Arjun-Draupadi Kalyug FF- Shubh Punah Milan-Part 35(2/11) - Page 104

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

ji u made path very naughty and it's a very nice part plz update soon and plz plz clear the misunderstanding of panchali and plz plz pair someone with subhi so that she get love in her life and will be happy and plz update very very very very very lonnnggg chapter plz plz looking forward for ur update . and plz plz give some more 18+ scenes od panchali and paarth .

Panchali ki misunderstanding hogi bhi to ek baki hai, yaar!!! I will try to give a long one, dear and subhi ko bhi apna Jeevan saathi shighr milega!!! 18+, maybe I can give some flashbacks as of now!!! I will update soon, dear!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yagyaaa,...update update update update update update update!!!!!! I want to read moree!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi

Yagyaaa,...update update update update update update update!!!!!! I want to read moree!!!

Abhi Likthi hoon!! Give me 10 mins!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 33:
Yagya was utterly frustrated at Arjun's behavior towards her, when he knew he was betrothed to Subhi and would be engaged soon. She was walking aimlessly, though Subhi had told her to wait for the lunch, Yagya's feelings were going against having lunch. Through the college lobby, which she was passing through, Professor Drona was searching for Yagya's batch mates to make an announcement which he had forgotten to make in the class. When he found Yagya he felt happy that at least the distance to be walked has been decreased and called a bit loudly,
" Yagya!", which made Yagya come out of her trance and said,
" Yes, Professor! You need some work to be done?"
" Yes, Yagya! Can you make an announcement that Freshers' party would be held tomorrow in the auditorium and your batch is expected to be there by sharp 2 pm?"
Yagya, was shocked that tomorrow there would be a freshers' party and everyone will have to do something and decided in mind that she would dance with Subhi as it seemed to be safest option and said, " Sure, Professor!" and Yagya left from there after etting some more details about the celebration.
Yagya write a note on the board and announced it in the mike which had speakers throughout the college campus to make sure every batch mate gets to hear it.
Subhi, on the other hand was feeling happy that her painful sacrifice will not be wasted. She didn't feel sad any more as love with out pain and sacrifice isn't a true love and after hearing the announcement made by Yagya herself she decided that she will make Yagya and Arjun dance for the last time, their feelings were expressed through dance and even this time the misunderstandings will be cleared by a soulful dance and let out a meaningful smile.
Miles away from the campus, Arjun's elder brother Bheem was waiting for a lady to come out of the shopping mall, to make an excuse to speak to her. Soon, a young lady with hazel eyes, waist long hair adorning her petite back made her way out only to be stopped by Bheem, which was acted like mistakenly bumped. He immediately apologized and said,
" Aren't you my Bhabhi Devika's friend Haima?"
" Yes, and aren't you her Dewar, Bheem?"
"Yes, I am! So we met again! I must say you dance really well and Bhabhi told that you are a really good friend to her!"
Haima who could sense his flirting thought to give a proper answer though she had similar feelings from the attraction or love from the first sight of her last life's love.
" Thanks a lot, Bheem! But you see I can't stand anyone praising so I am sorry!" and she left from there while Bheem gave a'un-predictable' look to her.
Haima:
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TBC
Please comment and like!! Hope you liked it!!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yagya so freshers party is coming up!!!😛
Subhi wants Parth Yagya to dance out their feelings!!😳😉
...so cute she is!!!!
I can feel that this party is gonna change Yagya's mind!!!😳
Bhim is such flirty guy!!..Hema gave him nice answer!!!😆
Congrats for the new thread dear!!! v will soon jump into there!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read Subhi's request update. Behind I know.
I guess Subhi is subhadra - krishna's sister right who married Arjun?
I know it sounds silly but when I read Arya I giggle because it is referring to a guy and I am a girl lol. Your writing is really detailed but the only downside - which i hope you don't mind me mentioning - is that there is no space between paragraphs. That would help a lot else let's see what happens next. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Arjun biting yagya? 😲
Yeh kaunsi pyaar hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Naughty Paarth! What is he getting up to. I am starting to understand this a little bit. The whole MB characters are now at college? They have been reborn?
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow paarth is really getting naughty isn't he. i am not sure if i am liking this persona of his.
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Posted: 11 years ago
fresher's party umm... i smell smoke... hope there is fire!! 😉
arjun is already at work maybe... ggaawwddd now u are making me hang in here more... ab jaldi likhna!!!

n bheem got his lady love... oye... tht cute.. oohhh the teddy bear... 😳


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