Path alone(MDT SERIES)

Scene starts with Ishita and Mani speaking over the table near parking lot.They were discussing about their old days in school Ishita feels sleepy and was about to go to their room bidding good bye to her friend but just then she notices Raman rushing outside and was in hurry .He was in hurry that he din't even stop to button his shirt completely and running doing the same .Ishita and Mani were shocked to see Raman in tension.They could hear one thing from Raman's mouth.

Raman "Main abhee aa rahan hun.I will be there in ten minutes.Shagun ko bolo main aa rahan hun.Iwill handle everything."

Raman takes his car and rushes away without even noticing that Ishita and Mani were watching him.

One thing was clear for Ishita that Raman is going to meet Shagun.She don't know the reason.She wanted the reason desperately.

Mani "Shagun kaun hain.Main ney Ashok key moo sey bhee suna thaa?"

Ishita was silent and the word Shagun brought some worries in her mind.

Ishita "Raman key pehlee biwi hain.Ashok kee fiance."

Mani "What?Raman kee pehlee biwi zindha hain?You married a divorcee."

Ishita was confused by this question.

Mani "I thought Raman kee pehlee biwi mar chukee hain."

Ishita "Tho.?"

Ishita's mind was filled with the thought that Raman went this late night to meet Shagun.

Ishita excuses herself and goes to her room.

In her room.Ishita was waiting for Raman to come atleast to call her but she is getting neither.

Then she decided to call him herself.But there was no reply from other side.

She calls him repeatedly als came a reply from angry Raman who tells her not to disturb he was busy.

Raman "Main phone nahe utha rahan hun matlab main busy hun.Tum baar baar kyon phone karkey satharahen hon.Just leave me now.Main baad mey phone karoonga." And cuts the call.

Ishita "Itnaa busy kyaa hain.Unhoney mujhye bathaaya bhee nahen kee kahan jaa rahen hain.Unhey kyaa lagatha hain kee ussey kessey ko jawaab deney ke jaroori nahen hain.Main aaney key baad bathaongi."

Ishita "Koi problem tho nahen hain wahan.Main Mihir ko phone karthee hun.Shaayad ussko kuch pata hon."

She then calls Mihir .

Mihir "Bhaabhi aap iss time pey phone kyon kar rahen hain."

Ishita "Mihir wahan sab kuch theek hain kyaa.Raman abh thak ghar nahen aaye."

Mihir "Bhabhi Adi ko convulsion huye.Kyon patha nahen achaanak sey beemar pad gayan.Bhai ussey hospital ley gayen hain.Bhain ney mujhey ghar jaaney key liyen kahan.I thought aapko patha hoga."

Ishita was shocked an now understood why Raman was in that hurry.

Ishita "Abh kaisey hain Adi ko.Sab kuch theek hain naa."

Mihir "Bhai wahen pey hain.Akeley khyaal rakh rahen hain.Abh better hain."

Then Ishita cuts the call and then she calls Raman but he was busy taking care of Adi who was sleeping and Raman was beside him .

Then he remembers doctors word.

"Sir bacha koi shock mey hain aur kuch dinin sey kuch problem lag rahan hain.Food digestion bhee theek nahen hain.Lag rahan hain koi psychological problem hain.So I suggest kuch din aapko atmosphere change rakhnaa hoga.Koi bahaar lekey jaayiyen mind divert keejiyen .It should be treated by the change only."

Raman was in thoughts and understood that Adi might be knowing about the fact that Ashok is gonna leave him and his mother.

Then slowly Adi gains consciousness and sees Raman sitting beside him with tears in her eyes.

Adi felt relieved seeing him.Adi from past few days hated everything around him for what ever is happening.He first time felt his father was right and he was always there with him.

Adi tried to speak some thing but he din't had that much energy to do so and he could'nt.

Raman started encouraging him and he was lost in the comfort he is feeling near his father .The comfort he missed whole along.

Then morning Shagun came early and Raman told her his decision to take Adi outside picnic for few days to give him outing.

Shagun "Main bhee aaungi.Adi merey bhina nahee reh paayega."

Raman "Itney din tum kyaa kar rahen thee.Sabko apnaa shaadi ka invitation dey rahen thee.Bachey key baarey mey kuch bahee nahen socha.Today main decision is final main Adi ko lekey bahaaar jaa rahan hun.Tum apnaa shaadi ka kaam karloo."

Then Shagun finally agrees when Raman diverted her by saying her new inlaws may think wrong if she comes along with him and he will handle Adi alone.

Then Raman spend little time with Adi and convinces him for outing.

While on other side Ishita was worried what could be situation there.

Then around 9'o clock Raman goes home just after the pooja completed.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan aap kahan they raath bhar.Aapney phone bhee nahen kiyan.Adi kaisaa hain."

Raman "Main ready hokey aatha hun fir bathaonga."

Then Raman comes out after getting ready.Then he starts packing his bag for few days outing.Ishita was busy outside making preparation along with others and explaining Mani about new rituals.

Then Ruhi was first to notice that Raman was packing bags to go somewhere.

Ruhi "Papa aap kahen jaa rahen hon?"

Raman notices his daughter dressed beautifully for festival takin her in his arms and kissing her.

Raman "Han beta.Papa picnic jaa rahen hain Adi bhayya key saath."

Ruhi "Adi bhayya key saath .Shagun mamma bhee aarahen hain ?"

Raman "Nahen sirf Papa aur bhayya.Adi bhayya kaa health accha nahen hain naa tho ussey refresh karney ."

Ruhi "Sirf aap donon."

Raman acting as if thinking "Ruhi bhee aayegi papa ko company deney.Pap Ruhi ko miss karengey naa.Wahan papa ko huggy kissey deney kaun hain.Adi bhayya tho nahen karthey naa." Kissing her and chuckling her.

Ruhi "Papa main bhee aaon?Tho ghar mey Ishima bore hojaayegee naa."

Raman "THo yahen rukho papa Adi bhayya key saath jaayega.Aur Adi bhayya papa ko daantega aur rulaayega.But merey princess merey pass nahen hogee."

Ruhi "No main papa key saath jaongi naa.Mere papa ko koi bad bad nahen kahega."

Raman laughs at her cuteness and Ruhi goes running outside.

As Ishita comes in.

Ruhi "Ishima merey bag pack karon main papa key saath picnic jaarahen hun.Adi bhayya key saath."

Raman then seeing Ishita "Doctor ney bola kee Adi ko kuch change kee jaroori hain tho socha picnic ley jaon.Ruhi kaa bhee kapadey pack kardenaa."

Ishita was shell shocked listening this.That Raman and Ruhi won't be there along with her for her first dusserha in Bhalla house.

But she has no other option so she does what Raman says.

Then Raman and Ruhi leave in Raman's car with Ruhi sitting beside Ramanin front seat and siging songs in her own tune.

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Ishita don't know the fact that Shagun was not involved in this trip and it is just a trip of a father and his kids.

Ishita din't like the fact Shagun was with Raman and was worried over the fact what problems she will cause to Raman .

Then on car Ruhi was sitting beside Raman and Adi was behind him looking at his father who loved him always but he considered him nothing and hated him all his life.Now when he realized the fact he din't have courage to say sorry to him and speak to him.

Then Ruhi was on other side on roar and commanding her father her birth right and her personnal property she feels proud of.

Ruhi "Papa aur speed chalaon.Uss gaadi humsey aagey jaa rahen hain.Aur speed."

Raman "No way.Bilkul nahen .Speed jaayengey tho tumhaarey Ishima mujhey maardegi."

Ruhi "Papa Ishima ko kaisye patha chalega.Yahan tho sirf hum teenon hain aur koi nahenn ."

Raman "Tum hon naa bathaaney key liyen."

Ruhi "Maian kyon bathaongi."

Raman "Kyon kee tum Ishima kee chamchee hon."

Ruhi "No papa .I am papa's beti."

Raman "Maska math maaro."

Adi was surprised by their conversation as he have never been in this type of conversation with any one.His and Ashok's conversation wull be mostly on what he wants and what he gets.But never a friendly chat.

On other side.

Ishita was in home and was on leave from clinic and everyone are in house only.

Ishita could'nt concentrate on any thing as both Raman and RUhi are not there.Mani tries to cheer her up but of no use.

Whole day passed along and Ishita is missing the presence of Ruhi and Raman.

Mihika who just came from office noticed that her chuhi is not there and even her best friend jeeju.

Mihika "Akka Ruhi kahan hain bahaar gayen hain kyaa?"

Ishita "Nahen Raman Adi aur Ruhi ko lekey picnic gaya hain paanch din thak nahen aayengey."

Mihika "Picnic.Aapkey bhinaa?"

Ishita was not surprised by this as she know her presence always irritates Adi and Raman has to avoid her.

Mani coming thee "Tumhey ley jaaney chahiyen thaa.Aisey kasiey ignore kar saktha hain sirf usskey beti key saath."

Ishita gets annoyed at this calling Ruhi just Raman's daughter "Ruhi hummarey beti hain Raman aur meri.Sirf usskey nahen."

Mani "Cool down.But Adi kaun hain?"

Mihika "Jeeju ka pehlaa beta."

Mani "Raman ko aur ek beta hain?Who yahan kyon nahen hain Raman key saath ?"

Ishita "Bahuth badi kahaani hain samjhogey nahen choddo."

Mihika and Ishita feels sad remembering about Adi.

Mani "I just asked it?"

Mihika "Adi ko kyaa huan?Mihir ney bathaaaya kee kall raath ko convulsions huan aur raath bar hospital mey thaa.Jeeju wahen thaa."

Ishita "Han koi problem hain.Bahuth disturbed huan hain koi baath sey doctor ney kahan koi change chahiyen diversion ."

Then slowly they are feeling the absence of Raman.

Then in hotel around night.

Ruhi calls Ishita using Raman's mobile while Adi was not interested in any thing.

Ruhi "Ishima .Aap kaisey hon?"

Ishima "Tum log pahunch gayen.Main theek hun"

Ruhi "Main bhee thek hun .Aap log wahan masti kar rahen hon naa merey bhina?"

Ishita "Tumhaarey bhina kaisey masti.Boring hain yahan."

Ruhi "Uffo.hum yahan bahuth masti kar rahen hain.Bhayya bhee hain naa tho papa ney usskey liyen video game khareedha thaa.Main bhee khel rahen hun."

Ishita "Kyaa Raman ney video game liyan.Mainey unhey mana kiya thaa naa.Papa ko phone doo"

Ruhi "Ishima papa bahaar hain.Yahan sirf main aur Adi bhayya hain."

Ishita "Shagun mama ?"

Ruhi clear as she knew Shagun din't come along "Who yahan nahen hain?"

Ishita undersood Shaguna nd Raman both went ouside.

Then after few minutes of mother and daughter talk,

Ishita "Papa aaney baad phone karney key liyen bolo.Godd night"

Then Raman comes there and they go for lunch.

Everywhere it is shock for Adi as Ruhi is completely commanding over Raman.What she say's has to happen.

Raman makes Ruhi eat personally making her sit over table(every rule meant to be broken if it comes to Ruhi.)as she was spilling the soup.Adi was hardly able to eat anything as he remembers only thing about Ashok and Suraj.

Then Raman taking situations in his own hands.

Raman "Adi tum itnaa bhe nahen khaaya.I thought it is your fav. But tumtho Ruhi sey bhee kam khaatey hon."

Ruhi being her fathers daughter understood situation "Han papa bhayya ko khaana hee nahen aatha.Sab kuch spill kardiyan."

Adi "Mujhey khaana aatha hain."

Raman "THo yeh sabh kyon choddiyan.Ruhi bhee khaa lethee hain itnaa thon."

Adi "Mujhey bhee aaatha hain.Main abhe dikhatha hun."

Adi finishes his dinner tricked by father and daughter duo who gave hi-fi to each other on success.

Then at night three of them were in room.

Raman was laying on the bedwit Ruhi on his side and Adi on other.

Ruhi is unable to sleep without bed time story.

Ruhi "Papa aap story bolon naa.Mujhey neend anhen aa rahen hain."

Raman "Mujhey nahen aathe."

Ruhi "Mujhey neend nahen aayegi ."

Raman "Ek kaam karon tum khudh bataon.Main sununga."

Ruhi "Yeh acch idea hain."

She then gets up and sits over her fathers chest and started telling story while her hands were busy playing with Raman mostache pulling and chuckling him.

Adi was seeing how happy Ruhi was doing her masti .She neither have fear not any tension.She is happy and care free.

Ruhi slowly falls in sleep hugging Rmaan tightly.

Ramana and Adi coukd hear Ruhi uttering in sleep.

I love Papa' by which Raman gets tears in his eyes and holds her tightly but not disturbing her sleep.

Adi sees Raman and Ruhi together and remembers he never had such moment or closeness with Ashok as Ruhi shares with Raman.

Ruhi has always been with Raman and she knows everything about him and how to behave in which situation.She is his princess and she will get everything she wanted.Adi first time remembering his old days with Raman when he was too small he was closer with Raman more closer.He used to get mostly what he wanted even though Raman was not rich then he never let Adi to lag behind.

Then on other side Ishita is worried by the fact that Raman is with Shagun and he din't even call her.

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Its awesome... Pls continue soon...

Continue it dude. I always love your Os/ss dude. And band bajao thoda Ishita ki atleast here we can revenge her.

its good 👏👏.. pls continue

intrstng nd amazng...loving it...esply adi's thinkng...nd raman ruhi bond...bechari ishu...pm me fr nxt...

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