I feel like I am losing my mind

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Veer:
I feel like I am losing my mind
I close the door behind me and now it is open wide

Pakhi:
Is Veer losing his mind over me?
I told him I love only Anshuman, now why can't he let me be?

Veer:
What is all this panic Pakhi, about the electric switch
I turned it off in front of all, before you came and rolled me down the ditch

Pakhi:
Don't you dare Mr. Forgetful lay the blame on me
Why do you always think that I want to lay on you?

Veer
Now the gun is gone missing
What is that sound? Is it a hissing?

Someone has trampled on the rangoli
Oh how unholy!

There, another sound I hear again!
Lord have mercy, the gun is back again!
Now it is near my phone, surely someone is on the prowl?
Like some creeping owl!

Pakhi
I better go find Veer, for he is lost again
I hope he is not crazy and a-tizzy again!

Veer
I better pack this gun away in the safe, out of sight
Wait a minute!
Let me count the bullets - there are seven not eight,
My goodness - what a plight
Let me check the gun
Why yes, it is loaded quite a ton!

Goodness! Am I losing my mind
Or is someone playing foul with me and my kind

Pakhi
There you go Mr. Desperate Veer
Can't you take a 'no' from me your heer?
Don't you play your games and tricks
On me, you dirty prick

Veer
What! You think I am losing my mind over you?
Are you crazy?
I am not crazy over you
There is this mystery person who is stalking me around
And doing the best to show that my mind is unsound!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is fantastic ..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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BRAVO brilliantly summarized the situation...All I am going to say Anonee is I bow to your power of wordings ...LOVE IT
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: croziaxx

this is fantastic ..😆


Thank you croziaxx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vinnie79


BRAVO brilliantly summarized the situation...All I am going to say Anonee is I bow to your power of wordings ...LOVE IT


Vinnie dear, you are very good in conveying your thoughts with words!! So please, accept my bow too!

Thank you for the comment 😊

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