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Posted: 10 years ago
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A/N : I'm back with the second part, guys. It's a heart-wrenching one. But I hope u like it...

But before reading guys, I want to clear a misconception. Actually, I'm receiving pms saying that I'm neglecting my old writings or leaving them. So I just wanted to say that its nothing like that my darlos. Its just that I'm having my exams so just running out of time. I'm not leaving any of my writing. I'll update them soonish as my exams are ending...

PART- 2




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"What is this power the dead have over the ones they leave behind? Its strange and beautiful and frightening, this deathless love that human being continue to feel for the ones they've lost."

{ Sangu Mandanna }




The bike stopped infront of the " Blue View Palace" restaurant.

Sanyukta got off the bike and smiled. She was near her destination.

"Let's go inside", she said in an excited tone.

"I'm not getting anything. Why are we here? Where is my surprise? And most important when will u say I...", he was cut off in the middle only.

"Take a breath sweetheart and all ur questions will be answered inside. So now let's go...", smiled Sanyukta.

Yes. She had managed to hide the fact, all through the ride despite his thousand and one questions, that she had arranged a special date for them in the restaurant where she would tell him the most awaited words- I LOVE YOU RANDHIR ALWAYS AND FOREVER.

"Ok, Ma'am. But let me first park this bike. U go. I'm coming," replied Randhir.

"No way that I'm going inside alone. U go nd park the bike. I'm waiting here only for u", Sanyu stated.

"Fine, as your wish, darling...", he winked at her and kick-started his bike.

"Jaldi ana...I'm waiting...", she smiled.

Randhir also smiled back and rode off to park his bike on the opposite side of the road in the parking lot.

After a few minutes, Sanyukta saw him coming back. He was crossing the road but the road was so busy that he was not being able to cross the road. He was again and again looking at both sides. Luckily, there was a red light and he hurriedly began to cross the road.

He was at the middle of the road when suddenly he heard Sanyukta shouting.

He stopped there only in amazement as he heard what she was shouting. He looked up and saw a smiling Sanyukta beaming at him from the opposite side of the road.

She was shouting...

" I LOVE..."

CRASH !!!!!!!!!

A truck recklessly ran across the road breaking the traffic.

A young figure was flung in the air and the truck ruthlessly ran over it.

A large crowd gathered around the figure which was now lying in a pool of blood. The whole road got jammed.

There Sanyukta was rendered speechless. She was here trying to surprise Randhir but what's happening? Did just an accident took place? That also infront of her eyes? She was way too shocked to register everything happening around her.

But suddenly something struck her. And her legs started to weaken.

Where is Randhir?

He was crossing the road, isn't it?

That means.

No, its impossible.

Nah.

"Nooo...Randhir...r...r...", she screamed.

Sanyukta breathlessly ran towards the fallen figure. She dashed into the crowd and came near the figure.

Her soul left her as she saw the face which was smashed but she could recognize this face with blind eyes also.

As realization struck her, her legs trembled and she collapsed on the road.

Everything blacked out.

Whispers ran through the crowd...

"Tch...Tch...It was a total hit and run case..."

A girl was standing on a cliff which had gone deep into an abyss. Her eyes were fixed on the setting sun over the horizon. Her eyes were swollen, red, maybe bcuz she cried a lot. Her face was pale, emotionless, as if she was dead and just holding on her body like an apparel.

Yes, she was Sanyukta. Sanyukta Aggarwal.

"You left me. But why? Why did u leave me? Why...y...y...?" she screamed to someone, who could no more hear her voice, for he was already gone, leaving her alone.

Fresh tears trailed down her cheeks. Her legs trembled and she fell on her knees, crying miserably. Her head hung low.

But soon she wiped her eyes and looked into the sky, as if trying to find the face, which she knew she couldn't touch anymore, couldn't feel anymore, couldn't see anymore, for he was gone, leaving her all alone.

"You left me bcuz I didn't say I LOVE U? But why? U knew the truth. Didn't you?" She was shivering. She was not being able to handle this pain any longer.

" I was going to surprise you, Rd but you went away even before seeing it once, hearing me once. Why...why...y..?" She shouted but no one was there to hear her and the one she wanted to tell was gone much before.

"She was shaken, startled, terrified. Hours ago, she was with the love of her life and now with a blink of her eyes, everything shattered. Her whole world crashed down even before she could realize. Why such cruelty God? Why is destiny so ruthless?

" I was standing there only, Randhir. Everything happened before my eyes and I...I couldn't do anything, Rd. I failed. I failed to save u...I falied...", she covered her face and cried, cried till there was no tears left.

"I stood there numb and everything finished. I lost u, Randhir. I lost you...", she sobbed but no tears fell. Her eyes were dry now.

"My everything burnt into ashes, Randhir and all happened in a bat of eye. In a flash, everything got blurred," she went on.

"You were...were...spot dead, Randhir...r...,"she broke down again.

""How...h...how could God do this to us, Randhir? He snatched you away from me. Why?" She demanded answers, maybe from the divine to reason with her fate. But fate is always unpredictable, ruthless and too cruel to imagine.

"But I'll not let destiny win. Love has to win. Our love has to win and I'll make it the winner."

She rubbed her eyes, wiped her tears and stood up with trembling legs, badly trying to balance her shaking body on them.

""My life without you? No way, sweetheart. I'm yours. If there is no rank 1, what will rank 2 do being there?"

She spread her arms, inhaled some fresh air, maybe taking her last breath, may be enjoying the last bliss of this beautiful world, maybe living her life for the last time.

"I'm coming to you Randhir. And I want to scream a few words to let this world hear..." and she smiled and stood on her toes and bent over the abyss and let herself fly.

A few words echoed in the air as her figure flew without wings...

" I LOVE YOU RANDHIR ALWAYS AND FOREVER..."

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" Death cannot kill what is not measured by time. I'll love you forever and when I die, whatever part of me is left, will love you, far beyond eternity..."

< unknown >

Ok, finshed but I'm crying😭...





With Love
Rakhi😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Me first 😆
Firstly it ws heart touching

Sanyu nd rd both dying

Bt i think dat ws d grace of ur stry 👏

Plzz pm me ur stories

Love
Sanya 😛
Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
i dont hav words to describe this... soo touching...
tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
This was just soo good!
Love never dies..
It was really emotional to read and Loved the paragraph after his death at the cliff.. Sanyu's self talk was just so emotional and touched my heart..

Thanks for PM
Running short of time..
Cont. Writing such good stuff..

Love,
Sheetal
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Hey darloo u made me cry 😭

Update ki pm dkhte hi mri heartbeat bhaad gi ti I sumhow cntrl myself n start reading it

Bt slowly my heart start getting heavy

Itna beautiful bliss tragedy me change ho gya

Poor sandhir the most beautiful night turned into the worst nightmare
Sanyu use bol b ni pyi Jo vo hamesha se suna chta 😭

Yr it was really heartwrenching sweety u r really so talented sanyu k emtns beautifully portray kia she must be shattered

Few days back mene fb pr b ek hit n run case pr os padha tha
Really kisi r ki glti dusro ko zindagi bhar k gum de jti b unki lyf chin lti h

Sanyu ne apni ankhon k samane apne rd ko kho dia


Bt i m at least dey will be together if not in dis world den sum where else

Death can never separate two luv ones

Keep writing my sweeto bt agli br happy wala no Rona wona


Keep smiling darloo 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
First of all love the banner
Beautiful
Coming to the story
It was just emotional
Beautildut written
Sad but beautiful
They both died at the end
Lovely ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
this part just superb,awesome,lovely,lovely,lovely,
beautiful,heart touching,emotional,part.
fab di.thanx for pm me.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Sorry sorry sorry..
M so late now..
That was so emotional.
Death is something on which no one has control..
Loved it dear..
U write so good .
I always knew u write good.. For obvious reasons..
Love u rakhi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no wrods can describe this works...
i'm spellbound...
couldn't find appropriate word for this work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
RES
UNRES
Hey! Rakhi
I'm speechless to describe
It's really touch my heart
Love it
Keep it up
Thanks for pm
Love Bushra
Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago

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