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athi_vrushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nic os gal you have written it so well👏keep on writing more and more

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

diya dear this is amazing..

love at first sight...awww

what I loved most is the poem...
it felt sooo good to read them..

swaron together.

nothing cam get better than this..

loved it.
thanks 4 d pm dear

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Meghna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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my god diya u r not just amazing writer but n amazing poet loved ur os a lot both the versions... But KR vala thoda zyada... U know na my addiction towards them...

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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

this was sweet and amazing os... loved it

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aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

woww SS version too😊

well-written👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

hey diya

gud one loved it

keep writing dea

love

shini

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Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Loved how Swayam made her fall of him. It was like re-witnessing Swaron's story.

Beautifully penned. And Sharon had to say Yes after all Swayam can't be the one who's rejected even for once.

Continue writing like this :)

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rosy kohli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

it was such a cute story diya

i hav to say i was completely smithen by it

the way u handled swayam n sharon's characters

and was a visual treat for me to read

love at first sight n tat too wit sharon

n the small moments which help them

to grow them thr bond was beautifully penned

all in all a very pleasing read 😃

Edited by rosyrkohli - 12 years ago

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

hey diya it was an another simple one.

you improving i can see it.

as i said i was through out smiling.

the poems you used was nice

continue writing ...

and keep me smiling...

love u

keechu...

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