YE LAMHE JUDAAI KE UPDATE ON PG 100

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YES THIS IS THE TITLE OF MY NEXT TORTURE
YE LAMHE JUDAAI KE
INDEX
CHARACTER SKETCH - PG 1
PART 1 - PG 2
PART 2 - PG 8
PART 3 - PG 13
PART 4 - PG 17
PART 5 - PG 21
PART 6 - PG 25
PART 7 - PG 28
PART 8 - PG 33
PART 9 - PG 39
PART 10 - PG 42
PART 11 - PG 45
PART 12 - PG 48
PART 13 - PG 52
PART 14 - PG 55
PART 15 - PG 59
PART 16 - PG 61
PART 17 - PG 63
PART 18 - PG 66
TEASER - PG 69
PART 19 - PG 70
PART 20 - PG 72
PART 21 - PG 74
PART 22 - PG 77
PART 23 - PG 80
PART 24 - PG 81
PART 25 - PG 83
PART 26 -PG 86
PART 27 - PG 91
PART 28 - PG 100

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character sketch

Rk aka rishabh kundra - super star as in serial

Madhubala malik - extremely beautiful all rounder orphan girl doing her post graduation in business management she was final year student she had loving n care nature soft hearted girl she was gem of her collage n in neiborhood

Sultan - neighbor of madhu, he was in madhu class he had strong bonding with madhu.he treated madhu as his real sister

Meera- sultan mother n love madhu as her daughter

Radha- rk mother, simple religious lady loving n caring house wife

Mohan- rk father, owner of kundra industry well known business personality in business industry but very simple person down to earth

Bittuji- rk pa n a family member of kundra family.mohan radha treated him as their second son.

Edited by meenji22 - 10 years ago
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STORY TITLE CREDIT GOES TO DIA
SHE SUGGESTED ME THIS TITLE
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kheech lo taang 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo aunty for new story nd really excited for it n nice character sketch
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hold your hearts i am starting my torture
part 1

1

It was sultan madhu collage annual function n rk was the chief guest of their function all are exited n happy that collage management has called rk n they can meet him n see him personally.

Madhu n sultan were organizers of whole event .as rk was coming they had made arrangements according to that sultan n his group was taking care of stage n doing all sort of bhaga daudi. Madhu n her group was taking care of cultural programme n decorations . all were busy in giving finishing touch .after finishing it all went to freshen up .after getting ready when they were cross checking suddenly they heard shouting of other students rk rk rk .rk waves his hand in response. sultan madhu rush towards gate to welcome him .madhu did arti n put teeka on his forhead sultan garland him .but rk was hypnotized with madhu beauty n simplicity she was wearing pink saari with white border n watching white pearl set which was increasing her beauty in name of makeup only kajal in her eyes n light pink lipstick nothing else n her long hair were tied neatly with hair clip

After receiving rk madhu went back n sultan take him to pandal n settled him on sofa .bittuji sit besides him few students come n give him flowers .he was receiving their greetings but his eyes was searching madhu. After few minutes later sultan came on stage stand on podiam .he make an announcement of starting program first he welcome rk on behalf of his collage .then he invite principal to give welcome speech after that programme start with swarswati vandana madhu was the leader of group after that few performances by other participents

Then comes madhu's to perform her dance she was dressed in rajasthani dress . she danced on

Mhare Hiwda Mein Nache Mor, Tak Thaiya Thaiya

Inside my heart the peacock dances

Bhavre Ne Machaya Shor, Khili Dil Ki Kaliyan

The bee buzzes and makes noise, the flower-buds of the heart have blossomed

Badla Mausam, Badle Nazare, Ya Badla Hai Nazariya

The season has changed, the scenery has changed or has my view-point changed

Mhare Hiwda Mein Nache Mor, Tak Thaiya Thaiya

Inside my heart the peacock dances

Tu Nai Naveli Dulhan Hai

You are a newly wed bride

Tera Roop Pyar Ka Darpan Hai

Your guise is the mirror of love

Teri Mehendi Se, Tere Gajre Se Mehka Mehka Mera Jeevan Hai

With Your henna, with the flower garland in Your hair, my life has become scented

Mere Sawalon Ka Jawaab Banke Tu Aai Sajaniya

You came bringing the answers to my questions, my beloved

Mhare Hiwda Mein Nache Mor, Tak Thaiya Thaiya

Inside my heart the peacock dances

Aisi Bandhi Pyar Ki Dor, Hui Main Bavariya

The thread of love is tied in such away, that I've gone crazy

Badla Mausam, Badle Nazare, Ya Badla Hai Nazariya

The season has changed, the scenery has changed or has my view-point changed

Mhare Hiwda Mein Nache Mor, Tak Thaiya Thaiya

Inside my heart the peacock dances

Yah Pyar Ka Sawan Aaya Hai, Sang Preet Ka Mausam Laaya Hai

This rainfall of love has come, it's brought with itself the season of togetherness

Jo Dil Mein Chhupa Ke Rakha Tha, Woh Raaz Labon Par Aaya Hai

The one which was hidden inside the heart, that secret has come to the lips

Dil Mein Basake, Apna Banake, Le Chalun Prem Nagariya

Making You reside in my heart, making You mine, I'll take you to the city of love

Mhare Hiwda Mein Nache Mor, Tak Thaiya Thaiya

Inside my heart the peacock dances

Chahe Le Jao Jis Ore, Sang Chalungi Saiyan

Take me in any direction, I will go with you, my beloved

Badla Mausam, Badle Nazare, Ya Badla Hai Nazariya

The season has changed, the scenery has changed or has my view-point changed

Mhare Hiwda Mein Nache Mor, Tak Thaiya Thaiya

Inside my heart the peacock dances

Yeh Chand Sitaron Ki Baaraat Layee Hai Ghadi Suhani

This procession of the moon and the stars has brought with it pleasant moments

Kya Baat Hai, Mere Saath Hai, Mere Sapnon Ki Rani

It's great, that with me there is the girl of my dreams

Barson Sataya Tune, Chain Churaya

You've teased me for years, You've stolen my peace

Main Aaj Na Chhodoon Baiyan...

I'm not going to let go of Your wrist today


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow. Another story.
Nice start. The song description was nice.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsome characters dear but plz give some idea abt story background
It's sounding very different and most imp its having totally different concept plz do continue soon

Love your story and you but plz continue soon
Thanks for pm

Part-1was awsome loved it continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 989859

Awsome characters dear but plz give some idea abt story background
It's sounding very different and most imp its having totally different concept plz do continue soon

Love your story and you but plz continue soon
Thanks for pm


for story back ground i can say i believe in naari shakti n in this story also my madhu is tooo strong with some up n downs in life without villian
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenji22


for story back ground i can say i believe in naari shakti n in this story also my madhu is tooo strong with some up n downs in life without villian
without 18 + language bcz i can't write that language (umar ka takaja) that language is not my cup of tea.

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