Dark Sandhir SS The Melancholy OF My Canvas(Ch-6 updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

wowie m so happy to read this ff in here as well...
Mahak u r rocking with this story

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Archana Kannan

@archakan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

OMG!!! last part is really scary yaar... eagerly waiting for next part... pls update next part asap dear...

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winchesters

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Ur language is soo beautiful too read!! It actually leaves me awed!!
The way u play wit words is marvellous!!
Yes d story is intriguing. .bt frankly its fr ur beautiful writin dat m readin dis piece of excellence <3

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shrutikag

@shrutikag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

just read the 4th part and it was a little bit confusing...nw i m eagerly waiting for the next part to reveal the actual mystery and clear the confusion but it was a good chapter...thanku for the pm and pls update soon

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samridhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

what??

u posted,,,,

and m late...

😭 😭

but i know am the first person to read it...

awweeesssooommme... my baby

loved it..

and she murdered his granny...

like seriously??

o m g...

update soon..

love you

bye

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Neha

@Fairystar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

It was super awesome update yaar

Moi just loved it till core

N Randhir guilt...that's a good sigh isn't !!

N Sanyu...gawwddd what's wrong with her xP

Thnxx for pm darlo...n do update soonish

Moi would b waiting :)

Love u loads

Neha :*

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anuja78

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

yaar kya hai ye raaz...?>??
bahot hi interesting hota jaa raha hai

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pari1995

@pari1995

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

oh god its soo damn exciting

i soo loved it dear

thanx for the pm

update soon

love

pari

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Mahak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: pritha072angel
Resss
Jesus moi 1st
Moi danca
Btw moi late unresss karegi aaapne itni jldi update jo kiya moi ka late unresss to banta h
Sooo finallly moi unres
Paparaaa
Its commment time

Yo gals I m singing a song
Not soup song
Not flop song
Why this dhokhadari dhokhadari dhokhadari dii
Why this dhokhadari dhokhadari dhokhadari dii
Rd give-u dhokha san-yu
San-yu give-u dhokha r-d
Why this dhokhadhari dhokhadhari dhokhadhari dii
White-u skin-u granny-u granny-u
Sum-one heart-u black-u
Eyes-u eyes-u blurr-u blurr-u
Her-u future-u dark-u
Why this murder murder murder-u di
Why this dhokhadari dhokhadari dhokhadari dii
Gawd she is die-ing now-u
Sum-one is happy how-u
This is song-u for not soup-u gals
We hv choice-u

Tada song finish-u
So aapko meri bhaawanaao ka pata to chal gayi hogi
Ab ye murdur-u kisne kiya didu
N rd feeling guilty goood n sanyu gawd ye gal kya chhupa rahi n this granny took her name kyu kyu kyu
Itni mystery health k liye thik nhi h so bata do na pakka moi kisi ko nhi bataaegi
N itni late update karne se bhi health kharaab ho jaati h so jldi update na
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

Rashi hahahaha😛
Nxt ttime bhi moi hi 1st aaegi keep trying😛😉

LOl Pritha

you always render me speechless

m kya bolu

rofl

kudos ...lol

i just love your cmnts darling :)😆

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Mahak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Shit moi came second

Glares pritha
Koi nxt tym i will stalk with full dedication

Omg yr the update was mind blowing

So much hppnd

Rd regretting hurting sanyu
He's so broken rite now
Poor soul feeling bad for him

He was feeling god wid his granny having some peace of mind by sharing everything wid her
I m so eager to know what hppnd why rd calling sanyu traitor

Sanyu too hiding sum thing
Dis is all getting intrstng

The last scene was hell scary sumone killed old lady n her last words were sanyukta
God so much confusion
I know sanyu cnt do this bt rite now everything is against her

Super excited for next
Update soon yr dis tym

Luv u yr

Keep smiling 😊