//MG SS- AWARI// last part - pg 51...17/7/2015

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

hi splendid intense emotional update! Sad end! Maan happy seeing her! they dance n she leaves! He sees the pain in her eyes! Bt she cannot 4get wt happened 2 her dad! well written

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

OMG NEER awesome it is loved it...felt the pain of Maan n.Geet thanks for writing MAANEET Os on this song em madly in love wd this song...it would b awesome if u add their past how why maan left her n her past if u feel so...Congratulations for ur first Os...

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: xolfiya
OMG NEER awesome it is loved it...felt the pain of Maan n.Geet thanks for writing MAANEET Os on this song em madly in love wd this song...it would b awesome if u add their past how why maan left her n her past if u feel so...Congratulations for ur first Os...

tkx dear...i think you guys want me turn it into ss😆

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

lovely os...so maan has hurted geet in past...maaneet danced passionately and then parted away...sad ending

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

whts dis dear...end like dis...sorry will not press d like coz i didnt like the ending...sorry...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

till part 3
nice...
bu i hate unhappy endings...
so i demand happy waala one...
do continue this...
Maan hurt Geet so much and both love each other still...
try to bring them together dear...

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11j25sam

@11j25sam

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

so you decided a sad ending😊

no probs😊 but would have loved to know what happened in past

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

NOTE

On my readers demand i will continue this OS ...i need to write at least 2- 3 parts to make happy ending ...if you want more parts then like this post ...