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Part 15

Recap: sujal & kashish gets engaged, and sujal's parents decide to get them married asap. sujal &
kashish both think about their decision and feel that they are right.


Now:

It's another beautiful morning in shimla. Everybody in khanna and garewal family are busy with wedding preparation as well as their regular life. Sujal gets ready for office and comes down for breakfast. Everybody else is sitting on table and talking to each other while having breakfast.

Piyush- papa, aapne aur uncle ne us Mr. sharma ke proposal ke bare mein kuch socha kya?

CG- nahi piyush beta, tum unse keh dena ki woh hum ab sujal aur kashish ki shaadi ke baad hi tay karenge.

Lalit- haan main bhi yeh hi soch raha tha

Vasu- are tum log bhi kya jab dekho tab office ki baatein le kar shuru ho jaate ho?

Veena- haan shaadi ki taiyariya ya phir aur kisi baat mein to in logo ka dyan hi nahi hai

Vasu- (to rishi, pooja & aman) aaj tum log college se seedha gahr aa rahe ho, hame shaadi ki taiyariyon me help karvane ok.

Aman- kya mama aaj hamara match hai main aur rishi nahi aayenge

Rishi- haan aunty aaj to muskil hai, hum kal se help karenge aur pooja hai na aaj, right poo?

pooja- no way bro, i have to go for dance class today, i will help from tomorrow.

Then three of them leave for college. Lalit & CG also leave as they have to meet an important client.

Veena- sujal aaj tu kab free hoga?

Sujal- kyon mama, kuch kaam tha kya?

Veena- haan main soch rahi thi ki tum aur kashish jaa kar uski choice ki jewelery & mangalsutra ki shopping kar lo is liye

Sujal- lekin main mama, sneha se kahiye na woh kashish ke saath chali jayegi

vasu- are nahi sneha kyon, ye kaam to tumahara hai sujal aakhir tum bhi kashish ki pasand jaan lo aur ye hamare ghar ki rasam hai piyush bhi to sneha ko lekar gaya tha

Piyush- maa mat yaad dilao un dino ko, aaj bhi mujhe us baat ke daravne sapne aate hai ke main ek coolie ya driver hoon. 😆

Sneha - dekha mama, ye piyush hamesha meri burai dekhta rehta hai, ab mein tumhare saath kabhi shopping pe nahi jaongi

Piyush- really thank u so much
😆

Vasu- bas piyush, khabardaar meri beti ko pareshan kiya to is baar tumhe bhi sneha ko shopping karvani hai. aakhir uski behan ki shaadi hai, tum dono ko kal hi apne liye aur kuch shaadi ke liye shooping karni hai to kal ka din free rakhna.(piyush mar gaya bechara )

Veena- aur sujal tum bhi aaj hi jaa rahe ho samje?

Sujal -ji mama.

Sneha & piyush also leave for office and sujal goes to meet his client. Veena tells him that she will call kashish to get ready around lunch time.

In Khanna house, nisha & prerna are busy with preparations. Prerna tells nisha to get rest in her condition but nisha is too happy and wants to help in everything so does saahil. Vinit & anurag are busy as usual in their meetings. Prerna asks akshat to help her today for invitations but he says that he has some important lecture in college and he will help her from tomorrow.Prerna gets a call from veena about sujal is coming to pick kashish for shopping so she asks kashish as kashish was about to go somewhere.

P- kashish beta kahi jaa rahi ho kya?

K- haan badi maa, woh office ka zaroori kaam tha.

P- woh saahil nahi kar sakta kya?

K- aisi to baat nahi hai badi ma, lekin kyon aap ko koi kaam tha kya?

P- woh dekho na abhi veena ji ka phone aaya tha aur unhone kaha hai ki aaj sujal aur tum ja kar jewelery & mangalsutra ki shopping kar lo

k- lekin woh aap hi choice kar lo na, mujhe aap ki choice pasand hai.

nani- are ye kya baat hui, sab kuch to theek hai lekin mangalsutra to tum dono hi pasand karoge ye to hamare aur unke ghar ka rivaaj hai.

p- aaj teri meeting saahil kar lega, tu ja sujal lunch tak aa raha hai

K- to theek hai na badi ma, saahil ko pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai, mein bhi meeting khatam kar ke lunch tak aa jaongi

P- jaisi teri marzi, lekin aa jana lunch tak

Now kashish goes for meeting & comes back an hour before lunch time as her meeting was over early. She changes her clothes and goes to terrace as she was not feeling comfortable with idea of shopping with sujal. She is thinking.

Kashish ( to herself)- aaj mujhe itna ajeeb kyon lag raha hai? aaj se pehle bhi to main kitni baar sujal ke saath bahar ja chuki hoon phir ye sab? Mujhe pata nahi kyon is shaadi ki shopping se, in sab taiyariyon se ghutan ho rahi hai? aakhir ye faisla mera apna hai phir kyon? mujhe apna nahi to kam se kam sujal ki khushi ke bare mein sochna chahiye aakhir woh ye sab mere liye hi to kar raha hai. She feels that she should at least give a chance and a sweet smile comes on her face as she is thinking about her and sujal's friendship.

Meanwhile sujal comes and meets nisha, prerna & nana-nani. He then asks about kashish to nisha and she says she will inform her that you are here. But sujal stops nisha saying that he will go and tell her and then he goes to terrace. When he sees kashish there lost in her thoughts, he thinks that wow khoye khoye bhi ye kitni pyaari lagti hai. suddenly kashish realizes that somebody is looking @ her, so she turns and sees sujal smiling. She smiles back and tells him let's go. Then they both go to do some shopping.

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In the car:

Sujal- to kahan jaana hai?

kashish- kahin bhi

Sujal- mujhe "kahin bhi" place kahan he nahi pata

Kashish looks @ sujal, and sujal says it was bad joke, isn't it?

Kashish- very and then suddenly she laughs saying that she heard worse than these when she was in college.

Sujal also feels little relieved and then he keeps driving and suddenly kashish screams sujal stop!!!!! After hearing her scream, he suddenly stops the car and asks kashish that is everything ok? why did u scream?

Kashish points her finger in the other direction saying "Pani-puri". I want to eat pani-puri that's why.

sujal is shocked as he has never seen kashish to scream for something like that before. Kashish just looks @ him and says: dekh kya rahe ho? chalo gadi se utro mujhe pani-puri khani hai.

Sujal- lekin abhi hame shopping bhi jaana hai aur phir yahan pe? bilkul hygienic nahi hoga.

Kashish- sujal, tumne zindgi mein kabbhi aisi pani-puri nahi khyee hogi aur kabhi kabhi unhygenic khana chalta hai. chalo na please!!!! dekho tum mat khana, lekin mujhe to khane do, and then she makes a cute childish face.

Sujal just looks @ her ziddi childish face and can't say no to her. Then they both go to eat "pani-puri" and kashish eats lot of them while sujal is just looking at her with smiling face 😊

After that they both finally go to shopping. Here sujal thinks about piyush's philosophy of girls' shopping and then says to himself, "mera bhi bore hone ka waqt ho gaya hai". But to his surprise, kashish shops within an hour for her clothes and shoes. Even sujal thinks that he takes more time to decide than her. Now they both go to jewelery shop.

Sujal- kashish, jo tumhe pasand ho woh dekh lo.

Kashish- ok

Sujal & kashish both looks around in shop, and sujal sees a beautiful diamond set in the store. He likes it @ once and he tells sales man to pack it before kashish can see. Here kashish is almost done with jewelery, but for mangalsutra she is still deciding. She looks @ few of them but she is confused. The sales man says to put on before choosing. She tries to put on but she fails as her hair were coming in her way, and by that time sujal comes there so the sales man tells him to help her. At first, he feels awkard but then he puts it on and whispers in her ears that it's perfect. Suddenly sujal realizes that he is too close to kashish so he goes from there and kashish tells the sales man to pack that one. Now they both are done with shopping, so they go to their car.

In the car:

sujal- I am sorry kashish

kashish- for what sujal?

Sujal- woh jo kuch bhi jewelery shop mein hua is liye

Kashish- come on sujal it's not big deal, after all we are getting married you can choose a mangalsutra for me.

sujal- nahin woh mein khair jaane do...............

kashish- I understand sujal, aur phir hum koi ajnabi nahi hai ache dost hai. let me be frank, mujhe hamari dosti bahut pyaree hai aur mein ise awakard banana nahi chahti.

Sujal- mein bhi, and then they both smile @ each other.

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Now the scene shifts to a college football ground where rishi & aman are playing with other players.

Rishi- yaar aman, ye akshat aaj bhi practice pe nahi aaya pata nahi pichle kuch dino se kahan hai. Agle hafte ek important match hai hamara.

Aman- yaar shaadi ki taiyariyon mein laga hoga, jaise hum ko lagna hai kal.

Rishi- lekin woh to bhaiya ki sagai se pehle se ye gulliyan mar raha hai, mujhe lagta hai baat kuch aur hai kyonki na aaj kal club mein dikhai deta hai aur na hi lectures mein professer ki khinchai karne aata hai.

Aman- yaar pichle kuch dino se kitni tension thi na uske ghar mein, usi mein ulza hoga bechara tu bhi na har waqt kuch na kuch sochta rehta hai. jaane de ab.

Rishi- shayad tu thik kah raha hai, waise aaj pooja ki kaun si extra class thi ?

Aman- ab tune akshat ko choda to pooja ko pakda chod na yaar bahut shaq karta hai tu!!!

Rishi- ya man whatever. let's play.

Rishi ne aman se keh to diya lekin use aaj kal akshat aur pooja ka behaviour kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha jaise dono hi apni duniya mein kuch jyada mast the.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!.......is kashish start falling 4 sujal ?????........i can imagine the scenes between sujal and kashish when they are in the car.....and suddenly kashish scream bcoz she want "pani-puri" ...... she convince sujal to eat it 😆 .... weird that akshat and pooja aren't with the guy's at time no????...... i want to know the next part plzzzzzzz.......awesome update 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 16

Recap: sujal & kashish go to shopping as their parents wanted, and they have some cute moments & nice time together. Rishi talks to aman about akshat & pooja's changed behaviour, and aman tells him not to suspect people as it was may be due to past few weeks' problems.

Now:

There is a black sports car on hill, and there are two people sitting at the end of the hill. The guy who is wearing blue jeans and white t-shirt is akshat and the girl is wearing pink t-shirt with white trouser who is our sweet pooja. now let's see what are they up to.

Akshat-A, Pooja- P

A- pooja, tum ne kya kiya hai tumhe pata hai? Itni badi bewaqfi karne pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha tumne?

P- (with tears in her eyes) ab daantna bandh karoge akshat, mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha is liye to maine tumse ye sab kaha.

A- lekin mujh se kyon, apne char bhai mein se ya sneha se kyon nahi?

P- pagal hoon kya main, agar abhi unhe bata do to woh to meri jaan hi le lenge.

A- dekho pooja, main sirf itna samajta hoon ki is mein sirf tumhare gharwale tumhari madad kar sakte hai, tumhe un se kuch nahi chupana chahiye. Phir galati to har kisi se hoti hai.

P- ye koi mamooli galati nahi hai, aur phir mujhe is musibat se sirf tum bahar nikal sakte ho, agar tum ko meri madad karni hai to theek hai warna main koi aur raasta nikalongi, lekin apne gharwalon se to main abhi kuch nahi keh sakti.

A- aisi baat nahi hai pooja, mein tumhari madad zaroor karoonga aur hum is ka koi na koi raasta zaroor nikalenge, lekin filhaal hum ko ghar main jo shaadi hai us pe dhyan dena chahiye waise bhi mujhe lagta hai ki rishi ko thoda bahut shaq hone laga hai so we have to act normal ok?

P- ok. hum sujal bhaiya ki shaadi ke baad ye sab sochenge.

Now nobody knows what kind of problem pooja has or what wrong she had done except akshat, but we will find out that later on.

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It's another day, and in both families everybody is busy with marraige preparations as there is a sangeet in four days and then marraige.

Sneha came to her mayaka for few days because of wedding. Saahil, anurag & vinit were still busy with office work. And all the other people in house were busy with preparations. Everybody was on breakfast table and suddenly nisha's stomach started hurting her, so she screamed painfully. Everybody rushed her to the hospital. Outside operation theater, everybody was worried. Sneha called piyush, and piyush & sujal also came there with vasu & veena. After two hours, doctor came out and gave congratulations to saahil as he became a father of a baby boy. Nisha and child' s condition was better, and everybody was extremely happy. After sometime, doctors shifted nisha in a room and they all went to meet her & baby. Saahil took baby into his arms and he was so happy. Everybody played with baby for sometime, and then they all went home and saahil stayed in the hospital with nisha & baby. Prerna told them that they will come back later. Outside the hospital, prerna told kashish to leave her car for saahil so she did that but she wanted to go somewhere. She told prerna to go ahead and she & sneha will come later. Here piyush gave his car to vasu & veena and he, sneha, kashish & sujal went somewhere in sujal's car.

Actually they all went to buy clothes and toys for baby as kashish & sneha wanted to give surprise by making baby's room. Now sneha & kashish decided to split up as they had lot to buy so sneha went to buy toys with piyush and kashish went to buy clothes and other things with sujal.

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Sorry guys, it was much shorter. But I am a bit busy right now, so I will post another part in two days.
Edited by nisha1984 - 18 years ago
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nice part 👏 ..... what's happening with pooja, that she can't tell her 4 brother and other family members abt it......n she told akshat about it???????......i want to see more scene between sujal and kashish......interesting story....continue soon plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-17


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Recap: Akshat & Pooja has a conversation about something that pooja did wrong, and akshat agrees to help her after Sujal & kashish's Marriage. Nisha gives birth to a baby boy & everybody is happy. ............................................................ ...................................

Sujal, kashish, Piyush & sneha do all the shopping for baby and they all go home. Next day, sujal & piyush come to khanna house to help kashish & sneha. Kashish & sneha are alone at house because everybody went to temple for pooja and they will be back tonight with nisha & baby. So all four of them decide to decorate house and make amazing food for everybody. Sneha calls vasu and tells her to come for dinner with whole family.

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At home....

Now Piyush & sneha decide to decorate baby's room and bring cake for the party, and Kashish & sujal decide to decorate house & arrange all food. They all start with their work. Kashish & sujal decide to decorate house first.

Sujal asks kashish to blow some balloons as he will decorate the hall with ribbons and banner. Kashish blows pink, purple, & yellow balloons.

In the mean time sujal is done with decorations so he comes to help kashish and he sees that kashish is blowing up all girly color balloons, so he stops her.

Kashish asks why he stopped her, and he answers that we are welcoming a baby boy not a girl so you should use colors like blue, white & black.

Kashish argues with him by saying that she is going to make this place colorful with all colors because boy colors are so boring and so are the guys.

Sujal argues back that guys are not boring and they like dashing colors not some stupid pachrangi colors as girls.

Now kashish is a bit angry and says to him that girls make guys' life colorful as guys don't know how to live life just like you.

Sujal is also a little angry and says that how come she told him boring because he is not boring at all.

Kashish answers him that yes, he is as he always works & works and never has time for doing something exciting, then she tells him about their first lunch, palanpur trip & Australia trip that she had to drag him for fun as he wasn't interested in any adventure.

Sujal is about to answer her, but he hears piyush & sneha coming downstairs with some arguments that who are better decorator guys or girls.

Now sujal supports piyush that guys are much better than girls, but kashish tells them they think that because they have never worked with girls. They all start to argue about their view points and at last as usual girls win as the guys don't want to start a big fight.

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Piyush & Sneha go to buy cake, and kashish goes to kitchen for food preparation. Sujal comes to help her and she is bit surprised... as she never knew that sujal knows how to cook.

Sujal helps kashish in kitchen and they have nice time together. Now they are done with all dishes except "Gajar ka Halwa". She washes gajar and she comes to know that she will need more sugar from cupboard so she steps on stool to get sugar but as she comes down her balance is almost out and she fells……..but sujal catches her in his arms and they both look at each other. Sujal is just lost in kashish's beauty and kashish also feels attracted to sujal as she is just looking at him and she feels that he just holds her like this and never lets her go. They both are lost in each other and suddenly there is a knock on the door, so they both come out from the dream land and sujal puts kashish down.

Now sujal looks at the door, and rishi was standing there.

Sujal- Rishi, tu yahan pe?

Rishi- Jee bhaiya, btw sorry to disturb you guys mujhe pata hota ki yahan pe romance chal raha hai to main zara dair se aata.

Sujal – nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai, mein to sirf kashish ki help kar raha tha…..

Rishi- well bhabhi ko help karne ka tarika bahut acha hai, waise aap unko help kis baat ki kar rahe the?

Sujal blushes a little and kashish also goes from there shyly and she doesn't understand why she is feeling that way about sujal?

Sujal asks rishi that why he came alone and where is everybody else?

Rishi tells him that he came from college, and aman, akshat & pooja had another lecture so they will come together in two hours.

Now kashish comes there and she gets a call from jeweler that prerna forgot to pick their necklaces as she ordered to gift nisha & others for some occasion.

Kashish realizes that may be badi maa ordered those jewelry for today and she is thinking that she still needs to make gajal ka halwa and she doesn't have time.

She asks sujal as if he can go and pick up those from jeweler.

Sujal doesn't want to go and rishi just reads his face that he wanted to spend some time alone with kashish bhabhi so he tells kashish that he will go as he doesn't have anything to do for couple hours.

Rishi goes and kashish goes to kitchen to make halwa, and sujal also goes in kitchen…… He helps kashish to peel gajar and as he was just paying attention to kashish, he hurts his finger while peeling.

Kashish sees this and immediately takes his finger into her arm and put some cold water. Sujal is just looking at her.

Kashish( while washing blood on his finger)- kya sujal, dhyan se karte dekho kitna khoon bah raha hai?

Sujal- It's ok kashish, jyada chot kahan aayi hai.

Kashish now put bandage around his finger and tells him to go to living room as she will finish everything.

Sujal goes from there and kashish finishes making halwa and comes into the living room.

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Now their clothes are ruined because of food stains so they both go to change for party.

Sujal wears black suit with blue shirt and black pant. He comes into living room to give final touch to decorations.

As he is blowing up an extra balloon, he just sees kashish coming down the stairs. He is mesmerized by her beauty. Kashish is wearing a light green patiyala suit with long matching earing and nice necklace. Her hairs are loose and perfect. Sujal just sees her and blows too much air in the balloon that balloon just blows up. She comes downstairs and sujal says you are looking really beautiful. She gives him smile and says thanks, and then she says that even you are looking really great today.

Sujal was about to answer her but mean while rishi, piyush & sneha come there, and rishi gives kashish jewelry and piyush & sujal go to put the cake.

In mean time, akshat, pooja and aman also come there and they all are really happy with all the decorations.

In half hour, everybody else comes home with nisha & baby, and they all are happy with the surprise.

Saahil & Nisha are totally taken over by the baby's room...they all thank four people for their love & hard work.

They all have great time, and after that raheja & garewal families leave because there is a sangeet on next day.

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On the other day there is a sangeet, and all of them were happy. Even kashish & sujal were happy because they came closer to each other in past few days because of all the events that happened.

Kashish is ready for sangeet, and she gets a call.

Kashish- hello who is this?

Person- to aapne aakhir ye shaadi karne ka faisla kar hi liya, Ms. Kashish sinha?

Kashish- kaun hai aap?

Person- main kaun hoon, ye jaan kar aap kya karegi lekin main itna zaroor jaanta hoon ki aap ye shaadi kar ke apni zindagi ki bahut badi galati karne ja rahi hai.

Kashish- kya matlab hai aapka……. Aur aap hote kaun hai meri personal life mein kuch bolne wale?

Person- main to sirf aap ko aagah karna chahta hoon ki Mr. sujal garewal planned all this to marry you, and he is cheating on you as he loves somebody else. He is marrying you as it is part of his master plan to get something big. Agar aap ko yakeen nahi aata to aap ms. Archi mishra se phone kar ke pooche ki unka aur mr. sujal ka kya rishta hai?

Then the person hangs up, and kashish is left thinking that who this person can be and why he was talking like that? I have to talk to sujal about this, and then she thinks that she will talk to him when she will meet him.

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I hope you will all like this part.


Edited by nisha1984 - 18 years ago
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Part 18

Here is Next Part.

I Hope You all will enjoy this one……..

Kashish was just looking extremely beautiful in a pink outfit and she was almost ready when prerna comes there. She looks @ kashish and she has tears in her eyes. Kashish sees her and asks why she is crying.

Prerna- aaj meri doosri beti ki bidaai ka bhi waqt aa gaya, aaj sangeet hai aur kal shaadi, phir tub hi chali jayegi, ye ghar to soona ho jayega.

Kashish- badi ma, agar aap is tarah se royegi to main kaise aap logo se door….. and then she cries too.

Anurag comes there and sees both of them crying and his eyes become watery too.

They see him and anu comes in the room, and says to kashish aaj hamari beti ka sangeet hai, kaash sapna aaj zinda hoti to kitni khush hoti.

Now they all have more tears in their eyes, and vinit also hears this conversation from outside.

He comes there and tells anu that sapna is duniya mein nahi to kya hua, woh aaj apni beti ko aasman se aashirvaad de rahi hai, aur who tum sab ko khush dekhna chahegi rote hue nahi samje.

Kashish hugs all three of them, and then they go downstairs as everybody is waiting.

Now in sangeet

Sujal and kashish's sangeet ceremony begins and everybody has good time. Kashish tries to ask sujal about archi but she is interrupted by piyush and sneha as they drag her and sujal on dance floor, and then kashish doesn't get chance to ask sujal…………………

Next day, kashish and sujal gets married. After the marriage ceremony and bidaai, veena does the aarti and welcomes her bahu into the household.

Everybody is sitting in a circle, and kashish and sujal are facing each other, and pooja, sneha are cheering for kashish while rishi, aman & piyush are cheering for sujal to find the ring first from the thali. It's a tradition after the marriage. Sujal finds the ring first and he is about to pick up but he sees kashish and he puts ring in her hand. She looks @ him. Everybody is impatient as both of them are taking too much time. Kashish takes her hand out with ring and sujal smiles @ her, and a big smile comes on kashish's face. Vasu tells sujal that "sujal is haar ka matlab ye hua ki aaj se tum se jyada kashish ka is ghar pe raaj chalega". Sujal just smiles @ her comment.

Now sneha and pooja take kashish into her room, and the room & the bed is decorated with flowers. Kashish feels uncomfortable as she sees all this but sneha tells her to be relax, and pooja makes a little comment and they both go from there with pooja saying that I will send sujal bhai asap……………..

Kashish now gets up and goes to window and looks @ sky. She thinks about all that happened in her life in past few months. She is just lost in her thoughts, and sujal comes in the room. He sees kashish standing near window, and he understands what is going through her mind. He goes near her and calls out for her. Kashish sees him but doesn't say anything.

Sujal- kashish, main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon.

Kashish- kya baat hai sujal…

Sujal- woh aaj hamari shaadi hui hai to agar aaj raat main tumse kuch maangu to kya tum mujhe dogi?

Kashish (little bit scared)- sure lekin tumhe chahiye kya…………

Sujal- ok then ek kaam karo, tum change kar lo, aur yeh kapde pehan lo and then he gives a packet to her.

Kashish opens it and she sees a blue jeans, blue jacket and white t-shirt.

Kashish- sujal abhi lekin…….

Sujal- kashish, please koi sawal nahi, tumne kaha tha ki meri baat manogi so go & change.

Kashish changes and comes out and she sees that sujal has also changed his clothes.

Sujal goes & locks the room from inside. Kashish doesn't understand as what is he doing, but she keeps quite. Now sujal opens the window and tells kashish to come with him. Now kashish is really confused……………………….

Kashish- sujal tum kya kar rahe ho?

Sujal- hum log bahar ja rahe hai..

Kashish- abhi?

Sujal- phir sawal?

Kashish gives in and follows sujal, and they both climb down through window and sit in the car. Sujal drives off. After an hour the car stops on a hill, and sujal comes out and opens door for kashish. Kashish comes out and sees a tent on the edge of the hill. There is a bonfire next to tent.

Sujal- kaisa laga mera gift?

Kashish has tears in her eyes.

Sujal- tumhe pasand nahi aaya, maine to socha ki tumhe ye pasand aayega……………

Kashish- mujhe bahut pasand aaya, sach sujal maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki koi mujhe itna samjata hai.

(Flashback- sujal, kashish, sneha, piyush, saahil, nisha, akshat, pooja, aman & rishi were playing "spin the bottle" game. And kashish was asked about one place where she feels happy and finds real peace. Kashish answered about this hill where she can spend hours and she loves to see sunrise on this hill.)

Sujal (smiles) - koshish kar raha hoon, tumhe samjane ki.

Then he goes and takes out some blankets and a telescope and a basket with food. He fixes up telescope.

Kashish just looks @ him and thinks about how much sujal loves her as he is spending his wedding night fulfilling her dreams instead of his own dreams or happiness.

Sujal & kashish have dinner together, and then they see stars through telescope.

Kashish- pata hai sujal, Mujhe hamesha lagta hai ki jab bhi ye taare niklte hai, mama mujhe tara ban kar dekhti hai aur who mujhe bahut saara pyar aur aashirvaad deti hai.

Sujal- tum apni mama ko bahut miss karti ho?

Kashish- bilkul nahi woh hamesha mere saath hoti hai, and then she takes out a locket in which there is a photograph of sapna on one side, and on the other side there is a photograph of vinit.

Kashish- ye meri mama ka locket tha, jo unhone papa ko diya tha jab who newyork gaye the aur phir mama ke jaane ke baad papa ne ye locket mujhe de diya mama ki nishaani ke roop mein.

Sujal- aur phir badi maa aur bade papa bhi to hai tumhare parents.

Kashish- pata hai sujal, woh dono mujh se sabse jyada pyar karte hai, and aaj mujhe ek aur parivaar mila hai jis mein aisa hi pyar hai jo mein bachpan se dekhti aayi hoon.

Sujal- mujhe bhi to ek aur parivaar mila hai aaj. Thanks to u. And I got you in my life, lagta hai saari khushiya mil gayee.

Kashish just looks @ him with sweet smile on her face. They both spend some time talking, then sujal goes inside the tent to get some water, and when he comes back, he finds kashish sleeping near stone, so he picks her up and brings her inside the tent. He keeps looking @ her beautiful & innocent face until he falls asleep.

Next morning, it was 5:00 o'clock. Kashish woke up and sees sujal sleeping peacefully near her, so she puts the blanket around him and then went outside to see sunrise. After fifteen minutes, sujal also came outside and then asks kashish to pack everything as they have to go back.

They came back, and they climbed window and went into their room. Kashish went to bathroom to take shower and sujal sat on bed while thinking of last night. He was very happy as well as kashish. Kashish came outside wearing a purple salwaar-kameez, and he was mesmerized by her simple beauty.

Sujal- you are looking really beautiful.

Kashish- well thanks for compliment.

Sujal- you are welcome and sujal is about to go to the bathroom when kashish calls sujal…..

Kashish- sujal, last night was really amazing, and thanks for that.

Sujal- it was also amazing for me.

Then he went to freshen up and kashish goes downstairs.



.........................................................

Sneha is waiting for kashish downstairs ... she was wondering about kashish as this was her first day in this house.

Kashish- good morning sneha…

Sneha- good morning…

Kashish- waise tujhe itni subah uthne ki aadat kab se pad gayee. Lagta hai shaadi ke baad tu sudhar gayee hai.

Sneha- very funny, mein tumhe akela feel na ho is liye pehli baar mein itni jaldi uthi aur tum ho ki mera mazak uda rahi ho..

Veena- kya hua subah subah tum dono behno ki kya khichdi pak rahi hai.

Kashish & sneha sees veena and they both take aashirvaad from her and meanwhile vasu comes there so they take her aashirvaad too.

Vasu- lagta hai veena, ab hum saanso ki burai karne ke liye sneha ko ek partner mil gaya hai.

Veena- agar ye do behne hai to hum do saheliya bhi in logo se kuch kam nahi hai.

Then they all have hearty laugh. Kashish asks veena if she can make breakfast with sneha, and vasu & veena tell her that it's her house now so she doesn't need to ask for permission, and sneha & kashish go to kitchen to make breakfast as veena & vasu go to wake everybody.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. first ta reply. love the ff. please continue
Edited by Patel 1993 - 18 years ago

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