Dark Sandhir SS The Melancholy OF My Canvas(Ch-6 updated) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: archakan

awesome update dear... eagerly waiting for next part...pls update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1995

it was awsome yaar,loved it

pls update soon,waiting eagerly to know whats gonna happen next
thanx a lot for the pm
love
pari

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

its superb awesome fab lovely lovely lovely lovey

night bala part was really nice.
poor Sanyu ya Rd esa kyu karrahi hai?
yuo describe everything very superbly.
its fab superb amazine lovely part.
ya myestery jaldi slove karo
love it. update asap.😃

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yes baby ye starting h bas
u hv to w8 bachhe
enjoy 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tiara24

hey

it ws superb!!
waiting fo d nxt part eagerly!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

what the hell...😡

update agya,,,and muje pata hi ni chala..😭
this update was super awesome...
i was flying in the air..
one of the best consummations i have read..
u know i love gun for this..
and u and her are punjabi sisters..
i never knew u write so beautifully...
m ur fan re..
autograph kab milegaa...??
whatsapp pe plz pic bejdena apne autograph ki..
will keep that with myself for rest of my life..
love you my baby,,
now i want an update..
but u didnt post that banner..
😡 😡
kyo kyo kyo??
post it..
itni mehanat kari ashu ne..
and u are spoiling it..
bye

Kya baat h
itnaaa sundar sa comment 😆
m loving it
nd hawa mein udao
bhut achhe se ata h apko 😆😆😆
nd yes banner laga di maine 😆
autograph chahiye lo
"MUKKA"
lol

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love y <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MDKRM

Wht is all this mess yaar why he is doing all this
Waise this prt was awersome

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Posted: 10 years ago
Updating janeman 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 4

A/N : Some might get confused in the last part ,so for them please wait for the next update :)

Happy Reading :)


"Sir ,your work is done ,it's there in the second shelf" ,Jordan blabbered and sighed
A cool shudder trickled down his spine. Glancing around miserably, he observed portraits staring at him through the layers of dust , seemingly penetrating his very being. Cold, hesitant light streamed in through a cracked window, casting eerie shadows on the walls. He immediately smashed the liquor bottle and broke down on the floor
"I never wanted to do this sanyukta ,never ",he murmured between his hiccups and hissed as a glass piece pierced his palm
"You haven't eaten anything since morning,sir",Jordan chirped while gesturing towards the dining full of all delicacies one can imagine ,la souffl ,les oeuvres, champaigne, smoked salmon and a delicious aroma engulfed the whole room ..
"Jordan,Humans eat what they are served but beasts hunt for their own prey",he groaned
"Is it something special today ,Jordan" ,he questioned as he noticed Jordan in his new acrylic vest
"la saint sylvestre "(New year's eve) , replied jordan
Randhir nodded and silently moved out ...
*****
He sighed and reached for the door bell of a relatively small yet an elegant cottage
"granny"
"Oh! Randhir,my child",came a humble reply from a woman in her 70s
"You are late this time baby,I won't talk to you" she gave an annoyed look while raffling his hairs
"Oh my Girlfriend ,my chocolate truffle " he hushed winking
"Oh My My, seems someone has mastered in flattery " she smiled while adjusting his collars as they entered together
" You're gonna lose this time, boyfriend", she signalled towards the French hangman
"No Granny I am not in mood today" with this they settled themselves on a nearby couch
Visiting his granny on new year's eve was his yearly pilgrimage , he never failed to spend some beautiful moments with her as those were the only ones he had treasured ...
He started recounting his "good ol days " with his granny ,
He closed his eyes for a moment, opened his treasured trove of memories and took a step back in time to his childhood.
...
"Sitting on the porch talking about the bird on the tree"
"Cursing the aunt next door and giggling"
"Singing the merry song and swirling"
...
With this a salty tear escaped down his warm butterscotch eyes ,followed by another one ,releasing the sadness and sorrow that had been held inside him for all this time but still he did not make a sound ,thus veiling his wounds ...
"Boyfriend"
"Bloody Mary or red wine ?"
"Bloody Mary girlfriend" ,he almost sang like a kid as he wiped his tears leaving some reddishness behind
"Randhir, What happened my child?", Granny eyed Randhir ,as if she was reading his mind
"Granny, she was never mine , she is a traitor granny ", he blurted as he couldn't hide anymore
"A Traitor ",he emphasized

******
"Sanyukta, stop staring at the blank Canvas, will u?" ,came a hoarse voice
"Rochelle, let me concentrate ",she replied in irritation
"Is everything alright dear? ,you were never so blank", Rochelle patted her back
"Where is that old Sanyukta , who painted a flying pigeon ,when she got her masters in designing " demanded Rochelle
"I don't know", she answered in oblivion
"Sanyukta ,did something happen between you and Randhir"
"last night?" ,rochelle added
"Rochelle , What if he gets to know everything?", she retorted in haze ignoring Rochelle's question
"What if..."
Silence prevailed
*****
An old lady was strolling in a garden flashing her brightest smile , swaying in between ...
She sat on a nearby bench listening to the violent sizzle of sap , smelling the daisies and the daffodils
Suddenly she felt some thing pierce on her neck as she choked
Blood endlessly poured from her neck, staining her beautiful cream gown a sullied red, through her wheatish skin the blood almost seemed to burn like scarlet flames,
She turned around to face the evil and gulped
S-an-yukt...
She laid there in the pool of red grass unconscious immitating a helpless limp tiny doll and huffed
"Tu vas me manquer"
(I 'll miss you)
"Mon petit ami"
.
.
.
(My BOYFRIEND)


<<Muskane jhoothi hain,Pehchane jhoothi hain >>

to be continued. ..
Have a nice day!
Edited by MAHAK1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss
Jesus moi 1st
Moi danca
Btw moi late unresss karegi aaapne itni jldi update jo kiya moi ka late unresss to banta h
Sooo finallly moi unres
Paparaaa
Its commment time

Yo gals I m singing a song
Not soup song
Not flop song
Why this dhokhadari dhokhadari dhokhadari dii
Why this dhokhadari dhokhadari dhokhadari dii
Rd give-u dhokha san-yu
San-yu give-u dhokha r-d
Why this dhokhadhari dhokhadhari dhokhadhari dii
White-u skin-u granny-u granny-u
Sum-one heart-u black-u
Eyes-u eyes-u blurr-u blurr-u
Her-u future-u dark-u
Why this murder murder murder-u di
Why this dhokhadari dhokhadari dhokhadari dii
Gawd she is die-ing now-u
Sum-one is happy how-u
This is song-u for not soup-u gals
We hv choice-u

Tada song finish-u
So aapko meri bhaawanaao ka pata to chal gayi hogi
Ab ye murdur-u kisne kiya didu
N rd feeling guilty goood n sanyu gawd ye gal kya chhupa rahi n this granny took her name kyu kyu kyu
Itni mystery health k liye thik nhi h so bata do na pakka moi kisi ko nhi bataaegi
N itni late update karne se bhi health kharaab ho jaati h so jldi update na
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

Rashi hahahaha😛
Nxt ttime bhi moi hi 1st aaegi keep trying😛😉
Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shit moi came second

Glares pritha
Koi nxt tym i will stalk with full dedication

Omg yr the update was mind blowing


So much hppnd

Rd regretting hurting sanyu
He's so broken rite now
Poor soul feeling bad for him

He was feeling god wid his granny having some peace of mind by sharing everything wid her
I m so eager to know what hppnd why rd calling sanyu traitor

Sanyu too hiding sum thing
Dis is all getting intrstng


The last scene was hell scary sumone killed old lady n her last words were sanyukta
God so much confusion
I know sanyu cnt do this bt rite now everything is against her

Super excited for next
Update soon yr dis tym

Luv u yr

Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago

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