In The Eyes Of The Beholder~2~ Chapter 13, Pg 73, June 4, 2016 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

I always used to enjoy Geet's craziness in each update !

But this update shows Geet in different light, though there is craziness but it reflects her pain and loneliness.
May be I'm wrong here, but this what I felt when I read it.
As the title, In the eyes of the beholder, it says Geet.

It up to the the one who reads how they see Geet, one can say she is crazy and one can say she loner and fighter.
The moon and Tee-S part sounds crazy but there is deep and inner meaning to her each word.

And Maan, well he wants to ignore her but he can't stop himself from thinking about her, and finding chance to spend time with her.
He clearly understood her and acting as a friend and supporter than showing pity on her.

Very nice chapter.


Thanaks Dia.😃
I am glad that you can see what I am slowly bringing to Geet's character. Yes there is a world of loneliness beneath all that craziness.
The title is about the both of them and how they look at each other and finally how they see each other.😉

They are two lost souls gravitating towards each other, but will they find each other, if so how is what the story about😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: priya111111

oh my god yeh geet kya karrahi hai beech sadak par aur dekho maan ki kaan aur dimaag mein se smoke kaise nikal rahi hai ghusse ki wajah se😆sach mein geet kitna pagal hai, dekho maan se kya kya karwarahi hai 😆😆😆

finally police se bachkar bhaag aaye yeh dono😆😆maan tho fida hogaya geet ki baatein sunnkar😳😳😳how she is helping that poor children by buying t shirts.

ab finally maan ki baari aagayi hai t shirt pehnne ki😆😆😆poor boy t shirt half dekh kar khush hogaya tha chalo ab letters sab teek hai . par asli jhatka tab mila jab wo neeche ki picture dekha tho🤣🤣


kya karega ab siwayi t shirt pehnne ki par uski shart hi bohut mazedaar hai,ki geet ko aankhein band karke usko t shirt pehna hai😆


Hunger drives people to do strange things and Geet toh strangeness ki queen hain.

He is dead scared of Geet as fr as his body is concerned. She almost considers it her properrty and behaves accordingly😆

Woh dodno toh police se bhaage par bechara Hades kidnap ho gaya hain.

Ab aagey aagye dekhiye hota hain kya.😆

Thanks Priya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Anny90

When she told him about moon.First i think of her as crazy head..but then the logic behind it.😲😲

after reading it,i am shocked..


Glad you are enjoying this story with a different flavor😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Lovely update

Maan started to drop Geet but she asked him to drop in the middle
She held her tummy and cursed someone but I understood imedietly that she was hungry
when Maan came back and saw crowd..that time I was scared as I thought that Geet fainted due to hunger but thank God she was trying to earn money to satisfy her hunger
Her idea to divert her mind from hunger to eat the full moon was really very touchy
And finally Maan understood the reason for her sudden urge to pain.
Geet is really a gem and has a very soft and pure heart
Missed Hades in this update
I have typed this comment from the phone...so ignore the mistakes
Update soon nisha


Arrey waah. Hats off to you for getting that she was hungry😃
I am really really glad you guys are enjoying this different characters of Maan and Geet. They are not the typical arrogant Maan and the normal Geet. They are a little screwed up, a little messed up. Perhaps a little more like the real us than the fairy tale characters of movies and books 😊

So glad to have you here Rashmi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 10: That one was such a sweet update... blossoming friendship with some deeper feelings being awakened. 😉

Loved his unconscious realization - Her eyes are the actual window to her brain and all that leads to the confusions. 👏
I think that is the gist of this story nahi Doc?😉
Geet is a sweet ❤️ ... very pure at heart just like the Moon, She too has shortcomings and depressions within her but then she can win over anyone who watches her or knows her for few hours (even one who tried to be at a distance from her due to her so called "weirdness" ). She can be very creative and talented but what's best about her is that she takes everything in her stride and lives her life as if she's so blessed to live a life, whereas there are so many who just keep crying over the silliest things in their lives. This girl has superb spirit in her. 👍🏼 A very strong character Nishaji.
You have summed her up perfectlyin a few words. Doc you are supposed to play magic with the scalpel, not words😲
Bit you toh ekdam double edged sword ho.😆

Maan too is equally gaining his footing with her ... from one who just detested being in her company to one who lighted up just finding an excuse to go meet her, to imagine some dreams ..😳😆 to being her protector and also one who for her sake wore that cat/bat woman t-shirt. 😆

He has to grow up so much more. His character is going to go through such a long metamorphosis.
I hope I will be able to bring it out right and build a strong character😊

Both sets of parents have sparked my curiosity... Especially Geet's ... waiting for more info there.
A piece of the puzzle going to be solved in the next chapter😃

Continue soon... loved this special long truly wabbit update ❤️

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Thanks Onir for being here.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

fab update! Geet is extraordinary! Maan saves her! update soon! Well written

Thanks😃

Shukriya😉


Thanks buddy😃


Thank you😉




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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Gosh.. Geet n her antiques.. girl is really mad.. that hairy creature uske peechehi pad gaya.. but maan reached there.. gosh they rum away from police.. shadi ke liye bhi bhgenge shayad.. 😆😛 Diez has seen one more good side of Geet today..


Thank you Tejju Bai😉
Aise hi kar doon kya?
Aga rinki kabhi shaadi hui toh runaway bide and groom ban bhi sakte hain yeh dono pagal😆
He has seen one good and too many crazy sides I think.
Par chalo ek pagal ko ddosra pagal hi smbhal sakta hai😆
Glad you liked it Teju.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Desparately waiting fr an update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Susegad


Shukriya😛

Thanks 😃


Glad you are enjoying this story with a different flavor😉


Thanks for reading and liking this story😉



Originally posted by: impoojaverma

though she had a very different approach to everything in life but she had a beautiful heart.

awesome part

Thanks Pooja for liking and understanding this character of mine😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Susegad


Arrey waah. Hats off to you for getting that she was hungry😃
I am really really glad you guys are enjoying this different characters of Maan and Geet. They are not the typical arrogant Maan and the normal Geet. They are a little screwed up, a little messed up. Perhaps a little more like the real us than the fairy tale characters of movies and books 😊

So glad to have you here Rashmi.
🤗


To guess the character's mind is easier for me than others..arrey main bhi writer hoon Megha
😉 Aur utni buri writer bhi nahin ki dusre writer kya kahna chahta hai ye bhi na samajh paaun
I m more happy to be here than you for having me here🤗

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