Robbie&Kasturi Scenes :)+imp.noticepg55

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Kasturians 😊 & RK FANS 😳,

I'm Mz.Jess, you may call me Jessi or Jess. I got this idea from the KSBKBT forum, where my dear friend Nimmi had created teh topic. It was a great sucess there and i hope it is here as well. 😳 šŸ˜†

Let me explain what it is all about. Most of us Ifains are great FF(fan fiction) writers, some that i can gurantee will go out one day and write the very scenes of a drama we will watch one day. šŸ˜†. Who knows you may even be part of Ekta's Creative team. Fan Fictions are a great way to experience the creative imaginations we have here in IF. But some people (like mešŸ˜†) arent fit for FF, even though i have one at times i find it hard to continue writing a part or my mind is blank. This is why i love writing SCENES. They can be short, long, to the point and itcan be just focused on one couple. 😳. Here in this topic,since were all big fans of Robbie and Kasturi Jodi, you all can write scenes on them. Comments areappreciated but in the chat club. 😳 I do not have that many rules, except for the ones already here in teh Kasturi Forum. Dont comment here, but in the chat club, ONLY post scenes here. Let Your Imagination Run Wild!!

I will post my scene very soon, you all are welcome to post yours. 😳.

*NOTE*- these aren't scenes that have already happened in teh drama but new ones out of your mind, you may use the same story line if you wish. 😊 & Please ONLY post scenes here, and comments in the CHAT CLUB.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=697735&T PN=1&#11804045

Click above, for the chat club, where you may chat & Post comments. 😊

Love,

Mz.Jess aka Mz.Robbie Sabharwal 😳

Credits To Beautiful_pari for Blinkie

Credits to Kimmu Thnx so much 😳

i kind of hope the cathc pharse isnt offensive if it is to anyone then i can remove the siggy. just tell me, please. i mean it as a friendly jokke. šŸ˜† 😊

Thanks, credits to Mrs.SIR. 😳 who made three diff colours for me. 😳

Credits To Below are to 2sweet. 😳

okay so herei go, if your name is on it plz do use it 😊

Also, glitter text for you all!

(Dipiti)

Note: I picked the names to those members that have contributed with scenes or been active here. Hope to see same people and more 😳

Credits to Jenny 😳

- plz use to advertise our topic here 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow g8 idea...will surely write some scenes later.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Scene 1 (example)

Robbie is drinking non-stop beer, after seeing Raunk & Kasturi dancing, all the jealousy & anger was building up in him.

Ranuak comes up to Robbie.
Ranuk: Robbie, yaar ithnee sharab? (asks with concern)
Robbie: Leave me alone
Ranuk: Come on, kal tumahara concert hai, tumhe tho rest karnee chahee.
Robbie: JUST SHUT UP! (he says leaving the hall)

Kasturi comes up to Ranuk- Ranuk Robbie koa kya hoya?
Ranuk: patha nahin, (still confused)
Kasturi: teek hai mai daikhthi hoon

Outside,Robbie is looking at the stars, with hurt in his eyes and the image of Ranuk& Kasturi dancing in his head
Kasturi: Robbie!? Robbie?!, tum kahan pe ho?
Robbie: mujhe akelya chordho..
Kasturi: par woh tum..
Robbie: I said leave me alone!! 😔 (throwing his glass on the ground)
Kasturi: nahin.
Robbie: kya?
Kasturi: mai tumhe akleyha nahin choroon gee
Robbie: (who is shocked/but still mad) kyun? huh?
why won't you leave me alone??
Kasturi: jis koi pyar karthai ho, wus ko akleyha nahin chorthai..
Robbie: stares at her. (is amazed how those words turned his world around) kya?
Kasturi: tum jaanthai ho ke mai sirf tumse pyar karthee hoon, ek dance ranuk ke saath koi parkh nahin partha
Robbie: mujhe hai..
Kasturi smiles: teek hai, im sorry 😳
Robbie laughs: fine, lekin ek dance merai saath abhi..
Kasturi: abhi?
Robbie: yes
They start danicng to Mitwa. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: manny2rock

Wow g8 idea...will surely write some scenes later.. 😊

cant wait 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys please do write some, speacilly since its been declared that ranuk&kasturi are married šŸ˜• , lets create some gr8 scenes for Kasturi & Robbie until they actually get united 😳.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry guys, this is a sad and rather long scene. I was writing for the first time and was not sure on how to shorten it. Please bear with me.

SCENE - 1
I don't want to write scenes for Ra-K 😔 , so lets go with the assumption that they have had a discussion and Raunak says he wants to give time to Kasturi to settle down and that he will sleep on the sofa.

Raunak is sound asleep on the sofa and Kasturi is lying on the bed, unable to sleep, very restless. She has changed from that heavy wedding dress to a simple churidar and has removed all the jewellery. She is going over in her mind all that happened that day when she hears a crash from the adjacent room, which is Robbie's. She sits up on her bed and looks at Raunak to see if he has heard it too. But Raunak kharaate maar raha hai. šŸ˜†
She thinks for a minute, gets worried for Robbie and decides to investigate. She peeps outside to see if anybody is up. Nobody is around and so she slowly approaches Robbie's room. She pushes the door to see if it is open and the door opens up!!
She walks in and sees Robbie sprawled on the bed in an odd manner. She quickly approaches him and calls out
K : Sir, Sir.
He does not get up. She shakes him and calls out for him repeatedly. He still does not get up and Kasturi starts imagining that he also consumed poison like her parents. She is worried sick, shakes him vigorously, asking him to get up all the time. Suddenly Robbie ko hosh aata hai and he sits up on his bed. Seeing Kasturi, he is shocked and he gets up from the bed asks her
R :Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?
K : Maine aapke kamare se koi aawaj suni, bas dekhne aai, kahin aap...
She looks around the room and sees an empty alcohol bottle smashed against the wall. She heaves a sigh of relief. Then she looks at Robbie and says
K : Sir aapne mujhe itnaa daraa diya. mein samjhi, mein samjhi......
and she cannot continue.
R (with a wry smile): kya samjha tumne, ke maine kudhkhushi kar lee? ki mein mar gayaa?
Kasturi looks at him with a lot of pain in her eyes. Robbie continues,
R: nahin Kasturi mein itni jaldi nahin maroonga. mein apne aapko itni aasaani se mukti nahin doonga. mujhe bahut praayashchit karna hai. maine tumhe aur tumhaare parivaar waalon ko jitna bhala-bura kaha, mujhe un sabka hisaab chukaana hai.tumhe aur raunak ko ek saath dekhkar, mujhe pal pal tadapnaa hai. Tab jaakar shaayad tum mujhe maaf karo.
(all this time tears keep flowing down his cheeks)
As soon as kasturi hears this, she is shocked and forgets everything and embraces Robbie. They hug each other tight crying all the time and Robbie kisses her cheek and Kasturi thinks in her mind, rishta toh bandh gayaa Raunak sir se, par mein woh rishtaa tabhi nibha paaungi, jab mein aapko bhula paaungi aur mein aapko tabhi bhula paaungi, jab meri saans ruk jaayegi while Robbie is imagining the time they spent together and then suddenly he remebers that Kasturi is now married, Robbie separates her and tells her,
R: ab tum jaao yahan se,
K:par sir aapki haalat,
R: main theek hun, tumhe yahaan koi is waqt dekhegaa toh, accha nahin sochega, jaao. Kasturi does not budge. Robbie turns away from her so his back is to her and says,
R:Kasturi, jaao, kahin mein, kahin mein apna sayyam na khodu aur woh na kardu, jisse mein tumhaari nazaron mein aur bhi gir jaau.
And then he raises his voice and says
R: Please Jaao.
Kasturi slowly turns and leaves, crying all the while. Robbie turns back slowly and sees that she has left and stares emptily at the door.

Edited by pragalbha - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pragalbha, wonderful scene šŸ‘ 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very well written....... šŸ‘
Please continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'll write my very first scene.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyy not to b too mean but instead ov sayin 'will write one soon' can u guys just rite it ??
Sori im not rtying 2 b bossi or nething forgiv me if i am its just there really isnt need to say 'i will write as soon as i can' or 'will write one' ykno bcuz wen i saw 2 pages i wuz lyk YAY loads ov scenes to read while waiting for video update but more than half are all just sayin i will do it or im thinking of it im really sorri if u guys consider this mean or insulting i juust wanted to say 😳
Nina

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