Gotta be you (FF)(Part4-pg5-Updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Plzzz continue it soon its really nyc
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Love it! Continue really soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is just fabulous
cute lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4:

Scene 1:

Ghulam:Are begum Aaliya kaha hai?

Shabana:are who toh us park mein gayi hain...

Kehke gayi ki taazi hava khane jaa rahi hai

Ghulam:Achaa aur yeh Zain miyan kahan hai...

Shabana:Are who te yeh raha...moves around to show Zain but he was not there...Are abhi to yahi tha...

Shabana gets a message...

Zain: Thanks phoops...aaliya ka pata batane ke liye...

Main chala apni mehbooba ke paas meri doosri mehbooba...

Thanks

Shabana:Chal badmash

Scene 2:

Aaliya reaches the park and sees some boys trying to rape a girl.

Aaliya comes and slaps that boy.

Aaliya:Tumhe tameez nahi hai kya ki ek ladki se kaise baat karte hai...tameez mein raho warna abhi tumhe jail mein daal dungi.

Boys gives a signal to other boys and they come and make a circle around aaliya.

Aaliya:Dekho mere paas mat aayo...

Boy:Are aapse hum tameez sikhni hai...Touches her cheek

Makes her feel uncomfortable

Boy from back: Seekhangi na madam and takes way her duppatta

Aaliya is now scared.

She has tears in her eyes.

Aaliya:Hatooo yahan se...

Boy from side:Are madam abhi saari tameez kaha seekhi hain

And tears her koorti from the arm.

She shouts loud but no one even turns towards her.

Aaliya:ZAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Scene 3:

Zain is walking around the pack little far from aaliya.

When suddenly he hear her voice

"Bachaoo ZAIN!!!"

Zain:Yeh...yeh toh aaliya ki awaaz hain...

Aaliya...Aaliya

He Started running and saw what the boys were doing with her

Suddenly al the boys heard his voice.

Zain:Tameez seekhni hai...aao main seekhta hoon...

He punches one on his face,

One in his stomach,

Kicks all of them out.

Zain comes and takes aaliya's face in his hand.

Zain:Aaliya...aaliya tum theek toh hona...

Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to?

Maine tumhare bina nahi jee sakta...

Maamu ki bhanji ke bina Maamu ke bte ki kahani adhoori hai...

I LOVE YOU!!

Aaliya:I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!

After saying the following word both had a passionate hug.

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Late ho rahi hoon isliye itna hi

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"Jis mohabbat mein deewangi na ho...

who mohabbat hi kya? "

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
read all d parts
it was really awesome
loved it
pls cont ASAP !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Wow awsm story
Read all da chaps
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Vry nycly written plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was really good, and best of luck for your exams, do well 😊

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