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Posted: 11 years ago
@Ni- Check my reply on Page 76. It's edited now! 😆
@Sudha- You also check your reply on Page 99. 😆 You can reserve your place now! 😉

@Neha- Yes, I am updating now baby!! Bash anyone who so ever you want... I am open with it... 😆
Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Hello all, 😳

I am back with another update of this story. But before that, Here are the pages on which you can read my replies to your comments. I heartily apologize to all those who actually read my replies as I and @Ni have completely decorated this thread with our jabbering!! 🤣

Pages- 76, 77, 78, 79, 80, 81, 82, 83, 91, 92, 99,100

So here goes the next part... And It's again a lengthy one... Enjoy!! 😃


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PART 26

"RK, your coffee is here. Have it else it will get cold." She spoke in a soft voice but didn't get any reply in return. "Amm... Maa and Papa will go for Sharma Uncle's daughter's engagement in evening." Again no reply. He was engulfed in his wardrobe, searching for something. Madhu quietly went near him and spoke again, "What are you searching RK? Tell me, I'll find it." And this time, instead of any reply, RK slammed the wardrobe doors shut, with his office suit in hand. His enraged expressions were speaking out his feelings for what happened last night. Seeing the outfit in his hand, Madhu got amazed. Since the day they had got married, not a single day passed when RK rejected her chosen clothes for him... except one day unintentionally! It might not look so serious but for her, it was a point of major concern. She felt stabbed at that moment... very harshly... and without any word!! "You... You are wearing this suit... today... RK?" Her stuttering voice was clearly showing her restlessness. "I have... I have already taken out your..." "I don't want to wear that!" His dismissive rigid voice twinged her heart. With the same painful wavering, she gave one more try, "RK, you didn't do proper dressing of your wound. It must hurt. Sit here, I'll do the dressing." She was about to take out the aid box from the drower, RK pushed her off slightly and took out one bandage and put it himself. He started to walk past her incensed when she grabbed his hand abruptly in worry, "RK... I am sorry!!" He turned his face away to which her voice got emotional. She held his hand more tightly in anxiety, "I shouldn't have talked to you like that, RK! You were fighting for me and I, being so stupid, fought with you so harshly!! I mustn't have reacted like that! I am really sorry RK!!" "Leave my hand Madhu! I am getting late." Again a stiff voice! Tears started to well up in her eyes now. "Rk, I said I am sorry naa... I admit, I shouldn't have behaved like that. You... You always forgive me for my mistakes naa... then why are you behaving like this? Please RK!" "I... I am behaving like this?? I?" His temper again boiled up. "Madhu, do you have any idea what did you say yesterday?" Madhu lowered her eyes in guilt. He was correct at his place after all. He was sharply staring at her, "I won't ask you anything Madhu but one question- Does our relation means nothing to you??" Madhu immediately looked up at him stunned. She didn't realize, last night fiasco would affect him so deeply. His question was unanswerable for her. She could see the anguish in his enraged eyes. "RK... I..." "Yes... or No, Madhu? Answer me!" Following a brief awkward pause, she replied, "This relation was chosen by me. I myself chose to be your wife. And I don't have any right to oppugn at our relation." Those brimmed tears slid down. "But you can express your anger with your words too naa... If... If you want to punish me then you can shout, slap... do whatever you want but at least talk to me RK!!! Don't avoid me like this... I can't bear this behaviour of yours. I feel rejected!!" She wept quietly. Her teary hurt eyes pinched him too but he didn't want to show his melting heart. "Hmmm... So, you are ready for any punishment!?" Madhu looked at him hopefully. "Whatever you say RK... I'll do it!! But please, pardon me now!" "Then be ready in the evening." Madhu looked at him perplexed while he was trying to hide his smirk. "...with Sara. Maa and Dad won't be at home so I thought to take my baby for a dinner. You have to take care of her there!" Hearing him, Madhu's typical emotional looks quickly changed to a chafed one, "Don't you think you are being too crude, RK!?" "That I am, Bi... wi...!! So, just be ready!" "But only at one condition..." She picked up her chosen clothes and handed them to RK, "Wear this! I guess, now you don't have any problem with these clothes." Seeing her gamey simper, a slight smile automatically quirked over his lips.

It was late afternoon and Madhu was resting besides sleeping Sara, patting lightly on her tiny tummy. Suddenly, her phone buzzed. She quickly muted it for Sara and checked the number. An unknown call again. What if it's from courier Company? I haven't received the parcel yet. But... What if it's from...? She suddenly sat up on bed worriedly. That fled away fear again started coming back to her. She abruptly got up and brought her laptop, searched something and collated it with her cell, "It's not his contact number!! What should I do now?? I have to find out the reality!! A come back... so suddenly!! Why?? I need to find it before it's too late!!" She copied the number from her laptop screen and texted it. Few minutes later in the living hall, "Madhu, I wanted to ask you something in the morning. Is Rishu alright? I saw his head injured. What happened to him, Beta?" Madhu was taken aback with her question. She didn't want to tell her about the last night event at the party. "Amm... Nothing Maa. Wo... Actually... Yes... He wasn't feeling sleepy last night so I gave him a head massage but unknowingly, my nail scratched on his forehead. Nothing serious Maa." Following a brief pause, she asked hesitantly, "Maa, I need to go out." "Anything urgent, Madhu?" Madhu got little vacillated in answering her, "No Maa, actually wo... My friend has come from Australia so just going for a meeting." "Oh. But Sara? Take her along with you, Beta." "She is sleeping in the room. Maa, please take care of her. I'll be back very soon." "That I'll do Madhu. But come back before we leave. I don't want to leave her with the servants alone."

There was quite a hustle all over the Cafe- with frequent entries and departures of the crowd. It was a weekend after all. Madhu nervously entered the cafeteria and looked all around. Finally, her eyes traced him- sitting in the corner of the shop. The moment she saw him, her heart started running faster anxiously. With a puckish simper on his face, Rohan got up and walked towards her. With each coming step of his, she was losing her breath. Her twisting entangled fingers were clearing showing her spookiness. "Finally... you are here... Madhu!!" With the husk voice, he embraced around her warmly. Eery tears brimmed her eyes; her hand automatically slid up to his shoulder and she closed her eyes- finally those welled up tears fell down. The day she had left him, her heart knew very well that she had done the harshest thing to him. Might be, those tears were of that repentance. "I missed you, Madhu!" His voice broke her painful spell. Suddenly, she realized of something and pushed him away in jerk, baffled. "Behave... Behave yourself, Rohan!!" She wiped off her eyes in counfoundedness, "I am married now!" Rohan chuckled wickedly and replied, "Say something that I don't know... Madhubala! I can clearly see that... You are a married lady now!! Mrs... Madhubala... Rishabh... Kundra... Wife of Business Magnate Rishabh Kundra!! Right?!" Madhu glared at him disgustfully. "I haven't come here to listen to your gibberish, Rohan. I need to talk!" "That I know Madhu. You musn't have texted me then... Aaahh... Well, can we sit and talk!" Within those few minutes, Madhu was constantly trying to understand this Rohan Ahuja... He was a changed man now... Too wicked!! Both got seated face to face. "What would you like to have, Madhu? Hot or cold Coffee? If you had texted me some good restaurant, we could have a good lunch there." He spoke with impish grin. "I haven't come here to have a lunch with you Rohan. Stop it now!!" She quickly snapped back to which he chuckled inwardly. He lazily rested back on the seat and stared at her for a second in grin. "You have changed completely, Madhu! These costly chiffon Saris, elegant make up, straightened hair... you've become a typical married girl hunn... Drastic change!!" She slightly dashed her clutch on the table and snarled, "If you are done with your hokum talks, can I start?" "Most welcome, Madhu! I am here to listen!" After a brief pause, she uttered, "Why have you come back, Rohan?" Her frantic expressions suddenly changed to the worried one. "Why? And... How did you know... that I got married to RK? You were abroad no..." Rohan just kept gazing at her in simper which irked her more. "Stop staring at me, Rohan. I need answer damn it!! Why have you come?" He wickedly chuckled at her helplessness and then replied, "Love... Isn't it a strange thing Madhu??" Madhu stared at him perplexed. His talks were going above her head. "At one time, it makes your life so blissful... And at another instant... it's no more than a thorne... which you can neither pick out nor can you bear it!! My love is just like this Madhu!! It was my failed lost love that forced me... to come back!!" Now, his smirk was gone. Rohan was damn serious, glaring directly into her eyes. "It was my love... that forced me to reach your home in search!!" Madhu got stunned to hear that. "You... You met Chachu?!!" "Yes! I met them... your beloved Chacha- Chachi!!" Her fear clearly emerged out on her face and Rohan noticed it readily. "Relax Madhu! I didn't tell them anything. I met them... as your... casual... friend!! There, I got to know... that you have already got married 15 days ago... with... Rishabh... Kundra!!" He gritted at RK's name in fury. Rohan came forward, resting his hands on the table- closer to Madhu. His actions were no less than a furious gamey evil mind. He whispered furiously, "Here I was searching for my missed love; called you uncountably; messeged you; voice mailed you; emailed you... but I was a fool... a big dumb fool, Madhubala!!! You escaped so easily with your perfect plan hunn... It executed so well!!" Tears formed in her eyes gradually and she lowered her head in guilt- after all she had betrayed his love without any intimation!!!

Meanwhile, on the other side, "Hello, Chief!" "Bittuji, call me later, I am driving right now!" "Chief, please it's urgent." RK switched on his Bluetooth and continued his drive- he has to reach home soon for the dinner today. "Unique Builders have prepond their Tender Submission date. They need the quotations by tomorrow." "What the hell is this??" RK irately applied brakes and stopped his car nearby the road. "What is this, Bittuji? How can this be done? Are those people out of their minds? Five days back they have announced the project and now, they need quotations!! What rubbish?" "We can't do anything Chief. Please come back to office." RK sighed to pacify himself. He thought for a while, looked outside and then spoke, "I have crossed half way to my home, Bittuji. I can't come back. Ok, you do one thing. I am waiting at Barista Coffee Cafe near Pali Circle. You reach there within minutes. We will discuss there." He hanged up the call and turned back his car to the coffee shop.

In the parking lot, RK placed his car and was crossing the area when something caught his attention. MH02- C1001... My car??!! One of his cars was already parked in the lot. How it came here?? He looked around to see anyone from his family. No driver too! Papa never uses this car. Only, Madhu use... Madhu?!! She is here??! His mind got stuck at her name. He again looked all around to see for her but failed. He acutely went inside the shop. Oh God!! So much crowd here!! He looked all around lazily and luckily found one empty table. He rushed to grab it before it gets booked. Within a minute, a barista asked him, "What would you like to have Sir?" "Ahh... One hot strong Coffee with creamy dip. Bring it soon buddy!" He lazily looked around to see if his Madhu was there. "You managed so well to ditch me with your blunt plan, Madhu. Kudos hunn!!" The brimming tears slid down helplessly through her eyes, "I didn't plan anything, Rohan! I called you before that... Trust me!!" She spoke in a choking voice.

RK heard her bleak voice amidst of the bustle there in the caf. He immediately turned back in its direction. Some college going gang was chit chatting sportily. He tried to look around them. Finally, he saw her glimpse. Madhu!? What's she doing here? And with whom? He bent to and fro to see the other face and luckily again, got to see him. "Rohan??!!!" He uttered in surprise. They know each other?? Then why didn't she tell me till now?? What are they doing here? And... Why is she crying? RK slyly shifted his chair backward so that he could hear them clearer.

"You called me? You called me Madhu??? Really??" exclaimed Rohan in rage. His months ago buried anger and pain of been cheated was emerging out today. Both of them realized their surrounding. Madhu hesitantly looked around.

RK immediately turned back to front so that she couldn't see him. By now, he had got the feeling that something wasn't going normal between the two- might be some matter of past. He didn't want to interfere with his presence. He acutely tried to listen to their serious conversation- after all he had that right.

"You called me just twice, Madhubala... Just twice!! And after that... our relation... our love... our promises... everything turned zilch to you?! You could have called me... talked to me... but you didn't even bother about it anymore!!" All this while she quietly wept. She wanted to cry aloud, shout aloud but couldn't do that. They loved each other!! This was nothing but a biggest shock for RK... Never ever in his dreams he would have thought of it!! He felt his heart being stabbed brutally at the moment. He just sat there dumbfounded with the truth. Rohan continued with his wrath, "You and your Sister Trishna... so cleverly you two befooled me!! One end, she promised me for our marriage and at my back, she handed over her place to you!! Superb, Madhu!!" Madhu looked up at him astonished. "You and your Didu made fun of my love, Madhu! How could you do this to me so easily??" "And how could you say such thing about my Didu, Rohan!!" Her eyes had now filled with ailing anger at his words. "She is dead Rohan!! My Didu is dead!!" Here Madhu was struggling with her misery and someone afar was burning severely in choler; every word of Rohan was tightening RK's fist in rage- after all he was involving her late innocent wife in their matter. "Before she could tell anyone about us, God snatched her from us, Rohan!! She left me!!" sobbed Madhu. "You are complaining that I didn't tell you anything but what about me...? Only I know how I had handled those circumstances!! I had to... had to leave my love for my responsibilities... I had to marry RK! I had no other option!" Another jab for RK!!! He had never thought that this one hour would turn his life upside down so seamlessly... Rohan mocked tauntingly at her, "Really? You married RK... and he appointed you as Sara's new mother... Right?" "Watch on your tongue, Rohan!!" Rohan jerked his hands in chafe, "Why don't you understand Madhu? This is what the reality is. That man... Rishabh Kundra... has brought you in his life just to remove his emptiness... for his daughter... and abducted your happiness... your life!!" Madhu glared at him in disgust.

"Sir, here is your coffee and bill." Served the barista. RK immediately got up in fury and replied indifferently, "Thanks... Serve it to someone else. Take your money." And he pulled out his cell phone, "Bittuji. Don't come here now. I am leaving. We'll decide it later... I said I don't want any meeting! Hang up the phone now!!" And barged out of the cafeteria frantically without looking at her glimpse...

She suddenly looked at the waving shop's gate. She felt something deeply... someone's presence but she swayed her thoughts at the moment. She needed to answer the person in front of her. With the same gumption, she replied back, "You are saying all this because you don't know him, Rohan! You are saying this as you think I am disturbed with my marriage... NO!! I am not, Rohan!!" Hearing her, Rohan acutely stared at her. Suddenly, a fragile smile glittered her teary eyes, "That family has given me a lot, Rohan. Parents' love- they have always considered me as their own daughter; pampered me like a child; loved me selflessly. And an angel- Sara!! She has become the goal of my life. That little soul understands me more than anybody; she is my best friend!! And RK..." That flimsy smile turned into a proud one instantly. She directly looked into his eyes and spoke, "I have never seen a gentleman like him ever... Rohan!! How can a man think so much about others everytime?? RK is a gem, Rohan!" His appraisal for RK was infuriating him more and more. "RK is a best son... a best father... and a best husband... any girl could ever have!! No matter what our relation holds, he never left my side; he always stood by me. He cares a lot for me, forgives for every fault of mine, and never leaves a chance to make me smile... Isn't it more than enough to have a happy life, Rohan??" He stared at her for few good minutes and then simpered in tease which narked her. "I must say Madhu, these Kundras have some big magic in their hands!! OK... I admit, that family has given so much respect and affection. And I really commend them for that. But answer just a single question Madhu... What is actually yours in all this??" Madhu looked at him perplexed. "Just go a little reverse in your life Madhu and answer me... You brought up with a family who was never yours... It was Trishna's always. You got married into a family... that was again Trishna's... Your daughter... That little girl is also not yours Madhu... And so is your husband!! Everything you have has just been given to you by someone else... in mercy!! Is there anything you can call as only yours?" The face that donned a proud has flown away and an unknown sadness took its place. She was quiet with her eyes moistened. Rohan gently held her palm and spoke calmly, "You don't deserve such life, Madhu. RK married you and burdened you with all his responsibilities. This is what you call a life? When will you live on your own terms? Leave all this Madhu... And come back!!" She looked at him stunned. Madhu quickly snatched back her hand, "It can't happen Rohan! It's too late now... And... And I have adopted my new life." Rohan again took her palm in his tightly and tried to convince her, "What do you think Madhu that I came back for?? I can't see you like this. I have come to take you out from this burden... these so called responsibilities. You are not a maid who will work for other's happiness throughout her life!!" "You... You've come to take ME back?" Rohan nodded affirmatively in a hope. With the same scandalized look, she jerked out her hand again. "That means... you... you deliberately came with this project!!" He was taken aback. "You purposely dealt with RK? And he made it his dream... You are trying to revenge on him for me, Rohan??" "Not at all Madhu. I am not that kind of person." He tried to vindicate his stance. "My professional life with RK is completely separated from personal. I want to work with him but I also want you to come back." She snapped back in appal, "This can't happen in anyway, Rohan. And I am warning you, don't you ever hurt RK in any case. He knows nothing about us. He is too innocent. Don't hurt him!!" Helpless tears brimmed again. "I am married now... I am Madhubala Rishabh Kundra. My husband's name follows me everywhere. Just go back Rohan... Just go back!!" Suddenly, her phone alarm buzzed. She saw the time in shock, "Oh God!... RK... It's 6:30..." She quickly picked up her clutch and was about to get up when Rohan again caught her hand, "Where are you going?" "I have to go now... RK must be waiting for me at home. He'll be angry then... Leave me Rohan." "I won't stop you Madhu... but do think about what I said. You have to leave all this!" Madhu looked at him coldly and replied one last time, "It can never happen. Leave my hand Rohan... I have to go." And she hurriedly stormed out of the shop for her home...



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Guys, please consider the revelation sequence of Rohan- Madhu- RK be going in parallel. It all happened simultaneously in the Cafe...😊

NOTE- Readers, I am going for my medical treatment which will go on till 12th or 13th October. So, there won't be any update till then... I am sorry for the delay but I am helpless. I hope you all understand!! 😳

Now, Waiting for your likes and comments... 😃



Edited by kg15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!!! i'm 1st on killer's update!! though i'm a better stalker but my stalking skills fail when comes to ur update kavya! u reply to all comments in noon & update in night but this time i finally made it!!😡😆 now i feel like a Don!!😈🥳

kavya before starting my comment i need to say something since my comment is 1st u keep ur energy drink ready bcos ur 1st 3 comments will make u tired like hell!! u need atleast 2 hrs rest after reading our comments to proceed further lol😆 mine & neha's one are better but Ni... oh God!😲 i ate one glucose perk after reading her comment on urs!!😆 but i loved it!!😛 she is too good in writing OS/Ts on others story but not writing her own stories LOL!!😡😆

okay! now coming to point!😳
mind blowing update!!👏 as ever i loved it!!⭐️

phew!! finally! RK came to know everything abt madhu & rohan's love!! great!👏 but cant that restless soul stick his ass on the chair for some more time & over hear their entire convo? at least he could have stayed till he finish his coffee which he paid for but naah he wasted the cafe!!😡😆

for me ahuja... rohan ahuja seems quite good & decent in this update! it doesn't suit his smirk, evil smile & husky tone... how he scared madhu on 1st day in office!!😕 he even is not to harm Rk so he is not behind Rk's accident huh? i thought u ll show him completely evil but in this update u showed him soft & even u justified his part!! well, he should be like this only bcos our madhu cant love some creep!!😳
when rohan asked madhu to come with him cant she say that she is happy with RK & she loves him??😡 she loves him rite?😕 seriously this girl is confusing yaar!!🤢😆 sometimes i feel like she is just living a forced life like she is just doing her responsibilities as a mother, wife & bahu & trying to live as per her fate! tell me? she loves Rk or not? when will she confess? oh okay! she will confess her love to Rk on D-day!! yes, the day when the door knocks lol!!🤣 i guess she is playing treasure hunt!!! yes, she is hunting for her treasure her love & rohan is helping her to find it!🤣

wait! rohan said he came to know abt madhu's got married to Rk after 15 days of their marriage so what he was doing so far?😕😆 why cant he come & claim her then & there?😕 is he waited for madhu to fall in love so that he can get babaji ka thullu?🤣 or he was searching for business magnet RK's address?🤣 it's been months after their marriage rite?😕 at least 6 months! what he was doing till then?❓ (the world wants to know! answer me kavya?? LOL)🤣

that's y i asked u to bring my Rohan soon but u brought him in 23rd or 24th chappy but they got married in 7th or 8th chappy!! see now so many confusions!!🤣
but see my clever madhu how brilliantly she tracked him in one after noon & met in evening but this dumb ass wasted nearly 6 months!!😆 i guess he was stalking!! LOL🤣

y dint paddo tell madhu abt rohan's visit to madhu! yes, he dint say who he is actually but still she can tell her that some friend of urs called rohan visited to meet u so that madhu could have started to dig hole to hide by then itself rite?🤣 i thought paddo knows everything abt rohan but nah... u poured water on my idea...😭😆 but how come side characters know abt the boom before my hero knows!😉

i thought Rk will smack rohan's head hard for talking nonsense abt his late wife like he hit the guy in party for talking bad abt madhu!! but no... he seems he totally forgot his 1st wife trish & completely indulged in his 2nd wife madhu!! just fisting his hand his not enough for his 1st love! he should at least slapped him!! feeling sad for trish!😭😆 now, i doubt Rk! whether he himself killed trish to marry his sister madhu?? yes, by this way u can make him VILLAIN!! its not hard for u to show your leads VILLAIN rite?? then he can kill rohan too not before say he killed his own wife for marrying madhu then tum kya cheess hai rohan babu!!🤣

okay! let me guess where rk could have gone straight away from cafe - to BAR!! rite? i wish to see a drunken Rk!! or rk will organize a party at home & he will invite everyone including chacha chachi & tada... rohan will enter (yes, invited by rk only) & Rk will give away madhu's hand to rohan loll!!🤣 bcos he heard that trishna wishes to get rohan & madhu married but couldn't so he will fulfill her wish & say "seeya!! bye bye!! ta ta!!" then madhu will also turn to walk away with her lost love sorry found love but there the twist comes... sara will call her "MAA" (her 1st word) then she will again ditch rohan & jump to RK & sara... the end!!😃😃
now waiting to see my kameena's reaction!! i want madhu to beg for Rk's love!! she directly or indirectly played & hurt both RK & RA!!
thanks for the pm but i resed before i receive it!!😆

p.s i read ur reply to my comment! thank u!😳
p.s.s.. oh dear your health is primal so u take care, we will wait patiently baby!!😳

Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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🤣Ahaan wat a update kavya di 😊
from start to end i experienced a myraid of emotions
ok wen i started reading n rk was khaoing bhao i was like 😃
then wen he said for dinner date i was like 😭😡
but wen madhu decided to meet rohan i was like
n jab rk cafe mein aaya to i was like 🥳
n in whole mb n rohans conversation i had this expression🤢😡 while rohan was blabbering i so wanted to smack his head on wall that he cld forget to say even abcd
n wen rk left without listening the last part i did this 👏👏
he is really my n only my rk 😆 kabhi poora nahi sunta but i really liked his gentlemen behaviour
wen he didnt punched rohan for insulting his late wife
n madhu is she a idiot how many time shd rk say that she is his wife n he is always with her she still has a doubt that nothing is of her own that was really dumb of her to stay quite infront that duffer who was boasting abt himself
i just want to know that if she goes out ppl will say to rk he is madhubalas hubby
they wont remember his ex late wife cant she just use her lil brains ever
now watever rk will do she will deserve it for keeping him in dark for so long
i absolutely understand his way that he left in half way no hubby will love to hear his wifes ex
talking rubbish abt him n his family
i liked wat madhu said for rk it was grt part but then again her dumbness spoiled her lil effort in end i wld have loved if she wld have slapped rohan wen he talked crap for rk but alas madhubala is destined to only slap my rk 😉 na how will she slap other ppls 🤣🤣
overalll fantastic update diii
i already expected this type of behaviour frm rk n i m glad he n u didnt disappointed me at all n yeah i wont mind seeing a sacrificial lamb rk in next update willing to send his wife to her first true love that wld be something different n quite mature on his part n no matter watever he does its gonna be epic desperate for next part dii
ohh myy no updates for 11 days uff long time but no problems better late then never
wish u luck for ur treatment
get well soon tc god bless

n this ones for u kavya diii ❤️

p.s i got second place yayyy
n first time i m using so many emoticons in my comment
such was the effect of ur update that i took out my lappy to comment 😉
Edited by NehaVdian - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update Di. 👏👏

This comment is under Construction.😆 It will not be finished until a song gets posted.
That we did. 🤣 And me spamming your thread.🤣🤣🤣
Now before I start to comment on this update. Let me reply on the awaited comment of yours. First I have to ask something. Have you used Google baba?🤣🤣 When it comes to translation he sucks. 😆
Pinocchio is a Disney Movie about a wooden doll whose nose grows longer every time he lies and his wish to become a real boy. Eventually he becomes a real boy. Never actual liked that movie, but love the concept of a growing nose and the song Hi-diddle-dee-dee, An actor's life for me. Thus my comment on they do make a good couple. Whenever a pussycat, sorry lion 😆🤣, needs to sharpen his claws his has his own personal wooden doll.🤣 And he might start calling her Gudiya like Raja did in MB.🤣 Complies really good in this scenario.🤣🤣🤣 The Cowardly Lion and Pinocchio. 🤣
And yes, I know what you mean. She can't rock the boat in the waters just yet. 🤣🤣🤣
The Rohan drama hasn't been completely unfolded yet.🤣🤣🤣 And think of the expressions from those editors when and if they read about that.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Oh, I am completely out. I can't stop laughing. Imagine their expressions for rocking in the waters. Write in a waterbed for when they decide to do the deed.🤣🤣🤣🤣
And that idea on her fainting on RK. Well I think that is out of the picture now.🤣🤣 He wouldn't even catch her.🤣🤣🤣🤣 She would smash her head on the floor. Hey, maybe even hit a table with her head on the way.🤣🤣🤣 Maybe that will bring some sense to her.🤣🤣🤣
Run Madhu run. Give us some excitment.🤣🤣 Use your hidden skills on becoming Female Flash.🤣🤣🤣 Show us how fast you can run to Australia and back to India. Or better yet, run to Switzerland and explore some more of the nation. And then run back to the Kundras if RK will still allow you in the mansion and near his Sara.🤣🤣🤣
Now you won't have to wait that long for a comment on this update, cause I am giving it to you right now. And as for Lubu she is busy. I have been in touch with her. She has a lot of things with school and won't be as active as before. Yes, Rohan on the Dance floor is Epic. 😆 Thanks. 😳 My humor often leave people baffled. 😆 Even that guy in my group is still avoiding me, but not as much as before. Now if only I can find another song with a female name in it, a English or Indian. I know a lot of Serbians and a really good one for this update. But it's essence will get lost in translation. I will try. It goes something like Oy, Madhu, Madhu, Madhu, Madhu, Madhu I will catch you. Oy, Madhu, Madhu, Madhu, Madhu, Madhu you are my everything. It just isn't the same. Never mind I have a song for this, you probably know which one. Well since revelation time is to continue. I guess this song will be in two comments of mine. Which reminds me, this comment will be one of the longest I have ever given. A truly OS or TS comment.😆
Well over to this update.
Naw Madhu you realize what you have truly said to RK the previous night. And now you are apolozing for that.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Just wait. You haven't seen nothing yet. You will crawl like a baby before it learns how to walk. Which makes Sara older and a whole lot smarter than you. Cause our precious baby knows how to walk. She hasn't mastered the technique of telling lies and deceive like you have 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I guess you will teach her when she becomes older. That is if RK still allows you around her.🤣🤣🤣 Hey I hope that baby is way smarter and braver than her Cowardly Lion and Pinocchio for parents. But I guess Di will give a happy ending with RK or those readers of hers will throw all kind of stuff on her.🤣🤣🤣 But not me.😆 I expect another Death soon or a Close-to-Death-experience. 🤣🤣 If it's Death, well of course a lead should get killed. Guess which one I have in mind. Rohan. Yes he is a lead. The main lead for me along with RK and Madhu. He deserves some peace of mind after that fiasco Madhu did to him. Let him slip on some banana peel. 🤣🤣🤣 And a Close-Death-experience I am at a tie for RK and Madhu. So either way is okay with me. Only a suggestion, which many people here will be angry at and throw things at me. But since that's not possible a lot of cursing is coming my way.🤣 For you kind information people it is afterall a story and we need some suspense, not that we aren't given much. But still. I love a dead lead or close experience to death.🤣🤣 Maybe this experience brings them closer together. Afterall people tend to become wiser after such experiences. So maybe both should go through that. Just in case. So that both become wiser and less dumb.🤣🤣🤣
Ah, Di you surprised me a little. When you mentioned punishment I thought he would take her on a trip for rocking on the waters. 🤣🤣🤣🤣 But the little Cowardly Lion he is, he is taking her out on dinner. 😆 And Madhu has the nerve to give him an ultimatum. Him to wear what she wants him to wear. Which I almost forgot. Madhu, why do you assume he didn't wear that suit you put out for him because he is angry on you for last night? Hello he might be angry but not for that reason.😆 Maybe he is sick of you taking out clothes for him to wear just like you do for Sara.🤣🤣🤣 He isn't a child you know. He might act like one at occasions, but he still not as a big child as you.🤣🤣🤣 The only thing that is left is that you dress him the way you do with Sara. And I can assure you he will probably find it annoying as much as delightful. His Biwi dressing him.🤣🤣🤣 Next up a private trip to the Indian Oceans for releasing all the build up tension.🤣🤣🤣🤣
Again a call from an unknown number. 😆 Hmm. I wonder who that could be.🤣🤣🤣 Maybe my favorite hero Rohan.🤣🤣 Well I was correct it was him.🤣🤣
Madhu, why are you leaving your baby Sara at home. I thought you never go anywhere without her.😆 Well I guess there is a first for everything. 😆 Even me being wrong in this case. 🤣🤣
Now why would you put Sara through that little secret meeting of yours with Rohan.😆 Hey, maybe you don't want her first words to be Rohon, Mama fince.🤣🤣🤣 Well she can't say Rohan or finace just yet. She haven't talked or developed that ability yet to pronounce that correct. If she did she would give her Mama out in a heartbeat.🤣🤣🤣 Well even if they were her first words. Imagine RK's face when he realizes his baby took another guys name, and that to his business partner, along with his Biwi.🤣🤣🤣🤣
Now that meeting and revelation time when it dawned upon RK about his Biwi's past. All I can say is I don't know where to start or where to finish, so I won't say anything about it. Well that which I want to be said will come through that refrain of the song I am posting below.😆
Except for that I want to say poor RK. You finally have realized that you married Pinocchio.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Well a female Pinocchio and Flash all in one.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Cowardly Lion, don't hold your claws in now. Sharpen them with your personal fast runner-wooden doll.🤣🤣🤣🤣
Just beware so you don't damage that waterbed of yours. You'll need it in the future.🤣🤣🤣
Rohan you disappoint me.😡 I was so wanting you to take revenge but no. You want that woman back. The woman who abandoned you without giving a rat a** about you.😆 Well hopefully you will take your revenge now, when she has rejected you a second time.🤣🤣🤣 Do not disappoint me. Or else I might change teams. Ah who I am kidding, you will Always stay my favorite until you do something stupid. Then there's no more chances to redeem yourself.😆 Hey, maybe it might come a revelation that you did plan to avenge for Madhu marrying RK. Afterall you got to know she married him after 15 days, and here you are after how many months approaching her right now. Ah, Rohan. I knew you wouldn't disappoint me. Now, go and take your vengance boy. Revenge is a dish best served cold. And believe me your opponents will get cold, they will freeze. 🤣🤣🤣 No wonder why Madhu became a statue hearing your name. Elsa wasn't around her, it was you. 😲 You have her freezing abilities.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Now use them on freezing the both them and their families.🤣🤣🤣🤣
Now over to my knock, knock joke.😆
Knock, Knock.
Whose there?
A former fiance.
Whose former fiance?
Madhu's former finace. The one who she left for the great Rishabh Kundra.
You know the man whose first wifey was Madhu's cousin.🤣🤣🤣
Now I would like to see the reactions from those families after that knock knock joke.🤣🤣🤣 I expect nothing less than an angry Madhu after that joke.🤣🤣 Hey, she might even slap him. 🤣 But I Always prefer when Madhu slaps RK.🤣🤣🤣 Maybe we can make an exception. 😆 Or maybe not. I have something different in mind. And you know my mind is. 🤪🤣
Okay Rohan comes after that knock knock joke, RK starts arguing openly with Madhu about she hiding all of this from him. Hopefully this will take place with both the families present and RK being somewhat drunk. He started drinking finding out that Madhu married him becuse of Sara. Well hello. She didn't marry you out of love. You were afterall her sisters husband. What do you expect Cowardly Lion? 🤣 That it was love at first sight and she was hoping that her sister dies so she could be with you? 😆 I Think he forgot the past due to his love for Madhu. 😆
Okay while a drunk RK argues with Madhu, Rohan gets frustrated on how RK behaves with his so called future Biwi. 🤣🤣 Starts arguing with RK. RK telling him not to interfere it's between his Biwi and him. Some insults gets throw a little here, a little there.🤣🤣🤣 And when both Rohan and RK gives one insult that effects Madhu that much. She slaps them both across the face. First Rohan and then RK.🤣🤣🤣 She then later informs RK the truth about caring for him and his family and have moved on in Life away from Rohan. But later, I don't know how she could possible say this without being a total hypocrite, if he doesn't trust her then it doesn't matter. She is leaving. She have lost enough in life and won't take any more insults towards her character or her upbringing. And to make one thing clear she won't ever be with Rohan. She will be alone, but will be known as Madhubala Rishabh Kundra. She is leaving this place. She apologizes to her families and goes up packs her bags says goodbye to her baby Sara. And heads towards the Airport. Yes Airport, she is afterall the Cowardly Lions wife, so she will take the first flight available to Australia.😆 After that it's an open book. I am fresh out of ideas.
I only wrote this due to the slaps. I want her to slap someone. And if possible for her to get some slaps in return.🤣🤣
An awesome update like always Di. 👏👏 By the way I was kidding about the death thing. Well you can kill any of them I really don't mind if you do. 😆 But when it comes to the knock knock joke and the slaps well there I was a bit serious. 😆 I really do want it to go down something like that. I want to some slapping among those three leads. Even though my Rohan doesn't deserve any slaps. Not yet anyway. 😆
This was one lengthy comment.😆 So enjoy reading it. Now you have something to read before getting that treatment.😆 And I'll see if I can finish off that story of mine soon. We all need a good laugh. Right?🤣🤣
Now over to the refrain in the song He had it coming. 😆 I won't post the entire song, cause it doesn't fit with this story.😆
She had it coming
She had it coming
She only had herself to blame
And don't think I have forgotten my hero Rohan. I honestly don't know where to start on commenting on him. So I'll just post a song called Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkel for him.😆
Madhu, you're breaking my heart
You're shaking my confidence daily
Oh, Madhu, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home

Madhu, you're breaking my heart
You're shaking my confidence daily
Oh, Madhu, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home
Come on home
Edited by Ni33 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
RK didnt listen the last part
misunderstanding again?
Awww my Madhu
Fabulous JOB di
all the best 4 ur treatment di
God bless u
Edited by noiseygirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
take care of your health dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...now what will happen RK came to know the truth...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Y cant rk listen the whole thing and then go ? Who asked him to get up in the middle of convo and this unecessarily created misuderstanding .now will he be able to understands madhus love for him noo .. .i think now he will act or behave very rudely with madhu so that she will go that rohan .acc to rohans pov i think he is right madhu cant call anything as hers !! I liked this person rohan .plzzz dont make him a villian ! Waiting for the next update take ur time and then write the next part !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg what an update !!
mindblowing shock to rk 😔

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