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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: DDC1
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What's happening? On screen romance providing garam garam inspiration?

Paro in control, heady, sexy OS. Where is my thanda paani when I need it.

LOL After today's epi. I may never have to write another hot OS but now I am all inspired and then some! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: anisa79
Hot, hot! Only if it would happen in the show. Loved it!

I'll take what we had today! 😃 It was so good.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Omg... That was indeed so hot hot update... Loved it thoroughly .. Though it had not many dialogues but after reading it.. One cn know there. Is no need for that.. U r v good writer,

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mauaa
Omg... That was indeed so hot hot update... Loved it thoroughly .. Though it had not many dialogues but after reading it.. One cn know there. Is no need for that.. U r v good writer,

Thank you. I know.. I really have issues writing dialogue. Its so difficult for me. I can see the scene and what I want to come across but I feel awkward writing the dialogue. Something to work on for me... lol.

Thank you again.