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Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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plz check my last comment on page 99, CONGRATULATION U ALL SPECIAL AWESOME READERS HAVE BROUGHT THIS ORDINARY STORY TO 100TH PAGE , DIL SE THANK U ALL SO VERY MUCH FOR READING IT , LIKING IT N COMMENTING IT

~~ HUM MAR JAYENGE ~~

~~ CHAPTER -15 ~'MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI '~

{part -a}

They both were hugging each other , completely lost in each other's embrace. Their hug was symbolic of their togetherness , their immortal love , and their support.

Rey still hugging her say " I am sorry taani I m sorry if I crossed my limits , SORRY

Taani immediately broke the hug and say "shh reyy no need to be sorry , its ok , please aap mujhse sorry mat kahiye . acchhi tarah jaanti hun main aapko , aur samjhti hun rey ki aap mujhe kitna zyada pyaar karte ho .

Rey continued while looking in taani's eyes continuously " but I know taani I shouldn't cross my limits . actually I just couldn't control myself as I literally craved to see u , hug u .. kiss u and love u since u left me .

(he continued while some tears make way from his eyes again remembering the pain he had gone through last months and the emptiness and longing of love in his life since she left him )" bahut tadpa hun main taani bahut tadpa hun tumhare bina, taras gaya tha tumhari ek jhalak ke liye , tumhe dekhne ke liye , taras raha tha apni zindagi , apni jaan , apni taani ko gale lagake jee bhar ke rone ke liye ,taras gaya tha tumhe apni baahon main lene ke liye , bahut tarasa hun main tumhare sache pyaar ko aur uski kashish ko mehsoos karne ke liye taani bahut tarsa hun hun "

Taani had also tears in her eyes feeling the pain n craving of his love and feeling guilty of giving him so much pain .. she raise her hand to wipe his tears

He close his eyes feeling her love wiping his tears as well as pain .. he keep his hand over her hand on his cheek letting her to soothe him and wash away his pain

He open his eyes and say " my wounds and pains remain unhealed since you left me because only my taani's love and care can wash away my tears and pain but u were not with me . tum mere saath nahi thi taani , pata nahi kaise samjhaun main tumhe ki

~~ meri zindagi ke har pal ko .. zaroorat hai tumhari. har qissa , har pal , har yaad , har zarra, har lamha meri zindagi ka adhoora hai tumhare bina. adhoori hai tumhare bin ye zindagi meri , har khushi meri aur ye rooh meri .. I AM INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU , MY LIFE IS MEANINGLESS WITHOUT YOU , AND TRUST ME TAANI .. MY SOUL WILL BE LOST WITHOUT YOU

taani immediately keep her finger on his lips and nod negatively indicating him to not say like that while some fresh tears fell from taani's eyes and rey wipe them off and came close to her , kiss her tears with all his love while sucking her pain

she always get lost when he is close to her , some fulfilling wishes of love , fears , pains alongwith a little cute blush n shyness appear on her face at the same time and he too wish to get lost in her forever n ever . he just took her in his embrace ,hug her again not wanting to leave her even for a second .. taani also hug him back and say " I LOVE YOU REY"

rey " I love you too taani , I LOVE YOU FOREVER N EVER "

Taani say still hugging rey " sorry rey..and thank u so much "

Rey got a little confused by this gesture of taani and say " but why sorry and thanks ?? "

Taani " nahi .. kuch nahi .. vo bas aise he " {she hug him more tightly , and say in heart ~ sorry for my love rey which has always given you pain, suffering and sadness and thank you for your love rey which has always been a blessing to me .

thank u rey thank u so much for everything ,for coming to my life , for blessing me with your pure love , for being with me and supporting me always , I know thanks is not enough , but still thank u so much from the bottom of my heart }

Rey understood her feelings a little and smile a little hugging her tightly accompanying her in the understood silence of love where only love speaks without the need of words . he was very much relieved just to be with her , in the calming and soothing shadow of his true love taani . taani's heart was also happy being in rey's arms and feeling his pure love once again .

Taani suddenly felt like fainting n everything spinning around because of her disease so her grip on rey got so strong trying to hold him to not fall there . rey felt strange n asked " what happened taani , u ok na ?? " while holding her protectively

but she controlled herself to not worry rey and say " hmm " while resting her head on him for sometime loosening her grip a little n then slowly gathering strength she say breaking the hug reluctantly

" rey I am feeling dizzy , I want to sleep .. "

Rey understood and say "I am so sorry taani , I didn't even realize that its quite late and you should sleep now , I am so careless, plz forgive me n u should have also told me before na that u r feeling sleepy "

Taani say assuring him " its ok rey don't worry n plz don't say say sorry , I m ok , relax "
rey " chalo taani , u sleep now "

Taani " rey u go to ur room n take rest I will sleep after changing my clothes , u go now "

Rey says cutely like a kid " no I m not going anywhere ,.. I don't wanna leave u even for a second "

Taani was a bit shocked n surprised "what ? REYY , u have to go , I need to change my clothes "

Rey being naughty now " so what u can do that , I have not stopped u .. if u wish I can help u as well in that "

Taani's face was turning pink understanding his words

N she say slowly " rey please jao na aap "

Rey was just adoring her cute blushing face while looking at her intensely

Rey "no darling I am not going anywhere , n I will not leave u even for a single second "

Taani faking little anger " ok fine u stay here I m going to ma's room "

Rey say bit sadly " arree this is not fair "
taani " aap not fair , not fair karte raho , main jaa rahi hun "

n she take some forward steps while crossing him to go to her ma's room but again feel like fainting n so hold his arm with one hand while her other hand was on her forehead as she w as feeling like fainting { as there was nothing to hold on "

n rey immediately look at her , but he got worried as he saw her about to fall . he immediately turn and hold her by her shoulder

rey ask worriedly " taani are you ok ?"

taani " don't worry rey I am ok "

rey " what ok , see how weak you are , n were just going to faint again "

he take her to the bed and make her sit there and then get her a glass of water

rey " how are you feeling now jaan ? shall I call the doctor if you are not feeling well ? "

taani " no no rey I said na I am ok , just need rest , now you go please , I want to sleep after changing my clothes "

rey " ok fine I will stand at the corner turning to other side and you can change , don't worry I will not see anything pakka , you can trust me , but I don't want to go and leave you esp after seeing that how weak and ill you are "

taani say understanding him and his heart " ya I trust you rey "

rey " so tell me where are ur clothes I will get them "

taani " I will take them by myself rey don't worry, I am still alive and can walk " {she say that without realizing what she was saying but understood seeing rey's sad face with teary eyes"

taani " ok fine , I am sorry rey , aage se aise kabhi nahi kahungi , now no more tears please { rey melts and control his tears seeing her cute adorable face } .. and my clothes are in that almirah

rey go and get her the night clothes

and then he go and stand at the corner of the room and keep looking at wall while she change her clothes

she changed her clothes and still find him standing there looking at the wall

and she says " ho gaya rey , you can turn now "

rey turn and come to her " taani you sleep now"

taani " but aap ??????"

rey " main hmm .. {he look around to find something and there he find it . he go and bring a chair with him and keep it very close to left side of the bed }

rey say to a confused taani " you sleep now and I am going to sit here on this chair while adoring my sleeping beauty whole night "

taani was really touched but she care for him a lot so she says " rey are you mad or what , how can you sit here whole night hmm ?? "

rey " I can sit even on the FLOOR that too whole LIFE while seeing and adoring you my love "

taani keep looking at him unbelievably lovingly and he also kept looking at her .. they were caught in an intense eye lock again but rey broke the eye lock remembering taani's health and say " taani don't worry about me , you just sleep ... Trust me this is the best night as you are with me again my love .. it really feel happy , relaxing , and soothing to be around you "

taani was overwhelmed with his love and say " I love you rey I love you so very much ... "

rey " I love you too taani , I also love you so very much .. now sleep jaan , I am here only with you "

rey make her lie down on the bed and cover the quilt over her and come close to her face making her heartbeats a little faster and kiss on her forehead and get up and when he was turning to go and sit on the chair , he felt some hold on his hand , he look at his hand and saw taani holding his hand .. taani kiss his hand and say " I love you rey , I am blessed to have you in my life as my true love "

rey just blink his eyes with a small smile on his face and say " I am also blessed to have a forever soothing loving precious blessing like you taani , you are my jaan and I mean it .. I LOVE YOU MY TAANI , MY JAAN "

taani " I love you too rey but you come and sleep here { indicating on the right side of bed } , I want to sleep holding your hand , it feels safe"

rey smiles and ask naughtily winking her " you sure I sleep with you on the bed ?? "

taani smiles and say " hmm I TRUST YOU REY u can sleep here but for tonight only ..."

rey " ok boss as after somedays I am always going to sleep with you after our marriage {at which taani lowers her eyes feeling bit shy } but what if swayam , aunty and uncle may get angry .. no no I don't want to upset them and cancel our marriage I will sit on the chair only"

taani smiles and say " don't worry I will handle them and I trust you rey I know you will never cross your limits and I don't want you to suffer and sit on the chair whole night for me "

rey " but I have no problem in doing so taani "

taani " I have , I cant see you suffering because of me , I know you must be tired as well ,so you sleep here"

rey gets up on the other side of bed but don't take the quilt hesitatingly and just lie down seeing his taani and hold her hand in a forever silent promise of holding it forever and ever ..

taani gets up a little while rey was confused but she take one end of the quilt and cover it on him also and get back on her place ..

rey " thank you jaan "

taani just blink her eyes while looking at him saying silently " no need of thanks "

rey " light off kar dun jaan ?? "

taani nods in yes and he turn a little and switch off the lights .. taani's grip on his hand become a little tighter as he switch off the light .. he understood and turn back and look at her .. he was mesmerized for a moment as she was looking purely beautiful in the moonlight coming from the open windows .

rey softly asks " tumhe andhere se darr lagta hai kya jaan " taani reply softly and slowly " hmm vo thoda sa jab se life ko khone ka ehsaas hua hai , darr lagta hai ki ye andhera hamesha ke liye na ho jaaye "

rey was feeling bad and bad feeling her more and more pain

but he say " nahi jaan ye ANDHERA BAS KUCH HE WAQT KA AUR HAI USKE BAAD EK KHOOBSURAT SUBAH KHUSHIYON KE SOORAJ KE SAATH PYAAR KI ROSHNI KE SAATH NAYI UMEEDON KE SAATH TUMHARA , HAMARA INTEZAAR KAR RAHI HAI .. and darna kyun tum to meri brave strong taani ho na meri jaan ho na to phir no fear and no tear my dear and ab to tumhara rey bhi tumhare saath hai , main tumhe kabhi kuch nahi hone dunga , just trust Krishna ji and our most powerful immortal pure love . and dekho { indicating at the moon visible from outside the window} ISS MOON KI MOONLIGHT KI TARAH HAMARA SACHA PYAAR BHI HAR ANDHERE KO MITA DEGA , HAMEIN SAHI RASTA DEKHAYEGA , AUR HAMEIN HAMARI MANZIL TAK LE JAYEGA "

he keep his other hand on her face while holding her one hand assuring her that he is with her always

rey " I love you jaan and I am always with you sweetheart "

taani " I love you too rey "

there was peace .. peace of love ..there was calmness and relief because of love in their hearts ... yes the air was also filled with love , their immoprtal love for each other , moon and stars were also shining even more brightly than before . They were also smiling along with Krishna ji seeing the pure love of two pure souls..

{ friends I m taking this story to a little faster track as I think its really going very very slow and I wanna show some other special track that's why not writing everything in detail otherwise this story may never complete lolz }

{part - b of ch-15 'MUJHE TERI ZAROORAT HAI }

AFTER 2 DAYS

rey was asking this to an unknown on the road while showing him a photo in the mobile - have you seen this girl ??

unknown man - no

then he rush to another man and ask the same but again no , then to another woman but still the answer was no , .. no .. no .. no.. no one has seen her ...

rey s eyes were getting wet by now with so much worry , love and care

rey to that photo - where are you taani???? Where are you my love ???

meanwhile swayam came to him and ask " kuch pata chala taani kahan hai ?? "

rey - nahi , tujhe ??

swayam - nahi

both were so worried for taani , so many questions and bad thoughts running in their mind that where has taani gone and what has happened ?? is she fine or not ?? what if something bad happened to her ?? is her health ok or not ?? .. god so many questions but no answer , only worries , fears and helplessness in both of their eyes , hearts and minds

sometime life bring us to a point where everything seems shattering and there is no way out ..

rey and swayam say together with the only hope of god ji in their hearts - hey Krishna ji please help us and give our taani back to us and please keep her safe wherever she is

rey with some tears of pain and love in his eyes " mujhe mere pyaar se milva do Krishna ji please mujhe mere pyaar se milva do , I promise I will never leave her for a second also, I will take proper care of her pakka , plz mujhe meri jaan se milva do "

swayam also say with wet eyes" plz give my nanhi pari back to me Krishna ji plz please meri pyaari behan taani ko uske bhai ke paas vapis bhej do plz Krishna ji please accept this hearty request of a brother who love her angel sister immensely "

~~~ to be continued ~~~~

friends plz check my last comment on page 99 ,

i have not proofread this update so avoid mistakes n sorry if i disappoint anyone , i know its not at all good and short also , i was not going to update but since u

all were waiting so i had to update

and thank u all for all ur precious comments n waiting so

much for this story's update ,

i will surely try to reply u all as soon as i get well

PLEASE DO LIKE AS WELL AS COMMENT IF U REALLY LIKE THIS UPDATE AND WANT ME TO UPDATE NEXT PART FAST 😉😛 }

stay tuned to know where is taani and what happened in

those 2 days

precap - rey gets a call from unknown ... suspense 😛
Edited by chinudolly - 10 years ago
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yHy I m second one to comment
abhi keloye res
pata nhi kab unres krjngi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Send PM soon 😡

Unres before PM :/
Beautiful prt I luv TaaRey luv & convo rey did
Not wanted to leave taani aww baby taani trust
rey & rey was Ready to sleep on chair with taani
Luv tht taani ask rey to sleep with her on bed luv tht
Rey is always thr for his taani be it dark sun or anything
It's so pure & bless luv it but whr taani went I am feeling
Not gud I hope rey find her soon & waiting for TaaRey marriage
Thanks for update & do try to update Jaldi Jaldi plzz request hai
Edited by raddhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update moni...

rey is so caring...loved the update so much...

but precap...plz update soon.
Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 10 years ago
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awww taarey talks awsm taarey little romamces sweet or taani kha gayab ho gaye plZz part update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome updt...
touched by Rey's caring...
love taarey's immense and pure love for each other...
updt soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part a was amazing
luvd it bt part b ws scary
.just hope taani will be fine
nothing happened with her
egarly waiting for next part
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what an update, superb superb
taarey's true love. very beautifully written.

waiting for this since long, finally got it.

precap is scary, where is taani?? 2 days
suspense.

please update soon.

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