Swaron OS You are mine current track - Page 2

Trulyamazing wrk...mtlab full rnjoyment ...drunk sharon n her dialoges...waxing ...^^^^^...wow...mst tha..

What an os 👏
Just loved it to the core
U write brilliant os on current tracks
Plz do write more

nice story...if possible try to continue this story

First of all pardon me for commenting so late.
Thank you so much Varsh for writing this.
I wanted to read something emotional and you nailed it.
Loved how the whole OS was written and the detailing on so many things. Sharon's turmoil on the beginning was very well written. And Swayam's moment of epiphany too. I loved how you wrote Sharon the possesive person part.
Next I loved the fact you made Sharon drunk. Thank you so much for it. Its a wish to see Sharon drunk and shedding off her insecurities. I love how that part was written with the troubled Sharon and then the innocent Sharon. The morning part was amazing how Swayam played a prank on her. That was cute.
Loved the OS and once again thanks for writing it. :)

Amazing os!! totally loved it..