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She was waiting for him yet another day. He was late as usual. She was used to him being late now. She was sitting there alone reading her lines.
But why was he so late. He came on time yesterday. She smiled to herself thinking of his frustrated look when he sees her waiting.
She went back to her reading. But her mind was on him. Is he ok. Was anything wrong. She called somebody and asked but they had no idea about him.
She became worried. Wait a minute. Why am I worrying for him. He is not ru for me to care about him and think about him. Its not like I have any feelings for him. Then why am I thinking of him like this. This is not right. Feelings? Where did that word even come between us. Let him come late. I shouldnt worry.
but her action was something else as she grabbed her phone and dialled his number. Johny johnny.. who keeps such caller tunes. He didn't pick up. She stood up threw the paper on the table and paced around. Her eyes were looking for him. she was really worried now. This cant be happening. I shouldn't be thinking of him. Its forbidden. I dont know him at all. Yet it feels like i can see his inner being. Still we have never been on the same page. This is work. She tried hard to stop herself from thinking.
She adjusted her long beautiful hair.
She tried to remain calm but inside her heart was racing.
Hope he reach here now before I think of something I shouldn't b thinking of. She knew she had no right to even think about him.
She sat down looking at all the bright lights that surrounded her.
Was he still sleeping? He needs somebody to wake him up. He needs somebody in his life. Oh come on don't be so foolish . There are lot of girls to wake him up.
"But there is nobody like u" he came from behind and almost gave her a shock...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FANTABULOUS👏
Amazingly written..I absolutely LOVED it..
Loved how REALISTIC it was...you have got to write more.
The ultimate highlight was the last line, "But there is nobody like you."❤️


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It seems its a os on divan,not ishra.
Wonderful.
Wish they become a real life couple.
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Loved it 👏
How real it is...amazing
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That was such a well written os..I loved it completely.
Keep up your good work 👍🏼
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Wow brilliantly written! It's so so real! and I loved the way you ended it! Awesome job! :) do continue!
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A BEAUTIFUL OS indeed! Very well written. Seemed so darn real! Continue writing! :)
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Thanks a lot guys. I was actually very scared to write this. Thanks for supporting. Love you all.
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Originally posted by: -Anonymous

Thanks a lot guys. I was actually very scared to write this. Thanks for supporting. Love you all.


Scared?..OMG please don't be.
Absolutely LOVED every bit of it..⭐️
Please do write more of such REALISTIC OSes..😳
Once again... hats off to you.👏
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Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove



<font color="#ff00cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Scared?..OMG please don't be.</font>
<font color="#ff00cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Absolutely LOVED every bit of it..⭐️</font>
<font color="#ff00cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Please do write more of suchREALISTICOSes..😳</font>
<font color="#ff00cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Once again... hats off to you.👏</font>
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u r very kind. I hope then that I can continue right?

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