In The Eyes Of The Beholder~2~ Chapter 13, Pg 73, June 4, 2016

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Thanks Laxmi for this wonderful banner



Thanks people for giving such a wonderful response to Hades, his Papa And Mamma 😆
And for bringing this story into the second thread.
Love you guys.
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Some facts about the story:

Chapter 1 is set in the present.
Present day Geet is 29 years old.
Maan is 31.

Chapter 2 onwards the story is set 11 years in the past. During their college days.

Geet is 18
Maan is 20


They are young and their characters are just setting in. Maan is going to be a completely different man in the future.
Likewise Geet is going to be a changed woman.

I hope you will enjoy the journey of these characters and their growth as they find themselves.
But will they find each other is the question?😉
And if they do, how and what will their circumstances be?

To find out, I hope you will continue reading
"In The Eyes Of The Beholder"

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Happy Independence Day Maaneetians!




Hi Nisha
Sorry for the late comment
So finally your lappy gave up on u
Coming to the update...Maaneet on Hades ...going to her hostel...Geet happily chirping away ...suddenly he hears her cursing ...he wonders if it is him but she looks so shocked when he asks her that he realises it is not him ...she stops him abruptly, gets down and walks away...he is confused with her behaviour ...he starts his bike and decides to head to the cafe ...after half an hour he realises he has Geet's ice tube with her artwork with him ...he makes a u turn and happily goes back to the spot where he dropped her ...but when he gets there she is sketching people in the roadside park ...he spots her in midst of a mostly male crowd ...one guy removes his shirt ...throws money at her ,passes crude comments and forces her to sketch him ...Maan was blazing with fury ...he tried to be polite but the creepy guy was asking for a fist in his face badly ...he got more than he asked for from Maan ...he was saved by the cops whistle Maan takes Geet and runs from there...not because he is scared but for the sake of his Mom and his love for her ...they sat down on the steps of a an old church ...Geet clutches his injured hand...he asks her to let go and she squeezes it again ...he shrieks in pain ...she cries seeing his hand and remembering the abandoned Hades ......Maan is shocked after all that he has done she values his bike more than him ...but the way she nurses his hand with so much love and care makes him all ...he feels soft cotton and sees it is one of her misspelt T-shirt ...he is all happy thinking it is a batman T-shirt ...but to his horror it has a sexy Catwoman figure on it ...he tries to give it back but her pleading face stops him.....he asks her why she got down from the bike to sketch and that too at a place like that...her answers showed she did not want to bother a friend who has already done so much for her...while he is thinking about what she said ...she asks him to look at the full moon ...she dreamily asks him so u know what i feel when i see the moon ...she says it makes her feel hungry and starts giggling seeing his shocked face...he thought she will say something romantic...and here she is licking her lips looking at the moon ...talking as if it can be eaten with bread. ,butter and gobbled down like a burger ...Maan for a minute is like and they both burst into laughter ...then he realises the real reason behind her growling stomach and sudden sketching...she had no money ...her thoughts and actions show her pure soul ...he is all in awe of this angelwith a big heart...finally he agrees to wear the T-shirt and she gives him a big hug ...friends again they keep bickering and bantering...have a happy weekend Nisha ...thank u for the awesome update...


Thank You Ratna so much for this picturesque comment. You have no clue how many times I have gone over and it and LOL'ed😆

M absolute favorite has to be this one though. It is absolutely perfect.


🤣🤣

Your comments always bring colorful joy to my thread.😳
You are such a darling.
Thanks for being here Ratna
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1



Nisha, I so love this madcap girl with her huge heart😃

Diez taked the cake for putting on that t-shirt finally.

I literally had to hold my sides when I found out what it was🤣

Gorilla with a granite jaw deserved so much more😡

Thanks for updating🤗


She is young, but not so carefree.
There is a lot more to her than meet's the eye.
I hope you will like where I am heading with this story😃

Thanks Avi jaaneman for always being here and thap thaping on my thread.🤗
If not for that I think I might have never been motivated to trouble my fingers beyond typing comments on my favorite threads.😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

i just love ur ff its soo damn funny every time I read a chapter I just cant stop laughing geet is sooo cute and funny 😆🤣


Thanks. I am glad you can relate to my whacky sense of humor😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

beautiful update dear...loved it...😊


Thanks😃


Originally posted by: Deelight

nyyyc update!

loved it..

the moon part was fantastic😆


Glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: -Orchid-

hhahahah Geet s damn funny...can't stop laughing
poor Maan 😆
awesome funny update...loved it
continue soon..thanks for Pm

||*Happy Independence Day*||


Thanks buddy.
You are happy, so I am happy😆


Thanks😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: punam2712

LOVED THE UPDATE

GEET IS HILARIOUS
AND MAAN IS FALLING FOR HER WHILE SHE IS UNAWARE ABOUT HIM AS A MAN
HE REALISED THAT SH EWAS STARVING
BUT LOVED THE IDEA OF EATING THE MOON WITH BREAD AND JAM

Glad you liked it Punam. Next time you are hungry, you can try imaging it.😆
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Originally posted by: fict

Lovely update. I just love this Geet more with each update. Truly unique. Maan is also awesome. He wore the t shirt finally


Thanks and I am very glad that you find it unique.😃

Originally posted by: idunno

LIGHT HUMOUR OF GEET AND MAAN,BOTH HAS VEY BIG HEART maan didnt like geet scatching that guy feel possessive about her so he has developed some feeling in him.love tham update soon


Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it.😃

Thanks😉

Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

catwoman tee for Maan lol

Only Geet can make him do that

Funny updt


Glad you liked Geet's whackiness
True that. Even Man doesn't know what he will agree to next.😆
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Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Love You Nisha ji for Another Nas Phaad (MindBlowing) Hilarious Update 😆 🤣
When she was cursing her hunger n got off the bike I thought it was some other Problem 😆
But She is a Piece 😆
Omg that T.shirt 🤣 🤣
Batman t.shirt with the body of catwoman 🤣
I want to imagine him in that tee Lakshmi plz can u make it possible 😉 😆
Chaand ko dekh ke bhook kisko lagti hai omg that ws something new 😆 😆
Maan ke dil me Kuch.Kuch.Ho.Raha.Hai 😳 😉
Hats Off to u Nisha ji for this Wonderful Story 🤗


Nas Phaad🤣
Naya word sikha maine.😆

I was waiting for somebody to think that Geet is having that problem. You did. does that girl ever do normal things though😆
When I am writing about her, I have to always think the situation in 2 different lights. First, ki normal insaan kaise sochega aur phir yeh ladki kaise sochegi😆

Abhi ke liye T-shirts ka quota khatam😆

He will definitely make an appearance in that T-Shirt. It is absolutely perfect for the story. Par abhi nahi it will be in their future😉

I am the idiot who looks at the moon and feels like taking a bite out of it. Isiliye ye idea Geet ke dimag mein daal diya😆

Thanks Sheen for being here.🤗


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Originally posted by: Luvforever

Aww... Dis update was super cute Di... Maan & his concern for his friend & geet & her amazing ideas... Bt seriously hunger to make people do things which dey don't want to oderwise... Jitna iss geet ko janno utna uspe pyar aata hai & mystery bhi badh jati hai... Maan is a swthrt... He did put up a T-shirt at d end... Thank u for d update... :)


Thanks dear.
Hunger does not make for a good bed partner and people do end up doing anything and everything to avoid going to bed with this partner.😊

I am glad you are enjoying this portrayal of Geet and Maan.😃


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Originally posted by: FamenandGlory

This Geet is a gem😳 she has a heart of gold , she gave all her expenses to those children for the t-shirts . She is so clear in what she wants & truly that's commendable . Seeing the moon & wishing to eat that at first sounded amusing but the reason for it was really really touching 😭
Maan saved her & he is getting smitten by this crazy adorable girl every moment 😳
Beautiful update👏


It's heartening to know that you guys are appreciating Geet's idiosyncrasies. When I first started writing this story I was not sure what kind of response this Geet and Maan would get. I still feel that not man
y can relate to this Maan and Geet.
But those who do, like you, really have fallen in love with these characters along with me and for that I am really grateful. For your appreciation of these out of the norm characters has given me a chance to write further about them😃
Thanks 😃

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