//MG SS- AWARI// last part - pg 51...17/7/2015

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Sweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

great..

sweetheart we want a long update with happy ending!!

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta
great..

sweetheart we want a long update with happy ending!!

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

hi thanks 4 da pm n note! Of cos want happy ending! waiting! update soon!

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kabslocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

wonderful os, story seems incomplete, want a bit of past and happy ending.

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fariya20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

thank you consider our wish n not end it soon

want some past n maan family reaction to see geet sucess

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Nice story
The personality of geet is sooo strong love her like that
But inside she is much hurt and it's coz of maan
Wat had happen in their past and geet's father death ???
Continue soon dear

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@Neeju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

chapter 4

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8HeRvbeuCc[/YOUTUBE]

Maan keep on watching geet going away from him... her eyes are telling him... how much she love him but still she is leaving him to live lonely life...

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye

he keep on staring at the same place... his heart doesn't want to believe that she have left him once again...

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe

Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein

His heart his soul want their other half... his whole existence is incomplete without her... he keep on staring at same place... he wanted to believe geet can't leave him... she will come to him...

Kyun rooh meri ye sahe

someone collide with maan and break his staring process... maan look at person with blank eyes... that person meekly said sorry and hurriedly go from there... it give him realization that geet have already left him...

Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon

he wanted to shout and tell her... how incomplete he is without her... maan went to his car... he sit and close the door... he sit their like lifeless body...tears are flowing continuously from his eyes...

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

he wanted to tell her how much he need her... he is like walking dead body without her... tears are flowing continuously... maan angrily remove his tears with his shirt...he start his car and went from there...

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe

Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein

Kyun rooh meri ye sahe

he was driving very fast... he see the alcohol shop on the road...he stop his car and he went to the shop to brought alcohol... he open one bottle and start drinking he place other bottle on the passenger seat...

Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

he keep on driving and drinking... some how he reach khurana mansion and in his drunken state he reach his room...

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya

maan look at room ... His room look same as it was before geet come to his life... his room look as lifeless as him...

Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan

this was how he was living before geet but now his own room is repulsing him...

Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya

Maan feel no body need him... he is unwanted for everyone... geet do not want him... his family do not like him... neither silence of his room is giving him peace nor this lifeless luxury life...

Main adhoora jee raha hoon
khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

everyone have left him like geet... maan with his fabling steps went his cupboard... he took one box out from the cupboard and return to his bed... maan sit on floor near his bed... he open the box... one duptaa was placed in this box...

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai

Maan took the duptaa and smell it with close eyes... he can still feel geet's fragment in it...

Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai

Aaa..

he kept looking at duptaa... he feel like it is mooching him... this duptaa wanted to end his life... he took bottle and start drinking alcohol once again... he close his eyes...

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai

Maan close his eyes... he still remember the way geet used to love shaking her bangles and he would love to just look at her lovingly...

Sunkar isey aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain

with this though he will remember how much helpless he is...

Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa

only geet can break this wall ... he want geet to come to him and break this wall so they can live together... but geet have left him...

maan look around the room ... every single thing is mooching him... he took the alcohol bottle and start spreading it liquid all around the room... he took matchbox ... he took 2 sticks from matchbox... he light them and throw the matchsticks on ground alcohol catch the fire... room start burning in fire...

Main adhoora jee raha hoon Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

servants of khurana mansion notice the smoke... they hurriedly went check the room... they see the room have catches fire... maan is sitting in between the room... still drinking ... servents try to go inside the room but fire have spread all over the room they are unable to do anything...

Nakul shout at maan to come out of room... maan look at nakul and then at room... he laugh at room showing how much happy he is now nobody have to bear him...tears were flowing from his eyes... even nakul have tears in his eyes he know how much his maan baba love geet ...

PS. Hello reading...you want me too continue so here next part...i know this is sad part but i can't give happy ending just like that ...i will show the story step by step...

PS..now its my turn to ask...give more long comments...

Edited by Neeju - 10 years ago

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

emotional update😭

feeling sorry for maaneet😭

what happened in past?😕

maan tried suicide😲

hope maan is fine😕

update soon

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: anjalisen85
emotional update😭

feeling sorry for maaneet😭

what happened in past?😕

maan tried suicide😲

hope maan is fine😕

update soon

wait for next part

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

maan tried to suicide??

I feeling really bad..for both of them..its so sad..two people victims of society ...their love was so brutally killed...
I m waiting to knw what happened in the past..!!

p.s - my like button is not working..