Arshi FF:- Cruel Fate - Chapter 16 (PG 135) Updated Mar 7-16 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: apoorva07

great ff just loved the concept thanks for the pm
can you plz change the names like tamil ones and keep them hindi for eg buaji
actually it is a bit difficult to read...just a suggestion continue soon 😊


Thank you for your feedback, its not tamil, its telugu. Don't worry, Athamma charecter won't in the story for long.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great concept.
Continue soon 👍🏼
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Pinky.. Congrats for your your new story. Inspiration always gives courage to do things.. that we love... Very nice Prologue.

Interesting... they got separated and had two kids ... I don't want to ask any questions. this is justa start and will wait for the story to reveal by itself.

Bravo girl. Very nice start. Looking forward for the next chapter.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept
Do continue.😊
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Originally posted by: lovedrops

Pinky.. Congrats for your your new story. Inspiration always gives courage to do things.. that we love... Very nice Prologue.


Interesting... they got separated and had two kids ... I don't want to ask any questions. this is justa start and will wait for the story to reveal by itself.

Bravo girl. Very nice start. Looking forward for the next chapter.



Thanks akka, Chapter 1 will answer some of your questions.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic start and awesome part 1... I can't wait to see ARshi meet after 7 long years...
I hope Dadi will get her punishment for her deeds.

Nice one...
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Originally posted by: me-N-my-arshi

Fantastic start and awesome part 1... I can't wait to see ARshi meet after 7 long years...

I hope Dadi will get her punishment for her deeds.

Nice one...


Thank you for the feedback.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice chapter can't wait to know what happens ahead. thanks for the pm continue soon.
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loved it a lot...egar to know what is stored for them...plz do continue soon...

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