Originally posted by: Urmila11
Pink: Oh really? 😃 wow it will be so lovely dear
Green: Yes I also felt so, Gopis were more highlighted than Her. I want a total Radha-Krishna sweet romance 😳 hope you will write one 😃 I am so happy to know that Raas is not the end rather a start of this love story 😊
& yes I know you have to return to Hastinapur, but Pandavas are still in Drona's class so until Kansa vadh nothing much to show there I think. I have a suggestion. Show Ekalavya's thumb cutting, bird-eye test, Karna's demand for Brahmastra & departure, Arjun's success in the crocodile test & achieving Brahmashira one by one in each chapter, along with Radha Krishna divya prem 😊 that may help you, I think. Those are very short facts & would not take much space. Before rangbhoomi, Kansa vadh will be hopefully covered, what say? [I know how difficult it is to handle both Krishna Leela & MB story in a parallel way, but you are handling it so well 👍🏼]
Actually, Raadha is Actively There Only In The Shankhachood Incident, And The Good Bye Thing...In Between I'll Add My Nok-jhok, But There's Actually And Seriously No Time For Their Separate Leelas To Be Described...
As You Speak About The Gurukul Incidents, I'll Have To Make It Parallel In Such A Way That Krishna Is Back From Gurukul Before The Varnavart Incident, And I Think All Of Those Tests Had Happened Around The End Of Their Stay At Gurukul, So If I Have To Manage Pandavas 12 Years And Krishna-Balram 2 Months, I'll Have To Show It, A Bit Later.
But Yes, Karna Will Come Early, Maybe In The Next Chappy Itself.
And Eklavya Was Definitely After The Bird Eye, Because I Clearly Remember Arjun, While Complaining To Dron, Mentioned Best Dhanurdhar.
So, In Short I Don't Know What I'll Do, But Whatever It May Be, The Respective Rangbhoomis At Hastinapur And Mathura (But Kanha Toh Went Straight To Ranbhoomi Rather Than Rangbhoomi).
And Thanks For Liking My Way !
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