//MG SS- AWARI// last part - pg 51...17/7/2015 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan


part 1

wow what an entry so big business game ha
like geet ka attitude all

ready to take over and why dadima
so interested in news

and ye mSk kaha ghoom hai


part 2


like geet in office perfect
business women
all ready to took big challenge
love this geet
nice moove sida auction
wow


so here is msk all in pain
so it is maaneet pain


part 3

maaneet hug is highlight
of part maan all in pain

why i feel like he is verge of braking
kabhi kabhi khomoshi bhi
apni hi dushman ban jati hai

nice song selection


part 4

u write maan state of mind so beautifully

so much pain in his heart

very dificult to watch maan like

this but very emotional part

but u give big shock in end


tkx di...tomorrow i will update awari
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 5


Nakul shout at Maan to come out of room. Maan look at Nakul and then at his room.He laugh as he look at his burning room. "See now this room is same like me,we both are burning and we are in same state"said maan as he remove the tears with the back of his hands. Even nakul has tears in his eyes he know how much his maan baba love geet mam, but now its time for all this thought Nakul, as he hurriedly took the CO2 fire extinguisher cylinder from outside the room to remove fire.

fire alarm

He instruct the servants to bring all fire extinguisher cylinders and help him. Nakul with the help of other servant start stopping fire , because of fire alarm they get to know it on time. Nakul took the water bucket and throw it on unconscious maan. They are able to stop the fire on time. Nakul instruct one of the servant to get the car out as they took maan out of the room. Nakul sit with unconscious maan on back seat. He make call to maan's parent and tell them about accidental fire in maan's room (he don't want them to blame maan) as they drove to hospital.

for help
"Maa jaldi chaliyee humee hospital jana hogaa"said Ranvir Singh Khurana to his mother as he move to look for priya."per kyu"said savitri devi following his son. Priya was chatting with some lady when Ranvir interverted them "excuse me,i want to talk with my wife" said Ranvir looking toward the lady."sure "said that lady and move to talk with someone else."ji kya huaa"priya ask as Ranvir pull her with him."humme hospital jana hai jaldi chloo,maa aap bhi jaldi kejeyee"said Ranvir and make call to their driver."per btaoo yo shi kya baat hai"said savitri devi while sitting in the car. Ranvir took deep breath said "woo Nakul ka call aya tha maan hospital main hai". "kya hua usee"said priya with worry. "kuch nhi koyaa priya.uske room main aag lagyee thee jisse wo behosh hogya" said Ranvir looking at his wife , he know much priya care for him."zaroor usee ne kuch kiya hoga"said savitri devi shaking her head. She don't have any worry line on her face."nhi maa esaa kuch nhi hai" said Ranvir as he try to clam his crying wife priya. "vo theek haa na?"ask priya looking at her husband."hmm...maan ko kuch nhi koga"said Ranvir insuring his wife. "tumlog bhi na bas maan maan kerte rekte ko" said savitri devi looking angrily at priya." maa ji wo mera beta hai" said priya. "aapna nhi sotelaa (adopted) beta "said savitri devi. She never liyaa priya giving any attention to maan. "vo merahe beta hai , mera bda beta (elder son)"said priya coming out of her husband's arms. "wo adopted hai adopted he rhegaa, wo humara Khurana kandaan ka khoon nhi hai"said savitri devi angrily looking at his DIL. "agar maan na kota tuo apke doosre potee (grandsons) bhi nhi kotee, maan nehee maa bnaya hai" said priya. "esmain bhi aap ke galti hai, shaadi ke 4 saal baad bhi humee pota nhi de payee aap"said savitri. "maa plz,yeh sab batee mat kejyee" said Ranvir to his mother as look at crying priya.Its true maan is not their biological son but its also true he is the one who make them parents,no only parents but proud parents thought Ranvir .

Nakul is standing outside the hospital. Maan's grauds are also with him . Nakul have send the driver home with message to clear maan's room complete. Maan's bodygrauds know nakul well even they care for their boss. They have already plan that if anyone ask about accident they will tell that their was circuit problem in maan's room because of which fire happened. Now only problem remain is doctor and this is one big problem. As the doctor in this case is none other then geet's mother Dr.Rano. Rano come out of room and stand in front of nakul and Maan's bodyguard "explain"said Ranu after giving one look around to see if anyone is listening them . "Mam Sir ke room main circuit ke vjese aag lagye thi"said one of the bodygraud. "explain" said Ranu strictly. nakul at Ranu said"ji woo sir sharab ke nashe mai thee or fir..." , Ranu stop him by showing her hand and said " or fir usne aapko marne ke koshish ke,yhi na?"ask Ranu ."ji"said nakul in slowly. "tum log jantee ho yeh police case hai , suicide kerna ek crime hai" said Ranu in slow but strict voice as she see head doctor of the hospital coming towards their room. They stop their conversation in mid as maan's parents are coming along with doctor.

"aab yeh yhaa kya kerhe hai" ask savitri devi looking at Rano Handa. Before anyone can answer her all have already reach near the room. Mr.Khurana ensee milyee Dr.Ranu ,she is handling your son's case." hello doctor"said ranvir forwarding his hand for shakehand."hello"said Ranu with formal smile. "hume koyee or doctor chaheyee Mr. Sharma" said Savitri looking at Ranu. "She is the best doctor here Mrs.Khurana" said Mr. Sharma ."tuo hum foreign se doctor magwa legee humaree pote keliyee"said Savitri devi at this all look at Savitri devi with R U SURE expression except Mr.Sharma ofcourse. "Mrs.Khurana mene khud Dr. Ranu ko es case ke liyee bulayaa hai, Mr. Maan ka chota sa case hai fir bhi maine Dr.Ranu jo ke expert hai hunhe bulaya"said Mr.Sharma this behavior of rich people especially Savitri devi type people. "hum kuch nhi jantee hume baskoye or doctor chahiyee" said Savitri devi stubbornly. "mam aap sabzee mandi main nhi hospital main hai, yaha doctor ko aapke nhi apko doctor ke zaroorat hai" said Rano rolling her eyeing at this stubborn elder lady."per.."said savitri but priya stop her and said looking at Ranu "doctor aap he maan ka case handle kregee" ."ok" said Rano

PS. I am updating it after long time ...i will complete it before moving toward my other works..
my new os check it out

Edited by Neeju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..😊 But why did you stop at wrong time...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: svani

nice update..😊 But why did you stop at wrong time...

i need to think more for geet's entry so i thought its better post this much
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Posted: 10 years ago
check ur pms...u hardly open it
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow.. geets mom a doc.. dad died cuz of maan.. rano knows.. uff soo its all saviyri devis fault.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shockng update hw an be smone ao heartleas like savitri devi
maan is adoptd son bt his parents r proud of him bt wt prblm does daadima hv?
Rano is handlng maan's case nd d wayshe is ansd daadima was superb 👏
waitng 4 d nxt part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice concept
Maan has committed suicide.
Geet loves maan but she left him.
Feel lyk crying after reading dis os. 😭
Waiting to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg this part really shook me...I mean this was so pathetic..how can some one behave so harsh...as if u have no heart!!

I loved the way rano handled maan's case...a greatr salute to her!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shocking update the way dadimaa is behaving she is like a heartless elderly lady who don't want to listen to any one
Hope maan will be fine soon
Continue soon dear

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