Yuvreen OS: Fault In Our Stars

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wonderful peice of work krudi!

Really your thoughts are very great...that makes you an amazing person as well as an amazing writer...

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sujairohit

@sujairohit

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow very good story.liked it very much.

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian
wonderful peice of work krudi!
Really your thoughts are very great...that makes you an amazing person as well as an amazing writer...

Thanks a lot sahas

i am glad you liked it

it really means a lot 😃

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sujairohit
Wow very good story.liked it very much.

Thanks a lot jiji

glad you liked it

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yuvreenani

@yuvreenani

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

nice one :)
keep writing more OS

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: yuvreenani
nice one :)
keep writing more OS

Thanks a lot

Yes i will hopefully 😭

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautiful Story Krupa

So Amazingly written I loved it

So agree with Suvi morals glad she left Yuvi too she told him to go back to his parents...thats what I call true love not sacrifice

this is my favourite OS so far that u have written

Thank you for writing it nice to see a new story in forum after ages do write more Krupaa u should defo think about writing a blog where u can write about everything it will be so gd

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Beautiful Story Krupa
So Amazingly written I loved it
So agree with Suvi morals glad she left Yuvi too she told him to go back to his parents...thats what I call true love not sacrifice
this is my favourite OS so far that u have written
Thank you for writing it nice to see a new story in forum after ages do write more Krupaa u should defo think about writing a blog where u can write about everything it will be so gd

Thanks a lot anam

Glad you liked it

Agree true love is about sacrificing and what yuvreen did was indeed very correct.

Coming to blog honestly i dont know how to operate it and how to create it.

I am very poor in computers and internet 😭

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mizzle22

@mizzle22

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wonderful story..a true Kdi one..⭐️😊 n I mean all your stories are awesome and this one is also among them..

Loved the choice made by Yuvreen..of course parents are the ones that matter the most to us..

And who knows..if all goes well,they might eventually meet up,its not like there are no phones,email and fb..people needn't be tgether to be in touch..😊

But thats not what matters..what matters is that they chose their families, and what happens after that is upto the individual readers..that makes this story different.It has an open end..

Do write more..love your written work..😃😊

PS: also..hats off to you for posting this by phone..I have trouble even for making short comments..😆😳

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krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: mizzle22
Wonderful story..a true Kdi one..⭐️😊 n I mean all your stories are awesome and this one is also among them..
Loved the choice made by Yuvreen..of course parents are the ones that matter the most to us..
And who knows..if all goes well,they might eventually meet up,its not like there are no phones,email and fb..people needn't be tgether to be in touch..😊
But thats not what matters..what matters is that they chose their families, and what happens after that is upto the individual readers..that makes this story different.It has an open end..

Do write more..love your written work..😃😊

PS: also..hats off to you for posting this by phone..I have trouble even for making short comments..😆😳

Thanks a lot mizzie

Glad you liked it

Agree parents should always be first preference.

Yes nowadays its easy to keep a long distance relationship.

I know frm phone its difficult but i dint had my lappy with me when this idea stuck my mind so i just took my phone n strd typing and posted