but for good or bad well time will tell
he gotta work on this relationship too
or it will fall
but will he do that
geet no more running dear
you dont deserve it
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congratzs dr :-) :-) awesome update... Geet s hurt so much... Stil maan didnt say abt dad 2 geet. N her childhood itslf geet had gone thrgh vry painful @ loneiless.. Continue soon
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uff why this idiot maan is making geet cry... at least he should try to find the reason behind why geet left him
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congo on the new thread...
Awesome update...
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that was a lovely update...

in the last part i was thinking y geet was smiling and happy seeing maan... ab patha chal gaya😆

i do loved how that mystery man was explaining about selfless love... and was encoraging geet to do the same... maan ko bhi milwaao na usse...kuch akal aa jaayegi😳

both husband and wife ki sawaari waapas gayi hain to km...

i think seeing maans dad condition geet will be now on a guilt trip

First page par first thread ka link daal do...

and priya nice banner re... geet and heart break... story ke hisaab se fit baithi hain

will be waiitng for the next updte..




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