||Ajab Luv|| An AKDHA FANTIC

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Hiii ... I have a new fantic for u all... really sad with the onggoing track in the show so here I would love to enlight your moods with this fun folic fantic...Hope you enjoy as much I am enjoying writing this fantic...pls do read.This story is infleuenced by my bst frnd's story... unfortunately she is not in IF. If you want which characted whom i denote u can ask freely.
Character sketch
Jalaluddin Mohummad
Shenshah of Hindustan... at the peak of his power. But unfortunately... he misuses it sometimes. He controls his anger and miraculously strong. Illiterate but smart, witty and devilious... He belives in strength and brain... He easily influences everyone... except two... Pratap and Jodha... He is a devil but has a soft side he loves children, his family and near ones and forgives for sake of his loved ones.He does not believe in love. But he believes in caring for near ones.


Jodha
A beautiful lady.She is bought up with love and care. She is the most ideal daughter and kind. She loves people, helping them, caring for everyone...no adjective suits her best. She is extremely intelligent and smart. She lives with pride. Everyone loves her. She is soft hearted. She cares for everyone. But she has secrets only three people know and they aare most close to her... Moti, Roshni and Akira.


Ruquiyya
Jalal's first wife and his best frnd... She has no one except Jalal from her own family... She is over proudy... She is selfish and over confidant that no one can defeat her.She is first villian and wants Jodha out.


Maham Anga
Jalal's foster mother and Wazir e aaliya. SHe is smart and a devil(in real sense). She creates a lot of problems in Jo's smooth running life. She hates Jo a lot. Her all plans fail.


Adham Khan
Jalal's foster brother and his minister. He wants to be in Jalal's place... he wants to be badshah of hindustan. He is evil and womeniser. He is too confidant on his physical power. Jalal defeates him easily... that is why he hates Jalal.


Sharifuddin
Jalal's sister's husband and his minister. He loves Jodha ... but she dosen't. He is plotting against him.They always fail cose Jalal is more smatter that they think.. he easily puts them in trouble without even their knowledge. He acts as if he love Bakshi.



Moti
Jodha's bst frnd and her baandi... but Jodha refuses her to call her baandi... They were together from childhood. She helps her even if she is wrong. She supports her in good and bad times and lives with her.


Roshni Bai
Jodha's cousin sister and bst frnd. She loves to visit the whole world and rarely lives in the palace. She is witty, smart, intelligent and extremly naughty. She behaves boyish. She knows Jodha's deepest secrets.She is cunning but loves Jodha a lot. She never lets anything come between their frndship.The Trio bst frnds always make each other smile.

Akira Khan
Jodha's childhood frnd and Bairam khan's brother's daughter. Although her father works for Jalal she never saw Jalal.She loves Jodha as her bst frnd. Though she is a muslim Jodha is her bst frnd.. Keeping their religion aside they always keep their frndship strong and all these years growing up their frndship increases.She is smart and witty but not cunning. She goes around the world with Roshni


Sukanya
Jodha's sister and amer's second princess. She is calm, sweet and extremly soft towards Jodha.


Shivani
Jodha's sister and third princess. She is little intelligent and partially naughty.


Hamida Begum
Jalal's mother and Malika e azam.She is nice, sweet, calm and cares a lot for Jodha.She cares for Jalal.


Abdul
He is jalal's bst frnd and understands him.He is an ideal bst frnd. With him Jalal is more a commoner than a king.He teases Jalal when he spots benezir.




Plot
Adkha go to Amer for Sukanya's wedding.There Maham and Ruks and Benezir create lot of problem to Jodha. A lot of Worry spreads in Amer. The trio bst frnds Reunite and make Sukanya's wedding the most memorable day for her.Frnds don't miss Rosh and Akira's fun and problems created by them in benezir, Maham and Ruks's plans. It will be a fun folic story... guess if you are like me then u'll love the journey.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story line👍🏼
do update fast
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So here is the first chappy
Chapter 1
Jodha was really excited as her sister's weding has been fixed... Jalal was happy too. Jalal treats her as his own sister. Jodha wanted to go there as soon as possible... she wanted to hug her sister and congratulate her.
They reach amer border... Jodha even more excited... she wanted to get down and run to her house... but she knows she can't. Jalal" Jodha begum... adhe ghante mein puhunch jaaenge... zyada dur nahi hai(Jodha Begum we will reach in half an hour ... its not too far)"Jodha blushes as Jalal said without even asking and he knew even without telling. Salima Begum who was sitting in the same palki said" Jodha Begum... aap bohot khush lag rahi hai... sabra kariye jaldi pahuch jaaenge" Jo smiles at her. Jodha is really happy.
But everything will not go as smooth as she is thinking cose... Maham,Ruks and Benezir are coming too... that means problems are coming.

After half an hour they reach Amer palace.
Jalal came an greets Dadisa. She blesses him. Jodha looks here and there... She couldn't find her. Mainavati... looking in the tilak plate says" Roshni aur Akira abhi tak nahi aaye kal aaenge" Jodha frowns and then smiles at her mother.Jalal" Abh toh khush hai aap... aap ghar aa gayi hai" Mainavati smiles at Jalal... she is satisfied that Jalal is taking care of Jodha... but there Benezir (She is in love with our cute handsome and smart Jalal) was getting jealous... Jodha now got worried. At last they come in. All the children come and hug Jalal... Jalal" Bas... hamare do haath hai aur aap itne sare... kaash humare haath aur zyaada lambe hote... phir aap sabh ko ek saath gale lag sakhte" They laugh on this comment. Jodha smiled at this... Children"Jodha jiji... aapke saheliyaan kal tak aa jaenge... vo aayi this kal par aap nahi aayi thi isiliye... Ajabgard ghum aaenge" Jodha" Dhanyawad batane ke liye" Jalal" Abh toh khush hai na ... aapki khawaish puri kar di na" Jodha" Shukriya" He winks at her... she goes to Sukanya.
In Sukanya's room
Sukanya" Jodha jiji... hum bohot khush hai par ek bat se bohot udaaasi chaa rahi hai..." Jodha" Hume pata hai... maasa, bapusa... sabhko chodke jaane ka ji nahi kar raha na... aisa lagta hai... par ek baar sasural mein prem mile to yahan ki yaad itni nahi aaegi" Sukanya(teasingly)" Haan jaise aapko Amer ki itni yaad nahi aati" Jodha becomes quite for a moment and remembers maham's words' Hum aapko kabhi bhi Agra mein khush nahi rehene denge'. Sukanya" Jodha jiji... aapko Shenshah ki badi ammi bohot pareshaan karti hai na" Jodha suprisingly looks at her but sukanya "Nahi ... maasa ko nahi bataya hai... pata hai ki aapko bohot mushkilein jhelni pad rahi hogi na... Par chinta mat kariye... jab jija sa ko jyaat hoga ki aap kitni acchi hai vo aapko kabhi dukh pahunne nahi demge" Jodha" Humari Sukanya jo humse chudiyon ke liye ladhti thi vo bohot sayaani ho gayi hai... (Her eyes becomes moist)... Hum kanha se prarthna karenge ki aapki zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaae... vaise bhi aap itni khoobsurat hai koi bhi aapko prem kar sakta hai" Sukanya" Jodha jiji... aap humse zyaada bholi hai... aapka hriday humse zyaada bada hai...aur aap bohot khushkismat hai ki shenshah jaise pati aapko mile... hume pata hai ... maham anga ji ne aapko yahan aane se roka tha na... par jija sa ne aapko aane diya aur saath mein baki logon ko bhi laae" Jodha cries and smiles at her... She wipes off Jodha's eyes... and says" In aakho mein khushi acchi lagti hai ashru nahi" jodha hugs her and says" Is waqt par jab Roshni aur Akira ko hona chahiye tha aur vo dono ... ajabgarh ghoomne gaye hai... vaise sangeet kab hai?" Sukanya" Kal shaam ko ... aur vo dono kal raat tak hi pahuch paaenge... agar abhi nikle toh!" Jodha" Agar nahi aayi toh uski khair nahi" Sukanya" Aap to Agra jaakar bohot urdu seekh jayi hai jiji" " Haan kehete hai na ki jiske saath rehete hai unki aadatein lag jaati hai" Both turn and see Jalal standing there... He says" Aur aapse... naraz hona sheekha hoga Jodha Begum ne... vaise Sukanya... ek din toh apne shuhar ke paas jana hi hoga ... abhi zyaada aansu bahae toh Agra ki Yamuna mein baadh aa jaegi bidaai ke waqt" Sukanya laughs at this line... and says" Sabhki yaad aaegi toh roenge na" Jalal"woh toh aagega hi... par ek sawaal hai yeh Roshni kon hai... Akira toh vahi Khan baba ke bhaijaan ki beti hai na?" Shivani"Haan... Roshni Jiji Kakisa ki beti hai aur Jodha jiji ki sabhse acchi dost hai" Jalal" Hume yeh samajh nahi aata ki Jodha Begum ki puri duniya dost hai hume chodke" Shivani" Aapko chodke kyu" Jalal" Kyuki hum toh unke shuhar hai na" Sukanya" (laughingly) Toh phir aap hi bataiya Jodha jiji ki sangeet mein kon si saari pehene?" Jalal" Khuda ke liye laal mat kahiye ga!!" Jodha" Jo accha lagega wahi bataenge na" Jalal" Unpe jo accha lagega yeh pucha hai... yeh nahi puch ki aapke hisab se aap pe kon sa rang accha lagega... humare hisaab se neela accha lagega" Sukanya" Haan Jiji... neela accha lag raha hai" Jodha"Sukanya... aap humari behen hai ya unki?"Sukanya" Aapki" Jodha" TOh unki taraf lena band kariye" Jalal and Sukanya together" Khana jal gaya ... jalne ki boo aa rahi hai" Then laugh at Jodha. Shivani" Jija sa ... jiji o pareshaan karna band kariye... bohot shaitani soojh rahi hai na... Roshni jiji aaengi toh saari shaitani bhul jaaenge." Jalal"Koi baat nahi hum unhe bhi dekh lenge" Jodha" Shenshah aap yahan se bahar jaaeiye" Sukanya" Jija sa... ek ghante mein milte hai ... phir aapko Jodha jiji ki cheezein dikhate hai jo humne chupa ke rakha hai" Jodha" Sukanya!!!!... aapki jaisi behen ho toh dushman ki kya zaroorat hai?" Sukanya laughs at her.


Nxt Day in the afternoon.
Jodha became busy in arrageing for Sangeet...(In my story... sangeet is same as today's sangeet everyone is present... men and women)... Jodha is busy... bwt Sukanya comes in between and asks help to get ready for sangeet... Rani sa tells her to go and help Sukanya.

They are getting ready... it is evening already...and Jodha is also to get ready. Jodha makes Sukanya beautiful... Then Jodha also gets ready... Sukanya goes down. Jodha then comes after an hour... benazir is trying to get close to Jalal... Sukanya feels akward... She does not say any thing.

Ruquiya then gets her plan ready... She has sent off the dancer and enjoyment doing people so that then Jodha will get scolding for not taking proper care for sangeet preparations. Benazir also helps Ruks.
Jodha comes down ... she is looking breathtakingly beautiful... She has worn beautiful Red Saree and traditional rajput jewelry. She is looking beautiful. Jalal is not able take off his eyes from her.

Sangeet has started... Jodha is backstage and is worried as none of the dancers are present... who will perform in front of everyone...(Sangeet is taking place in a hall where only Amer royal family, Mughal family are present.
Jodha is scared as Sukanya's sangeet would get spoilt... gossips are going on... Sukanya,mainavati and Shivani are worried as Raja Bharmal would get angry on Jodha... Ruks is smiling from inside... but suddenly music starts beating... They all look behind but they only find a shadow... Jodha comes out and sees... then another shadow appears besides the first one... 3 more appear after them
The music starts...

Nain katari aisi maari tann mann sulga, tadpan bhaari
Ishq lahu ka, jab dil se utre dhire dhire chadhe khumaari

Suddenly Jodha says" ROSHNI... AKIRA!!!!"

Two beautiful figures appear...

Khaali jaaye na tera vaar... (2)
Naino se karti hai shikaar
Tu do dhaari talwaar yaar... (2)
Kaate toh karde rangdaar tu do dhaari talwaar yaar... (2)
Tu toh thodi meethi, thodi si hai zeheri re
Jaise garmi ki ho tapati si dopehari re haule se tu kare dil pe halla re
Ho teri taareefein karta mohalla re
Zaalim hai tera har singaar
Ho naino se karti hai shikaar tu do dhaari talwaar yaar... (2)

Roshni" Tujhe kya laga main apni behen ki sangeet mein nahi aaungi?" Akira"Yahi rehe gayi dosti... itna bharosa nahi hai hum par?" Jodha" Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai!!!


Haan taajo takhat main toh laakhon gira doon saare arash waale dharti pe laa doon
Main hoon husn mujhse bachke hi rehna main hi muqaddar bana doon mita doon

Tu kar na maana, mujhe apna bana ab aise tamasha bana na
Teri minnat karoon, teri khatir maroon tere darr ke seewa na thikaana
Tu toh thodi meethi, thodi si hai zeheri re jaise garmi ki ho tapti dopehari re
Haule se tu kare dil pe halla re teri taarifein karta mohalla re
Ho baatein hai meri hathiyaar haaye naino ka karti hoon shikaar
Main do dhaari talwaar yaar... (2)


Roshni and Akira pulls Jodha, Shivani and Sukanya... They all are dancing together... there Jalal has a plan... He says something to Adham.

Haan chaahat badi meri mehangi padegi naagin nazar yaar jab jab ladegi
Jee na sakoge tum marr na sakoge banke zehar yun mohabbat chadegi
Teri hasrat hui, meri aafat hui tere been hoga ab na guzaara
Tere saare sitam, tere saare zulm hanji hanji mujhe hain gawara
Tu toh thodi mithi, thodi si hai zehari re jaise garmi ki ho tapti dopehari re
Haule se tu kare dil pe halla re ho teri taarifein karta mohalla re
Haan rehne de tu yeh takraar
Haye naino se karti hoon shikaar main do dhaari talwaar yaar... (2)
Tu do dhaari talwaar yaar... (2)



With ending of the song Sangeet also ends.
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hailaaa... mujhe laga u mentioned me in ur thread as my IF name is AkDha_Fanatic ... i thought mujhse aisi kya GUSTAKHI kardi?? 🤣
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it is so awsom.. do update soon n pm me dear..
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Hiii here is the nxt chappy. All the main character are as same in the show. This is a fun filled chapter...pls don't miss.

CHAPTER 2

Jodha is really happy to see her bst frnds save her on time... She runs and hugs them tightly... They hug her too in return... all the amerians are very happy...but bharmal has no expression on his face... Roshni" Kaka sa abhi humse naraz hai aap?? Aap jaante hai na hume aise mehel mein band rehena pasand hai" Then he smiles at her. Jodha"Yeh toh galat hai Roshni ko ghumne ki ijaazat mili aur hume aapne kabhi nahi di bapu sa" Rosh"Abh is mein kaka sa ki kya galti hai ki jija sa aapko bahar jaane nahi dete...apne Shenshah e hindustan se hi ijaazat lele Jodha... abh toh Agra hi ghar hai tera" Akira"Abh humari kismat kharab hai...jab kabul mein rehete the tab tu aa nahi sakti thi ... ab jab tu Agra mein hai... hum bohot door hai!!" Jodha" Aap to apne bapu sa se puch kar Agra aa sakti hai na...koi aapko kuch kahega bhi nahi... utni akal nahi lagti teri" Akira" Jodha... meri galti nahi hai... Mirza bhaijaan ko bura lagega" Mirza"Hume bura kyu lagega?" Akira" Hum aae aur aapki behen nahi aayi toh bura lagega na" Mirza laughs. Jalal"Khair abh kaha unhe humari yaad aati hai" Roshni"Kaise aaegi... Aapki ristedaar banke ya Jodha ki dast banke...yeh pehele tai kar lijiye ga... warna yudh wahin chid jaaega ki Akira kaha rahegi... Ammijaan ke saath ya Jodha ke saath" Then Akira and Roshni laugh cose unke double meaning unhe hi samajh aati hai... she talking about Jalal telling her to stay with ammijaan and Jodha asking her to stay in her room. Akira" Sabhse behetar hai hum phoophi jaan ke saath rahenge aur Rahim ke saath khelenge... par Rahim toh hume bhul hi gaye honge... hai na?" Rahim" Doston ko nahi bhulte aapa" Jalal" Akira rehene dijiye... aap hum bhul gayi toh unhe kaise yaad rakhngi(Unhe meant Jodha)" Akira" Aapki aadatein nahi badleingi... surat badal gayi par abhi vahi harkatein" She then spots Maham and Adham at which her mood gets off... Jalal senses it and keeps hand on her shoulder and says" Humari behen ko Agra aane ke liye ijaazat ki zaroorat nahi hoti... aap aaengi toh dono ko accha lagega" Akira(swings her mood)" Toh Shenshah aap hi bataiye ki ...hume jhelne ki tarkibein nikali ya pareshaan hone ki than li hai... Vo kya hai shaitaniya aapse hi seekhi hai... phir agar hume kuch mat kahiye" Jalal smirks at her. Rosh" Tabh ki baat tabh sochenge pehele kuch logo ki kairiyat to lele" Akira" Shenshah ... accha kiya humse na sahi aapse toh thodi urdu seekh li" Jalal smirks at Jodha. Jalal" Kuch aur na sahi yeh toh seekha" Rosh" Aur bohot kuch seekha hai" Jodha" Haan Haan ...bohot kuch seekh liye...unse bhi aur tujhse bhi... abh chup reh" Jalal" Kyu unhe kehene dijiye" Rosh" Koi nahi kuch baatein sabhke saamne nahi kehete hai shenshah...(referring to elders, ruks and benazir...whic Jalal gets).. baad mein batate hai" Jodha" Pehele Sukanya se daant toh kha le" Sukanya comes before and says" Aapne bohot bura kiya... aap hai hi aisi ... jab zaroorat padi kahi gayab ho gayi" Rosh" Abh aa toh gaye na... aur kaha Sangeet mein gair maujood the" Sukanya" Gair Maujood ka matlab?" Rosh" Jodha se puch lena" Jalal" Jashn mein na aana" Suknaya" Dhanyawad... humne bohot seekh liya... itne ...itne ajeeb shab hai" Akira" Aisa hi lagta hai...par seekh jaaengi toh samajh aa jaega... koi nahi Jodha sikha degi ...hai na Jodha" Mainavati" Bas Bas... boohot ched liya Jodha ko...aur kitna chedegi...Jao tum dono tayar hokar aao" Rosh" Vo hum bachpan se hi the maasa" Dadi sa" Arry... Aise hi shaitani kargi kya?pasina aa raha hai aur dhul mitti lagi hai chehere par... jaa muh dho kar aao" Rosh and Akira go inside and returns in an hour.

Rosh" Sangeet khatam hui hai...Jashn toh bacha hai... vo kya hai na is khushi ke mauke pe hume masti toh karni hogi... to khana kha kar wapas yahi lautiye " Sukanya" Aur bhi Jashn bacha hai" Akira" Itni jaldi sabhko chod denge kya"

Everyone is havig dinner... Jalal ... Benazir, Jodha, Roshni and Akira are sitting together. Rosh" Jija sa...Jodha ne koi gustakhi kar di kya jo itni chup hai" Benazir" Kuch bolne ke liye soch rahi hai" She is alone laughing... Jalal stares at her and then turns to eat. Akira" Vaise... yeh mohotarma kon hai?"(pointing towards Benazir) Jalal"Benazir hai... kabul se aayi hai... humari harem mein hai" Rosh" Koi fark nahi padhta... aapke harem mein itne log hai ki un sabh ke naam bhi yaad nahi honge aapko" jodha laughs at Jalal. Jalal" Abh hote hai... kya karen abh hum dusron ka dil nahi dukhate" Akira and Jodha stare at him suddenly when he says this. Benazir" Hum shenshah ki khaas hai par ruquiya begum ke baad... sataraj mein hum mahir hai... Aur Shenshah koi ek din paa hi lenge" Roshni" Zyaada pankh phailane ki zaroorat nahi hai Benazir... kam se kam Amer mein toh lihaz kijiye... besharmi ki hadd hoti hai... Jodha se dushmani le rahi hai...kisi ne sun liya toh Jodha ki jaan nikal jaaegi aur phir aapki dushmani ho jaaegi aur humesha ki tarh jija sa maze lenge" Benazir" Hum kisi se darte nahi hai" Akira" Jodha ko tujhe pagal karne mein waqt nahi lagega... Jodha bohot tez hai." Benazir" Dushmano ko kamzoor samajhna bhul hoti hai... aapke kaka jaan ne shikhaya tha" Roshni" Koi fark nahi padhta...aapki kabiliyat ki tarah aapke kapde bhi kam hai" Jalal laughs at it... he spats out the water which was in his mouth. Benazir is furious ... she leaves... everyone has completed eating and are coming towards the hall. Sukanya is excited as more time is being spent with everyone. Roshni " Doston, Bhaiyon aur beheno aur baki sare log... Abhi masti baki hai itni jaldi kahan chodenge hum sabh aapko" Akira puts up a small act. All were enjoying. But Jalal was not interested in love stories... but his mind was stuck on Jodha who was busy watching the drama. Rosh and Akira's eyes didn't go unnoticed on Jalal. After the drama was complete ...Akira saw Benazir back besides Jalal. She goes to Mirzra...and tells him something. Then he goes to Hamida Begum and says something. No one knew what they were talking...only four knows...Akira, Rosh, Mirza and ammijaan. Ammijaan smiles at the words. Roshni goes backstage...Akira called the kids... The musicians were sent off... The kids sat at their place... The kids learned to play musical instruments. Akira" Toh...itne lambe natak ke baad thodi masti honi chahiye na... Toh ho jaae.". Some of the kids came towards Ammijaan and stood there. Jodha, Jalal and Ruks were puzzled. Then the music starts playing... Jodha gets what was happening... Akira got sided...Jodha saw Benazir againg getting close to Jalal...He smirks at her... Then Jodha starts singing.

Natkhat natkhat jamuna ke tatt par,
kuch to churaye haye maiyya
dil churaye neend churaye chain churaye haye maiyya
kaise main jaaun ghar apne sab laaj sharam main chhodi re
kaise kahun kis natkhat ne kiya maakhan chori re..

Everyone knew whom Jodha refered.

maiyya yashoda mori gagri se jamuna ke pul par maakhan haan koi, re maakhan chura le gaya
ho maiyya yashoda kaise jaaun ghar jamuna ke pul par maakhan haan koi, re maakhan chura le gaya
mori baanh modi, natkhat re,
kare dil ko odi, natkhat re,
mori gagri phooti, natkhat re,
main bojh se chhooti, natkhat re,
mori thaame kalai us kinare le gaya

Mirza

maiya yashoda sach kehta hoon main jamuna ke pul par maakhan ki gagri se maakhan bachane gaya
haan maiya yashoda mori gagri se jamuna ke pul par maakhan haan koi, re maakhan chura le gaya

ho suna tha ik din maine jamuna tat par chalte chalte
kisi gopi ko baith akele rote raina dhalte
maine socha ke meri maiyya se main kya bolunga
kahe na roka us roti goriya ke dil ko jalte
haan maakhan to churaya
par usko bhi sikhaya
ke tu bhi to thoda sa chakh le bhai..

ho maayi hum dono phir jahan baithe us jamuna ke pul par maakhan hum mil ke re maakhan chata ho gaya
ooo.. maiyya yashoda mori gagri se jamuna ke pul par maakhan haan koi, re maakhan chura leyy gaya

Jodha

mahi mohe laaj aave kaahe main ro-ro karti thi
koi maakhan chori main baith ke bas aahen bharti thi,
phir tere natkhat ne ek din mohe ye raaz bataya
ho phir tere natkhat ne ek din mohe ye raaz bataya
chori hota tha makhan kyunki choron se darti thi
jo maakhan jam ke khaye to kya koi churaye
to chakh le aur chakha le thoda maayi
o maayi tore matkhat ko maine hi jamuna ke pul par maakhan khilaya, re maakhan mera ho gaya
maiyya yashoda sach kehta hoon main jamna ke pul par maakhan haan gori ko maakhan khilane gaya..

natkhat natkhat jamuna ke tatt par,
kuchh to churaye haye maiyya
dil churaye neend churaye chain churaye haye maiyya
kaise main jaaun ghar apne sab laaj sharam main chhodi re
kaise kahun kis natkhat ne kiya maakhan chori re..

After this everyone were laughing and She smirked back at Jalal with trimph...and his defeat.

All the Jashn was over... Everyone went back to their rooms. Jalal went to his room... Jodha came and was leaving back when he said"Aap accha jaa leti hain Jodha Begum." Jodha "Haan" Jalal"Aap kahan jaa rahi hai?" Jodha"Jaise aapko bada fark padhta hai...(She was little angry)Jaa rahe hai... Sukanya chahati hai ki hum unke saath soye...isiliye aajaap par koi pabandhi nahi hai humare saath sone ke liye." Jalal"Shabba Khair" Jodha"Shubh Ratri"They both parted ... Jalal could not sleep... He was used to her presence and her talking. Ruquiya enters and says"Shayad kisi ko neend nahi aati... ya kisi ki yaad aa rahi hai" Jalal"Shukar hai aap toh aayi... varna laga aaj hum akele hi hai"

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Superb.. pls continue soon & do pm..
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Will be back soon!!! Sorry

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Chapter 4

Jodha is there with Sukanya,Roshni,Akira and Shivani.

Ruquiya was there with Jalal. Suddenly kids come there and see Jalal and Ruquiya and go away. Jalal " Aap kisi ko dhundh rahe hai?" Kids " Haan... Jodha jiji ko...kuch zaroori baatein batani thi" Jalal " Hume bata dijiye hum bata denge unhe" Akira comes there " Unki bholi surat pe mat jana bohot shaitan hai" kids " Aapki tarah na?" Ruquiya laughs. Akira takes the kids and leave. Ruquiya " Jalal, aap in bacchon ke saath zyaada baatein mat kijiye" Jalal " Is mein kya mushkil hai" Ruks " Yeh jodha begum ke behene hai aur aapko humse door karne ki koshish kar rahe hai"
They hear some sounds down there. Jodha and Roshni were fighting. Rosh " Jodha meri jaan...ruk toh sahi baat toh sun" Akira " Aaj teri khairiyat hai Roshni" Jodha " Roshni tu ruk aisa kuch bhi mat karna...bhagwan ke liye meri jaan bacha le"
With these sound everyone wakes up Jalal comes down. Jalal " Aapko raat mein shor karna accha lagta hai" AKira " Shenshah aap rehene dijiye...jaise bade soo rahe the?" Jalal " Hum nahi toh dusre toh soo rahe hai na" Roshni " Accha hua sabh uth gaye toh sun lijiye ...Kal sabh jaldi uthne wale hai. Maan Sigh koi bahana nahi chalega" Sukanya " Kyu kal konsi rasam hai?" Roshni " Kya!!!!???? Aap sabh bhul gaye kisi ko yaad nahi kal kya hai???" Mainavati " Roshni... dhime baat kijiye. Aur hai kya kal" Akira " Kal nahi aaj...12 baj gaye hai" Roshni " HOLI HAI !!!!!!" Everyone was shocked how could they forget tomorrow is Holi!! They were extremely happy.

Jalal saw that Jo's sisters were rubbing some oil on their bodies,faces. Shivani " Jija sa tayar rahiye ga ...kal holi hai...aap apna chera aayne mein pehechan nahi paayenge" Jalal " Kyu?" Shivani " Akira jiji Roshni jiji sabhne aapko puri tarah rangne ki tayari kar li hai" Saying this they leave. Benazir didn't know what would happen. Jalal is in a dilema. Ruks is totally blank.

Next Day
Jalal wakes up with all the shor that is going on outside. Holi is on full swing. Jalal looks out of window he saw Jodha who was totally indulged in playing with colors. She was looking like an angel.
He gets ready and comes out. SWOOSH!! He is fully drained with water... Roshni,Akira and Jodha have poured full bucket of water on him. Jalal looks up and Rosh and Akira" Bura na mano Holi hai!!!!" Jalal was dripping with water and Jodha was laughing hardly. Ruks gets angry on Akira and says" Aap musalmaan hai aur aapko is tarah se in hinduon ke saath is tarah ka mazak nahi karna chahiye...aap Holi khel kaise sakti hai?" Akira(SHe feel that Ruks had insulted Jodha due to wich she gets angry ... She comes down)" Kyu ... aapko kya farak padhta hai?(Everyone gathers as she was in a Rage she cannot hear a word against Jodha) Aapko Holi khelne ko kisisne kaha hai kya? Na aapke saath khelne mein hume dilzasbi hai ... Kyu aap hindustan mein reheti hai...unhe aapne Jashn mein kheer khilati hai toh hum unke tyohar mein khushi nahi baant sakte? Aap yeh baat samjhengi bhi kaise...dusron ke dil ko dhukhane ke siway aapko aata kya hai" Jodha stops her in between. Akira " Bolne de Jodha...Aaj tak chup thi kuyki hum izzat karte the Shehnshah ki... Ruquiya Begum ko kuch kahenge toh unhe bura lagega... Aaj toh bone dijiye...humesha se aapko humse mushkil thi na kabhi baat toh thik se ki nahi... Shenshah ki dost hai toh kya hua? Iska matlab yeh thodhi hai ki aap jo marzi aayi keh dengi...dusron ke zasbaton ko thes nahi pahuchana chahiye" She leave and goes back to her room. Jodha was sad. Roshni and Jodha go behind her.She is Ruquiya's cousin sister. Jodha comes to her room and sits sad She is crying. Akira was angry that she took Ruquiya's side. Jalal comes and sees that all the happiness had vanished away in a few seconds. Everyone was happy but just because of Ruks rude behavior everyone was sad. Roshni was now angry on Ruquiya. She comes there to Ruquiya who was with Jalal and Says " Sach kahe toh aap is layak hi nahi hai ki kisi ki mohobbat paa sake... pehele dusron ko izzat dengi toh aapko izzat milegi...vaise bhi aapke wajah se pure bachpan wo akeli rahi bina apne ammijaan ke jabki unki koi galti bhi nahi thi. Aap parivaar ka mahatva kaise samjhengi aapka toh koi parivaar nahi hai...jabh apno ko dukh hota hai toh wo dard aap nahi samajh sakti. Wo agar aapki jaisi hoti toh kabhka aapko maar chuki hoti. Aap nahi samajhengi. Aap toh sirf dhos jamana janti hai apko toh preem dena bekaar hai" She leaves annoyed. She goes and sits near Jodha who was crying. Akira comes there goes past RUks and takes jo's hands and says " Humari baaton ka bura mana...Jodha main gusse mein thi kuch bhi keh diya...tujhpe apna gussa nahi nikalna chahiye tha. chod...aaj ke din aankhon mein aansu nahi hone chahiye aaj toh khushi ka din hai...kahan tu ro rahi hai chal abhi toh Holi shuru hui hai... arrey tu roegi toh baki sabh kaise hasenge?" Little Rahim also knows how to cheer up her choti ammijaan...he comes and put colors on jodha and laughs on her... Rahim " Humne pehele aapko rang lagaya...hum jeet gaye... aap toh puri laal ho gayi hai choti ammijaan...dekiye ...hehehehe" Jodha's beautiful smile returns on her face. The trio run after Rahim to put colors on him. Maan Singh puts water on Roshni and Akira as same as they did when Jalal came out. Jalal laughs on it. Ruks sees that Jalal go out and is laughing so hard. He is much enjoying with them while he should consult her.








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