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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the update ... Do continue soon !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM


no this is ss is completely to torture Ishita.
Shaun,subbu's mom in next part and raman's phone damaged.guess yourself



Yaar vikas bajaao band Ishita k jitna jor se hi sake
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting for your update !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Scene starts with Ishita and Mani entering the party venue and all are praising their jodi.Both din't mind much but Ishit ais feeling little awkward over scenario as she is attending the party meant for Raman without Raman in his behalf.

Then Mihir was introducing Ishita to guests unknown to her and they notice Shagun,Ashok and Suraj present there.

Shagun was speaking to some lady Mihir identifies her as Mrs Shaani.She is wife of Raman's first boss when he started his carrer.

Mrs Shaani "Shagun bahuth din huyen tumhey dekhkar."

Shagun identifies her and feels happy and notices Ishita around and decides to play her game and Mani was watching Ishita carefully.

Shagun "Ya Mrs Shaani its been long to see you."

Mrs Shaani "Kaisye dekhogee jab tumhaara pathi itney uupar ud gaya hain tho neeche kaha dekhogee"

Shagun "Not like that .Means we never got time to ..."

Shaani "Ek seeda saada employ thaa Raman hummarey company mey but smart thaa sab kaam akeley samhaal letha thaa.But pariwaar key liyen bhee time.Abh dekho ek MNC company ka CEO ban gaya aur ENT, association ka president."

Shagun smiles looking at Ishita and showing her that.Ishita was liste ing their conversation slowly.

Mrs Shaani "You know one thing hum sab jalthey they tumsey uss samay.I mean Raman kitnaa dhyaan rakhtha thaa tumhaara.Kitnaa bhee kaam hon tumharey liyen time time spare kartha thaa."

Mrs Shaani "Mujhye aaj bhee yaad hain.Uss samay jab tumney pregnancy kaa news diya paagal ho gaya thaa.Ek huftey thak office nahee aaya aur tumhaarey liyen complete surprise plan kiyaa thaa."

Shagun smiles remembering thise days.When Raman gave a complete week off for her and took her to all fav places.

Mrs Shaani "Mera husband ney Raman sey notes liyaa thaa.Biwi ko khush kaisey rakhney key liyen."

Mrs Shaani "Yaad hain mujhey uss samay uskaa salary bhee kam thaa but hummesha pariwaar key baarey mey sochtha thaa."

Shgaun noticing Ishita listening to conversation "Ussmey kuch nahen hain.Har admee ko apnaa pariwaar he sab kuc hotha hain.Bachey key wajaha sey pyaad bhadtha hain.I mean any man would be expecting a symbol of his love for his family.Jab main ney yeh khaabar dee .i know how happy Raman was .Mainey usskey baad Raman ko kabhee itnaa kush nahen dekha.Even Ruhi key time pey bhee."

Mrs Shaani "Ruhi?"

Shagun "Raman aur meri Beti.Adi kee behen"

Mrs Shaani "I don't know much I mean Adi paida hothey hee Raman ko luck milgaya aur bahuth saarey job offers milgayen .But Raman kahan hain.I mena maine tumhey kissey aur key saath dekha."

Shagun "We are divorced.We are no more together."

Shaani was shocked and "Why ?"

Shagun "Clash of morals .leave it aapko samjh nahen aayega.Abh Raman dubaara shaadi akr chuka hain.Unka misses bhee yahan hain."

Shagun then takes Mrs Shaani to Ishita ."Ishita yeh Pooja Shaani hain.Rmaan ka first boss ke wife.Tumney kabhee dekha nahen hoga."

Shagun "Yeh Ishita Raman ke biwi."

Ishita was little confused on how to act.

Mrs Shaani "Mrs Bhalla Raman kahan hain .Unkey honour key party mey who khudh nahen aaya."

Ishita was already hurt by Shagun' provocation over children.

Ishita "Raman bachon ko lekey picnic gayen hain."

Pooja "Sirf bachon ko lekey."

Pooja feels little weird "Jiss Raman ko main jaanthe hun who kabhee aisa nahen kartha.Who hummesha Shagun key liyen time nikaaltha thaa.Bahut pyar kartha tha ussey.But aapko akeley party mey bhejkar ."

Shagun then taking chance "Mrs Shaani leave it naa.I told you Raman ko apney bachon sey jyaad apyaar hain.Waisey yeh shaadi sirf contract thaa .Ruhi key liyen .Jyaada bolkar aapko confise nahen karoongi."

Then Shagun incidentally starts discussion over Raman's behaviour then and comparing him with now.How he used to take care of everything.How he celebrated ehrn he got to know that he is going to be a father.Incidentally to provoke Ishita.How he used to trat her when she was pregnant.Mrs Shaani was indirectly but unintentionally helping Shagun as she don't know about Ishita's infertility.

Ishita was hurt by listening Shagun's words over Raman's concern for her and reason being children told by Shagun.Mani tries to cheer Ishita but he could'nt as she got hit in her sole weakness and then he decides to take her out of there and they leave the party.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Inna chotu sa update..!! 😔 btw nyc part... plz continue soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Nice update vikas . Keep continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
all d four parts read in one go
BT vikas u started a new ss n yet not pm m
I don't like it
poor ishu ...
gosh I always enjoy reading abt Raman n ruhi n now adi too
RU is always smarter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Nice updates read full in one shoot nice work vikas pls do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
sad fr ishu...evn mani cant do any thng...updatefast...

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