Yuvreen OS: Fault In Our Stars

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krupaa

@krupaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Heya freinds

I am getting bore so wrote an OS on phone and now posting it via phone only so plz errors ko neglect karna.

And be ready with your tissues coz this is emotional one.

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Yuvreen OS Fault in our stars

It was late evening and suvi was still in iris and working when yuvi came with a cup of cofee.

Y: topper le cofee pe tuje thoda better feel hoga

S: me theek hu yuvraj muje kya hua hai

Y: haa pata hai muje tu theek hai after all tu suvreen guggal hai tu to kabhi problems se bhaag nahi sakti. Lekin topper har baar theek hona jaruri nahi. Kabhi kabhi yeh kehna theek nahi hu bhi jaruri hota hai. Saari duniya se juth bol rahi hai atleast mujse to mat bol.

Me tuje samajta hu and tuje bahut ache se jaanta hu and tu abhi theek nahi hai.

So please yeh dikhawa band kar.

Listening to this she immediately got up and hugged him.

S: tum kaise samaj jaate ho yuvraj

Saying this she started crying in his arms and he just hugged her more tighty and let her vent out her pain.

After a while they broke the hug and and yuvi made her sat on couch.

S: yuvraj aise mere saath hi kyun hota hai har baar ganuji muje hi kyun itne problems dete hai. Nahi hu me itni strong nahi hu me theek nahi kar sakti har situation ka saamna.

Peechle ek hafte me itna kuch ho gaya ki samaj hi nahi aaraha kaise sabkuch sambhalu.

Mumma puppa puri tarah se tut chuke hai baby ki death ke baad.

Kisine socha bhi nahi hoga ki baby is tarah suicide kar legi. Yuvraj wo meri choti behe thi. Aise kya problem thi uski life me jo usne itna bada kadam uthaya.

Ek baar apni dii ko bataya bhi.

Yuvraj kyun usne mujse apni pareshaani share nahi ki. Kyun usne suicide...

She started crying more and he again took her in arms.

He knew this time suvi has broken down completely and only for her parents she was beahving strong.

Y: topper me jaanta hu jo tune khoya hai wo kabhi wapas nahi aasakta but this is life.

Agar yeh humari marzi se chalti to shayad is duniya me koi sad hota hi nahi.

They were still hugging each other when yuvi got a call and he became shocked listening to the call.

S: yuvraj kya hua kiska call tha

Y: wo wrong number tha

S: juth bolne ki jarurat nahi me theek hu ab plz batao kya baat hai

Y: koi baat nahi suvreen... chal raat bahut ho gai hai tuje gar chod deta hu.

S: yuvraj...

Y: suvreen plz abhi nahi baad me batadunga plz is waqt kuch mat puch

She agreed and they left iris. He dropped her back home and left.

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krupaa

@krupaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

As suvi entered her house she saw her puppa was packing bags and they were returning to kathgodam forever.

S: puppa aap log kyun wapas jaa rahe ho

P: hum nahi suvi tu bhi humare saath chal rahi hai humesha humesha k liye

S: kya ????

P: is shehar ne humse humari ek beti to cheen li ab hum apni dusri beti nahi khona chahte. Ek ladke ke pyaar me paagal hokar meri baby ne sucide kar liya ab me apni dusri beti ke saath yeh nahi hone dunga.

Isiliye me tumhare in rishto ke khilaf tha pyaar vyaar sab bakwaas hota hai.

S: i know aapka pyaar par se vishwas uth gaya hai but yuvraj aisa nahi hai wo kabhi muje dhoka nahi dega wo kabhi mere saath kuch galat nahi karega

P: baby ne bhi to yahi kaha tha ki vicky use dhoka nahi dega. Lekin dekha kya hua use apne pyaar me apni zindagi gawani padi. Ab bas bahut ho gaya thak chuka hu me is shehar se is bade shehar ne mera sab kuch cheen liya mujse. Pehli meri naukri fir meri izzat mera gar meri dono betiya aur ab meri patni bhi. Dekh apni maa ki taraf ek zinda laash ban gai hai wo baby ke jaane ke gum me. Isse pehle ki yeh shehar inhe bhi mujse cheen le me is shehar ko hi chod dena chatha hu.

S: par puppa meri job mera career yuvraj sab yahi hai me kaise...

P: isiliye to mene kaha is shehar ne mujse meri dono betiya cheen li.

Ek gante baad humari train ne ab aakhri faisla me tuj par chodta hu.

Saying this he left with loveleyjee.

Suvi called yuvi and asked him to meet her urgently.

Yuvi came to her house and saw her crying he went to her and hugged hr tightly.

Y: kya hua topper

She told him everything

Y: to ab kya faisla kiya tune.

S: me... me jaarahi hu. Me apne parents ko is haalat me nahi chod sakti. They need me now. Muje nahi pata ki me waapas kabhi wapasMumbai aabhi paungi ya nahi but for now muje jaana hoga.Apni family ke liye apne mummy puppa ke liye. I am sorry yuvraj

Y: mat bol sorry suvreen plz sorry mat bol. Tera faisla sahi hai galat to me hu.

S: kya bol rahe ho.

Y : topper wo phone mere gar se tha dad ke bussiness me unhe bahut bada loss hua and isi sadme se he got heart attack. Bhai ne kaha me gar wapas aajau lekin mene mana kar diya

S: kya???? Kyun

Y : kyunki is waqt tuje meri jyada jarurat hai and waha to meri puri family hai.

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krupaa

@krupaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Tune family aur pyaar me family ko choose kiya and mene pyaar ko.

Galat kiya na.

S: haaa bahut galat kiya. Socho aaj se jab 30 saal baad tum kisi problem me hue and tumhara beta aakar tumse yeh kahe ki "dad i cant help you coz my girlfriend needs me" to tumhe kaisa feel hoga. Wo pal tumhari life me naa aaye isi liye jaao apne dad ke paas

Y: jaaunga apne dad ke paas and sambhulanga unke business ko and unhe bhi us ek pal ke liye.

Jab aaj se 30 saal baad jab me kisi problem me hu to meri beti aise mere liye apna sab kuch gawane ko ready hogi. Us pal ke liye i ll go.

They hugged each other and cried.

After an hour they were on station on one side suvi train was there and on other yuvi.

Yuvreen were standing in between on the platform holding hands.

The train whisteled and they boarded their repective trains which started moving in opposte direction and yuvreen seperated.

Yuvreen in mind.

S: this is it... itni si hi thi humari kahani.

Y: shayad humare pyaar me hi kami thi isiliye to hum aaj yuh...

S: nahi humare pyaar me nahi humari kismat mai. Pyaar to humesha rahega. It was just

Fault in our stars.

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JustMySelf

@JustMySelf

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesum kdi 👏👏👏
ya kdi i loved d story sply those lines whr suvi tells wen thr son cums n tell sorry dad i cdnt cum bcoz my gf needed me ..ur take on life is so beautiful kdi i nevr thot of it b4 really ur right ur fabulous u know kdi u teach us often evn thru ur storys ..just like 2da i learnt sumthing new 🤗

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krupaa

@krupaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JustMySelf
awesum kdi 👏👏👏
ya kdi i loved d story sply those lines whr suvi tells wen thr son cums n tell sorry dad i cdnt cum bcoz my gf needed me ..ur take on life is so beautiful kdi i nevr thot of it b4 really ur right ur fabulous u know kdi u teach us often evn thru ur storys ..just like 2da i learnt sumthing new 🤗

Thanks a lot jimu

Glad u liked it.

It really feels great when someone says that i made them learn new things.

I always like to share my knowledge n learn smthng new frm others so i took teaching as a proffession n ur these words of appreciation means a lot 😃 🤗

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JustMySelf

@JustMySelf

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krupaa

Thanks a lot jimu
Glad u liked it.
It really feels great when someone says that i made them learn new things.
I always like to share my knowledge n learn smthng new frm others so i took teaching as a proffession n ur these words of appreciation means a lot 😃 🤗

u know kdi when we were hving exams last yr thr ws a grl called shalu sharma senior to us n everyday 4 black shirt wearing bulky man used to cum n stand b4 our scul gate..she said they r her bodyguards sent by her dad.bt d day our exam ended those 4 men were screaming at our scul gate n then police came.later we learnt that she borrowed a burkha n slipped out of scul right under d 4 black clothed men n eloped with her bf in bike 😲..ws she right or wrong i dnt know bt ur story making me wonder what if her children did d same n hw wd she feel then?

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krupaa

@krupaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JustMySelf

u know kdi when we were hving exams last yr thr ws a grl called shalu sharma senior to us n everyday 4 black shirt wearing bulky man used to cum n stand b4 our scul gate..she said they r her bodyguards sent by her dad.bt d day our exam ended those 4 men were screaming at our scul gate n then police came.later we learnt that she borrowed a burkha n slipped out of scul right under d 4 black clothed men n eloped with her bf in bike 😲..ws she right or wrong i dnt know bt ur story making me wonder what if her children did d same n hw wd she feel then?

I ll say what she did was definitely wrong.

These days youngsters failed to understand the meaning of love. People want to be in a relationship so that they can flaunt there partners n show themselves as cool n blah blah.

Love is such a beaitiful feeling

No one on this earth can truely love u than ur parents.

They love us frm the moment when they get d news we r cmng. They love us even bfr we have nt taken birth.

Their love n care is beyond payback and ditching them for some random person is not done.

Agree sometimes we do gt our true love in a relationship d way yuvreen got but when it cms to parents nothing else should matter.

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JustMySelf

@JustMySelf

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krupaa

I ll say what she did was definitely wrong.
These days youngsters failed to understand the meaning of love. People want to be in a relationship so that they can flaunt there partners n show themselves as cool n blah blah.
Love is such a beaitiful feeling
No one on this earth can truely love u than ur parents.
They love us frm the moment when they get d news we r cmng. They love us even bfr we have nt taken birth.
Their love n care is beyond payback and ditching them for some random person is not done.
Agree sometimes we do gt our true love in a relationship d way yuvreen got but when it cms to parents nothing else should matter.

agree kdi i think kdi ur d best daughter of this world ur so devoted to ur parents..i also feel d same way as u said..if u ask me whom u love more gods or parents..whom wd u chose between d two i wd say parents 1st then god evn if god gts angry with me 4 my answer i cnt help bt d truth is my parents r my 1st gods n then god cums ..evn gannu ji went arnd his parents treating them as his entire world so y n hw can god b angry ovr me 4 chosing parents ovr gods?😕

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: JustMySelf

agree kdi i think kdi ur d best daughter of this world ur so devoted to ur parents..i also feel d same way as u said..if u ask me whom u love more gods or parents..whom wd u chose between d two i wd say parents 1st then god evn if god gts angry with me 4 my answer i cnt help bt d truth is my parents r my 1st gods n then god cums ..evn gannu ji went arnd his parents treating them as his entire world so y n hw can god b angry ovr me 4 chosing parents ovr gods?😕

Ohhh best daughter i dont think so and der r many reasons for that which i cant tell here 😉

Coming to your choice between god and parents then ofcourse parents.

Even in bhagwad geeta krishna had said parents are your first god. Gannuji also said his parents are world to him.

God cannot be everywhere so he created parents.

Why would he be angry on choosing parents over him.

We all beleive in god and we say we got everything from him but in true sense our parents are the one that give us everything a good life strength motivation and many more.

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